1、专题17高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”理想、梦想故事梦想每个人都要有的，毕竟万一实现了呢？在实现的道路上一定要结交坚持这个朋友01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。For many years, I had a recurring dream. I was a little girl again, rushing about, trying to get ready for school.“Hurry, youll be late for school,” my mother called to me.“I am hurrying, Mom! What
2、did I do with my books?”Deep inside I knew where the dream came from. It was about some unfinished business in my life. As a kid, I loved everything about school. I loved books, teachers, tests and homework. Most of all I longed to someday march down the aisle to receive my diploma. That seemed more
3、 appealing even than getting married.But at 15, I had to drop out because my parents couldnt afford tuition. My hope of getting a diploma was dead, or so I thought. Pretty soon, I married and had three children, and I thought: “There goes my diploma.”Even so, I wanted my children to be educated. But
4、 Linda, our youngest child, had juvenile arthritis in her hands and knees, which made it impossible for her to function in a normal classroom. I felt sorry for her and I didnt want her to live her life with regret. I didnt give up hope of her being back to school in some way.One day, I saw an ad in
5、the newspaper for evening courses. “Thats the answer,” I said to myself. Linda always feels better in the evening, so Ill just sign her up for night school.Linda was busy filling out enrollment forms when the secretary said: “Mrs. Schantz, why dont you come back to school?” I laughed: “Theres no way
6、! Im 55!” But he persisted, and before I knew what I had done, I was enrolled for classes in English and crafts. “This is only an experiment,” I warned him, but he just smiled. So, I told myself to try for just a semester and to see if it would work. Anyway, my dream was still there in my heart.1. 写
7、作词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1：It was exciting to go to school again but_Paragraph 2:Linda and I saw each other through the time._【答案】Paragraph 1:It was exciting to go to school again but it was no game. Sitting in a classroom full of kids was awkward, even if most of them were respectf
8、ul and encouraging. During the day, I was still a busy married woman having loads of housework to do. In the evening, I was a hardworking student working on my courses. To my surprise, both Linda and I did very well in night school. I went back again the next semester, and my grades steadily improve
9、d.Paragraph 2:Linda and I saw each other through the time. When I was down, Linda encouraged me. “Mom, you cant quit now!” And when she was down, I encouraged her. I have to say it was a time which was really hard on both of us. But neither of us gave up. At last, I got my diploma. To my surprise, a
10、lmost all of my classmates voted for me to be class speaker, and I got a $3,000 college scholarship. The unfinished business in my dreams was eventually finished.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者15岁时因为父母付不起学费，不得不退学，后来结了婚生了三个孩子。作者在为最小的孩子琳达报夜校的时候，自己也打算尝试一个学期，但作者坚持了下来并最终取得了毕业证书，实现了自己的学业梦想。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“再去上学是令
11、人兴奋的，但这不是游戏。”可知，第一段可描写作者去上学时的感受和学业进步情况。由第二段首句内容“琳达和我经常见面。”可知，第二段可描写作者和琳达是如何互相鼓励的，以及作者最后如何取得了毕业证书的。2.续写线索：感到兴奋白天做家务晚上上学成绩稳步提高和琳达互相鼓励取得毕业证书3.词汇激活行为类充满：be full of / be filled with回去：go back /return完成：finish /complete情绪类尴尬：awkward /embarrassed惊讶：surprise /astonishment【点睛】高分句型1 Sitting in a classroom ful
12、l of kids was awkward, even if most of them were respectful and encouraging. (运用了现在分词作状语)高分句型2 When I was down, Linda encouraged me. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)02Days of January were passing and every girl of the girls school was very happy as the selections for plays and dances for the annual function were s
13、tarted.Snehas class teacher, Pravina, asked Sneha, her favorite student, to play the leading character in a play. Because she was never allowed to play a male character, Sneha jumped with joy, but suddenly she became so serious about the costumes (戏服).“How many times I have to tell you not to partic
14、ipate in plays and dances! Cant you understand that we cant buy or borrow the costly costume? You can take part in debates, quizes, or essay competitions in which you dont have to spend money and you can enrich your knowledge,” her mother said angrily when Sneha told her about it.The reason behind a
15、ll this was their financial condition. Sneha always had an idea about it in her home and she was mature enough to say NO to any money demanding condition. This time, however, the desire of fame and the excitement of the activity were overcoming her fear.Sneha went in her room hiding her sadness deep
16、 in her heart. She was so nervous about what was going to happen when she would tell Pravina about leaving the play. Would she warn her not to allow her in any competition? Now it was clear that she had to leave the play.The next day, downhearted Sneha acted like nothing had happened and got ready f
17、or school. Her mom ordered her to say NO for the play.Sneha always loved Pravina because whenever there was a play or dance, the girls did not need to be worried about anything related with money. She would find a way to help. But Sneha didnt want to tell her the truth.Paragraph l:Sneha went to the
18、teacher,“I dont want to take part in the play and Im leaving.” _Paragraph 2:Pravina stood patiently, waiting for the performance to begin._【答案】Sneha went to the teacher, “I dont want to take part in the play and Im leaving.” Her voice was so determined that Pravina wondered why she had such a change
19、 in her attitude. “Mum says I can learn more if I take part in a debate,” she looked away, trying to hide her unwillingness. Soon, Pravina made out what really was shouting in Snehas deep heart. With a smile on her face, Pravina promised not only could she perform in the play but she would get the c
20、hance to join in the debate. She offered a hand to her, saying there happened to be a costume at home which could be lent to her. Excited secretly, she knew she was going to attend the show.Pravina stood patiently, waiting for the performance to begin. She was waiting for the precious moment when Sn
21、eha appeared in the costume she bought for Snehas dream. As the light faded out, the lead role came on stage and caught the attention of all the audience. Confident and brave, she vividly brought the character to life. Everyone cheered and applauded when the show ended as Snehas first male character
22、 turned out a big success. When Sneha was ready to give back the costume to Pravina, she was told to keep it as a reminder of not easily letting go of dreams.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开。Sneha的班主任老师Pravin要求Sneha在一部戏里扮演主要男性角色，但是由于购买或者租赁戏服的经济问题，母亲不同意她参加这次演出，并强烈要求她拒绝Pravin的邀请。她向Pravin提出不参演这次的演出。看出Sneha的心思之后，Pravin表示
23、可以拿家里的戏服给她用。最后演出获得了成功。当Sneha要将戏服还给Pravin时，Pravin将戏服送给她，提醒她不要轻易放弃梦想。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Sneha对老师说:“我不想参加这个戏了，我要离开。”可知，第一段可描写Sneha拒绝老师的邀请，老师看穿后，表示可以借给她戏服。由第二段首句内容“Pravin耐心地站着，等待演出开始。”可知，第二段可描写演出获得成功，Pravin将戏服赠予她留作纪念。2.续写线索：拒绝邀请明白真相提供帮助表演开始表演成功赠予戏服3.词汇激活行为类.掩盖：hide/cover up/conceal.归还：go back/return情绪类
24、.不情愿：unwillingness/reluctance.兴奋：excited/trilled【点睛】高分句型1.Her voice was so determined that Pravina wondered why she had such a change in her attitude.（由连接词sothat引导结果状语从句和why引导宾语从句）高分句型2.Confident and brave, she vividly brought the character to life.（运用了形容词作状语）03Every girl dreams and Jasmine is no ex
25、ception. When Jasmine was young, she had read dozens of books on how to be a ballerina（芭蕾舞者）, Suan Lake was her favorite and she had always wanted to become the white swan in it. Later, she started taking ballet lessons and all her teachers confirmed she was a good student. In the hope of becoming a
26、 great ballerina, she trained hard on a daily basis.One day, she saw an advertisement that a famous ballerina troupe（舞团）would be performing in her hometown. And the whole town was talking about the troupe leader, who was said to be the best ballet dancer in the world. Her thoughts ran wild. I must m
27、eet the leader of the troupe and show him my skills she murmured to herself.She dressed herself in her best ballerina costume and managed to slip in the backstage without being noticed. To her luck, the leader entered the dressing room and she timidly knocked at the door Come in said a gentle voice.
28、 Opening the door, Jasmine saw a tall and slim man with a calm look on his face. She bravely approached him and handed him a bunch of red roses and in her excitement the thorns pricked（刺痛）her hand but she did not pay much attention to the pain.The leader observed her action as she told him her dream
29、. Alright, you dance and I will give you my advice.But half way through the dance he stopped her and said, Im sorry youre not good enough! On hearing this, Jasmines eyes opened wide in shock. It was seconds before she could absorb what was said to her, Not good enough?! she asked in disbelief. Yes,
30、not good enough. replied the leader. Boiled in shame and rage, Jasmine ran out of the dressing room as fast as her legs could carry her. The leaders words were a huge blow to her confidence. Despite being so sad, she didnt give up her dream.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:S
31、ix months later, she heard that the same ballet troupe was performing in her town again._Paragraph 2:Within three years, Jasmine had become a famous ballerina as she wanted. _【答案】Six months later, she heard that the same ballet troupe was performing in her town again. Bitter memories of the leaders
32、harsh words came flooding back to her. This time she was determined to find out why the leader had told her she was not good enough when all her teachers thought otherwise. He replied, “I tell this to every student.” She angrily shot back, “Youve ruined my life!” Then she got a further shock, “I rem
33、ember your gift of roses and how the thorns had pricked your fingers but you carried on bravely.” He said if she did not give up so easily, it might be a different story.Within three years, Jasmine had become a famous ballerina as she wanted. Guided by the troupe leader, she succeeded in attaining t
34、he leading position in the Swan Lake. Her elegant appearance and excellent performance on the stage was so amazing that she gained power over all the audiences. Despite being so famous, Jasmine still felt nervous sometimes. But one word would always calm her down: “If you want to pick roses, dont be
35、 afraid of the thorns.”【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jasmine的梦想是成为一名伟大的芭蕾舞演员，一天，她看到一则广告，说一个著名的芭蕾舞团将在她的家乡表演。她找到了团长，她勇敢地走近他，递给他一束红玫瑰。激动之下，玫瑰的刺扎到了她的手，但她并没有太在意它的痛，她向团长展示了自己的舞蹈才能。团长说她跳的不够好，在羞愧和愤怒中，Jasmine飞快地跑出了更衣室。领导的话对她的信心是一个巨大的打击。尽管如此悲伤，她没有放弃她的梦想。【详解】1.段落续写：1.由第一段首句内容“六个月后，她听说那个芭蕾舞团又在她的镇上演出了”可知，第一段可以继续写没有放弃梦想的Jasm
36、ine 又去找团长，这次她决心要弄清楚为什么领导说她不够好以及他们之间的对话。2.由第二段首句内容“三年之内，Jasmine如愿以偿地成为了一名著名的芭蕾舞演员。”可知，第二段可续写Jasmine成功后的状态和心理、情感变化。2.续写线索：找到团长问清楚原因获得了成功有时会感到紧张一句话激励着她3.词汇激活行为类1.下定决心做某事：be determined to do sth /make up ones mind to do sth2.放弃：give up/abandon3.获得：acquire/attain情绪类1.害怕的：afraid/frightened2.紧张的：nervous/an
37、xious【点睛】高分句型1.Her elegant appearance and excellent performance on the stage was so amazing that she gained power over all the audiences. （sothat引导的结果状语从句）高分句型2. If you want to pick roses, dont be afraid of the thorns. （if引导的条件状语从句）04My family immigrated to Canada when I was about one year old. In t
38、hose early years, we did not have much money. Our home was a simple rented apartment, which was rather poorly furnished. There certainly was not enough money for expensive outings. As a result, our weekends were filled with simple pleasures that we could do for free, like picnics, bike rides, and my
39、 favoritetrips to the library.Thanks to the librarys childrens section, I fell in love with storiessilly ones, moving ones, and even educational ones. I would have my parents read the books that we borrowed over and over again until we needed to return them, or I would page through them myself, imag
40、ining the stories in my head, even though I was too young to read the words.When I was about five years old and finally started to read on my own, I had a curious thought: I knew we could get books from the library or buy them in store s if we had the money, but where did books come from?I asked my
41、mother this question, to which she replied that the stories I loved were created in the imaginations of people called “writers” These people then wrote them down so they could be s hared with others.Four decades later, I still remember that moment. It was as though I had been struck by lightning. Th
42、en and there, I knew my purpose in this world. I would be one of those writers. I would create stories and share them with the world.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 开头已给出。Paragraph 1:As a young child, I began writing by making up stories about animals or my toys._Paragraph 2:After a few years of constant writi
43、ng practice, my hard work eventually paid off._【答案】Paragraph 1:As a young child, I began writing by making up stories about animals or my toys. I described the cute animals I saw and wrote them into short stories. The toys I often played with every day were so interesting that I wrote articles about them and introduced them to people. I showed people the positive energy a
