1、专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落一、读后续写收尾的方式： 1.画面定格 2.对话收尾 3.主题升华 4.结尾留白 5.首尾呼应二、画面定格 1.人物动作的画面定格 如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almo
2、st reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge. 如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst thr
3、ough the front door and placed it in Doras hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 如： The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human
4、again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life.”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （1）The sky was a billion pure eyes o
5、f light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come. 天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （2） Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon. 黎明在平静的海
6、面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。 （黎明到来的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （3） The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas. 当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。 （美好日落时的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （4） The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling nigh
7、t，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything. 被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带
8、来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud. 抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所
9、知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （7） Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold u
10、nder foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面） The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。 （雨水来临的画面） 2.特殊寓意的写景画面 （9）The lea
11、ves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面） 三、对话收尾 （1） Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his b
12、rother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that hes been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with h
13、is father will change his life, Chester said，“I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.” (2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.“Ive heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty, but I never im
14、agined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our lov
15、e and care.” (3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, If he does this for free, imagine his jobs
16、if he was being paid. I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.” (4) They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls wit
17、h loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.” 四、主题升华(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no id
18、ea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响） (2) .I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesnt equal happiness. And free life style also doesnt equal happiness. The real happiness is tha
19、t everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money cant take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.(表达自己的价值观） (4) “Two reasons account for that
20、you won，” the teacher answered.“First, youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says, Every coin has two sides
21、. Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题） 五、结尾留白(1) While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that Id like to wait a
22、bit before I went back to the hospital gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “Id love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Bet
23、sys death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间） (2) The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instea
24、d, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars. 六、首尾呼应(1) 开头： I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot ab
25、out her.结尾：Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom. (2) 开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The spe
26、cial trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.(3) 开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. 结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious 搞笑的experience.附：名言警句升华主题 1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者
27、，事竟成。2. Well begun is half done. 好的开端是成功的一半。3. East, west, home is best. 金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。4. There is no royal road to learning. 学无坦途。5. Look before you leap./ First think, then act. 三思而后行/摸着石头过河6. It is never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。7. Light come, light go. 来得容易，去得快。8. Time is money. 时间就是金钱。9. A f
28、riend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。10. Great hopes make great man. 远大的希望，造就伟大的人物。11. After a storm comes a calm. 雨过天晴。12. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。13. Art is long, but life is short. 人生有限，学问无涯。14. Stick to it, and youll succeed. 只要人有恒，万事都能成。15. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man
29、healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起，富裕、聪明、身体好。16. A good medicine tastes bitter. 良药苦口。17. It is good to learn at another mans cost. 前车之鉴。18. Keeping is harder than winning. 创业不易，守业更难。19. Lets cross the bridge when we come to it. 船到桥头自然直。20. More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。21. No pains, no gains. 不劳则无获。22.
30、Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯登攀。23. Where there is life, there is hope. 生命不息，希望常在。24. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。25. We must not lie down, and cry, God help us. 求神不如求己。26. A plant may produce new flowers; man is young but once.花有重开日，人无再少年。27. God helps those wh
31、o help themselves. 自助者，天助之。28. What may be done at any time will be done at no time.明日待明日，明日不再来。29. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。30. Diligence is the mother of success. 勤奋是成功之母。31. Truth is the daughter of time. 时间见真理。32. Take care of the pence, and the pounds will take
32、 care of themselves.积少自然成多。/小事留意,大事顺利33. No man is wise at all times. 智者千虑，必有一失。34. Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.今天能做的事绝不要拖到明天。35. Live and learn. 活到老，学到老。36. Kill two birds with one stone. 一石双鸟。37. It never rains but it pours. 祸不单行。38. In doing we learn. 经一事，长一智。39. Easier said
33、 than done. 说起来容易做起来难。40. An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure. 一分预防胜似十分治疗。41. Industry is fortunes right hand, and frugality her left.勤勉是幸运的右手，节约是幸运的左手。42. Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration.天才一分来自灵感，九十九分来自勤奋。43. He who laughs last laughs best. 谁笑在最后，谁笑得最好。44.
34、He who pays the piper calls the tune. 谁负担费用，谁加以控制。45. He who has health has hope, and he who has hope has everything.身体健壮就有希望，有了希望就有了一切。46. No man is born wise or learned. 人非生而知之。47. Action speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。48. Courage and resolution are the spirit and soul of virtue.勇敢和坚决是美德的灵魂。49. U
35、nited we stand, divided we fall.合即立，分即垮。50. There is no smoke without fire.无风不起浪。51. Many hands make light work.人多好办事。52. Reading makes a full man. 读书长见识。53. The best horse needs breeding, and the aptest child needs teaching.最好的马要驯，最伶俐的孩子要教。/ 好马需驯, 好人需教54. Learn young, learn fair. 学习趁年轻，学就要学好。55. Wi
36、sdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.胸中有知识，胜于手中有金钱。56. Once bitten, twice shy. 一次被咬，下次胆小。57. Sound in body, sound in mind. 有健全的身体才有健全的精神。58. Seeing is believing.百闻不如一见。59. Dogs wave their tails not so much in, love to you as your bread.狗摇尾巴，爱的是你的面包。60. Money is a good servant but a bad
37、master. 要做金钱的主人，莫作金钱的奴隶。61. Its hard sailing when there is no wind. 无风难驶船。62. The path to glory is always rugged. 通向光荣的道路常常是崎岖的。63. Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.没有目标的生活如同没有罗盘的航行。64. Quality matters more than quantity.质重于量。65. The on-looker sees most of the game.旁观者清。66. Wi
38、sdom is a good purchase though we pay dear for it .为了求知识，代价虽高也值得。67. Joys shared with others are more enjoyed. 与众同乐，其乐更乐。68. Happiness takes no account of time.欢乐不觉日子长。69. Time and tide waits for no man.岁月不等人。70. If you want knowledge, you must toil for it.若要求知，必须刻苦。71. Learn to walk before you run.
39、 循序渐进。72. Knowing something of everything, and everything of something.通百艺而专一长。73. From words to deeds is a great space.言行之间，大有距离。74. Skill and confidence are an unconquered army. 技能和信心是无敌的军队。75. Habit is a second nature.习惯成自然。76. Lifeless, faultless.只有死人才不会犯错误。77. A book is the same today as it alw
40、ays was and it will never change.好书千载常如新。78. Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen.读书如择友，宜少且宜精。79. A book that remains shut is but a block.书本不常翻，犹如一块砖。80. Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。81. Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠顶个诸葛亮。82. Birth is much, but breeding i
41、s more. 出身重要，教养更重要。83. Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。84. You cant make something out of nothing. 巧妇难为无米之炊。85. Nothing venture, nothing have. 不入虎穴，焉得虎子。86. Nothing for nothing. 不费力气，一无所得。87. Of nothing comes nothing. 无中不能生有。88. He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯错误者一事无成。
42、89. Better say nothing than nothing to the purpose. 话不中肯，不如不说。90. Nothing succeeds like success. 一事如意，万事顺利。91. Nothing stake, nothing draw. 不顶千里浪，哪来万斤鱼。92. Nothing is as good as it seems beforehand. 期待比现实更美好。93. Nothing is given so freely as advice. 劝人最容易。94. Nothing is so certain as the unexpected.
43、 天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。95. Nothing seek, nothing find. 无所求则无所获。96. A little of every thing is nothing in the main. 每事浅尝辄止，事事都告无成。97. A great ship asks deep waters. 大船要走深水。（蛟龙要在海中游。）98. The best physicians are Dr. Diet, Dr. Quiet, and Dr. Merryman.节食博士、精心博士、快乐博士，三人都是最好的医生。99. He that once deceives is ever su
44、spected. 骗人一次，受疑一世。100. Empty wagons rattle loudest. 空车响声大。101. Nothing so bad but might be a blessing. 塞翁失马，焉知非福。102.Barking dogs seldom bite. 吠犬不咬人103.Better go to heaven in rags than to hell in embroidery. 宁可穷而有志，不可富而失节104.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好105.Between two stools you fall to the grou
45、nd. 脚踩两条凳，早晚要坠地(意同：脚踏两条船)106.Birds of a feather of lock together. 物以类聚，人以群分107.Blood is thicker than water. 血浓于水(意指：亲人总比外人亲）108.Beggarsbags are bottom less. 乞丐永远不知足109.The most tragic blow for one is the death of his mind 哀莫大于心死。110.He who does not have a strong will can never achieve high intellige
46、nce志不强者智不达。111.When Heaven is about to place a great burden on a man，it always tests his resolution first，exhausts his body and makes him suffer great hardships，frustrates his efforts to recover from mentallassitudeThen Heaven toughens his nature and makes good his deficiencies天将降大任于斯人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，
47、饿其体肤，空乏其身，行拂乱其所为，所以动心忍性，曾益其所不能。112.How can a sparrow know the will of a swan? 燕雀安知鸿鹄之志哉!113.Among three people I meet on the way，there will be at least ont from whom I can learn somethingI may follow his goodness or correct my own mistakes by learning from him三人行必有我师焉。择其善者而从之，其不善者而改之。114.Education should be for all，irrespective of their social status.有教无类。115.Too many cooks spoil the broth厨师多坏一锅汤。116.We would rather be short of books than believe all that they say。尽信书则不如无书。I
