1、专题15高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”灾难故事灾难，我们没法控制，但是可以用温暖呵护承受灾难的人01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift, I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell of
2、f the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I
3、 got under another bed myself.As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again.
4、When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldnt walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling fo
5、r volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended t
6、o stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.注意：续写字数应为150词左右。Paragraph 1: However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.Paragraph 2: Later in the afternoon, I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.【答案】However, wit
7、hout any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes we were faced with falling
8、 rubble from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly, we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.Later in the after
9、noon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake w
10、ith our help. It was our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.【解析】本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段
11、首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。2.续写线索：和护士长留下医生鼓励被困护士挪开砖头瓦砾救出被困护士感慨劫后余生期待震后重建3.词汇激活行为类集中在上：focused on/fix on面对：were faced with/face继续：continued /keep on情绪类保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm感觉有压力：felt a weight in my chest/
12、feel stressed【点睛】高分句型1The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句） 高分句型2However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.
13、（由which引导的定语从句）高分句型3I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）02Ken Scott kicked off the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Ro
14、cky Mountain town of Mullan, Idaho. Hed just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blessed with nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As an experienced ski addict, he didnt want to miss this big golden opportunity. These conditions are what skiers live for.When Scott rea
15、ched Silver Mountains locker room, he came across his friend Paul, a former ski instructor who had also been a regular on these slopes for more than two decades. Both of them were exhilarated. Before setting off, it was Pauls routine to check his phone tightly fixed inside his parka (风 雪外套). For the
16、 next hour the pair skied on various runs under a lightly dull sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood, laughing as they tackled the steep runs.Almost immediately, the snow beneath their feet gave way. In a millisecond, Paul realized what was happening. “Avalanche! (雪崩)” he yelled
17、 to Scott, who was not far behind. Scott responded. The sudden snow slide caused fear in his voice. “This is happening!” Instantly, both were hit by a mass of snow that would hit and carry them some 500 feet down the mountain. Scott felt it surrounding and enclosing him, moving quickly up his back a
18、nd over his shoulders, then heavy against his neck. Snow filled the space in front of him and piled up around the whole of him. Paul, too, was swept downhill.They remembered the avalanche survival lessons they had learned. Keep your head up. Try to swim. Stay on top of the snow. But the snow was too
19、 powerful and they felt themselves rolling like a load of clothes in a washing machine. When Scott finally came to rest, he was lying on his left side and completely buried, skis and poles still attached.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Paul was luckier, ending up partially bur
20、ied and probably surviving._ Paragraph 2:Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team._【答案】Para1Paul was luckier, ending up partially buried and probably surviving. So fortunate was he that most of the snow had gone over his body and continued down the hill. In suc
21、h a shallow burial, he began to shake off the snow, scooped snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. Looking around the world of snow, he desperately shouted Scotts name but received no trace of responses. Paul unzipped his parka and pulled out the phone to make the emergency call
22、. Shortly afterwards, the rescue team arrived. With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.Para2 Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team. When bu
23、ried under snow in the enclosed space, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep. He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety. He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this b
24、reathing. Time ticked away slowly. Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. In that one-in-a-million chance, they made it. With the dull sky clearing up, both Paul and Scott breathed in the fresh air with abandon, feeling the rebirth of life.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯斯
25、科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻找好友和寻求救援。由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。2.续写线索：结伴滑雪突遇雪崩寻求援助获救感激3.词汇激活行为类1.到达：arrive in/reach2.遇见：come across/meet3.集中:focus on/concentrate on情绪类1.高兴的：exhilarated /pl
26、eased2.惊恐：terror /panic【点睛】高分句型1.Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. （as引导的时间状语从句）高分句型2 With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从
27、句）03Jack still remembers that one morning when he was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Lily. Jack was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first, he thought nothing of it since customers voice in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, b
28、ut he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone shouted.Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Jack opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and pe
29、ople were running and crying.Lily, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor through the smoke.They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Lily stopped in her track. She turned around and
30、 headed back the way they came. Jack had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.Lily had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik, Malay for auntie. Lily began banging on Makciks door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them,
31、Jack could see many of their neighbors some still in their pyjamas running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.“She might have run for safety like everyone else!” Jack cried. However, Lily refused to give up. “I know Makciks still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makciks daily ro
32、utine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!”注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Just at that time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up._Luckily, all the neighbors went downstairs and an ambulance came._【答案】Paragraph 1: Just at tha
33、t time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He compre-hended the gravity of the situation and held Janes hand tightly. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two
34、or three minutes. Jack begged Lily to run for safety as quickly as possible. Lily tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Jack burst out crying.Paragraph 2: Luckily, all the neighbors went downstairs and an ambulance came. A sense of st
35、rength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Lily s mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she final
36、ly came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Lily and Jack were very happy.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者杰克十岁那年的一个早晨，他和姐姐莉莉在家，他们所在的公寓发生了火灾，他们正朝走廊尽头的楼梯走去，这时莉莉停下了脚步和杰克返回去叫醒住在他们隔壁的那位70多岁的老人。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“就在那时，杰克注意到火焰正在蔓延。”可知，第一段可描写尽管很危险杰克和莉莉努力的去敲老人的门。由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，所有的邻居都下楼了，救护车来了”可知，第二段
37、可描写他们和邻居合力将老人救出。2.续写线索：火势严峻二人并没有放弃敲门门被推开老人被送往医院3.词汇激活行为类阻止鼻孔吸到烟：shield her nose from the choking smoke / prevent her nose from the choking smoke取代：replace /take the place of突然大哭起来：burst out crying /burst into tears情绪类快乐的：glad/pleased无意识的：unconscious/unaware【点睛】高分句型1 he was carried downstairs and the
38、n rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself.（由where引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2 Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.（though引导的让步状语从句）04Besieged (被包围的) Paris was suffering from famine (饥荒). Even the sparrows on the roofs and the rats in the s
39、ewers were growing rare. People were eating anything they could get. As Monsieur (法语，先生) Morissot, watchmaker by profession and idler (懒汉) for the occasion, was walking along the boulevard one bright January morning, his hands in his trousers pockets and stomach empty, he suddenly came face to face
40、with his friendMonsieur Sauvage, a fishing friend. Before the World War II broke out, Morissot had been in the habit, every Sunday morning, of setting forth with a bamboo rod (杆子) in his hand and a tin box on his back. He took the Argenteuil train, got out at Colombes, and walked to the Ile Marante.
41、 The moment he arrived at this place of his dreams he began fishing and fished till nightfall.Every Sunday he met in this very spot Monsieur Sauvage, a fat, happy, little man, a draper in the Rue Notre Dame de Lorette, and an warm-hearted fisherman. They often spent half the day side by side, rod in
42、 hand and feet dangling over the water, and a warm friendship had sprung up between the two. Some days they did not speak; at other times they chatted; but they understood each other perfectly without the aid of words, having similar tastes and feelings. In the spring, about ten oclock in the mornin
43、g, when the early sun caused a light mist to float on the water and gently warmed the backs of the two enthusiastic anglers, Morissot would occasionally remark to his neighbour: My, but its pleasant here. To which the other would reply: I cant imagine anything better! And these few words sufficed to
44、 make them understand and appreciate each other.A beautiful day in autumn, they decide to go fishing in Colombes which is not far from the base of Germans._Suddenly, a gun pointed at Morissot._【答案】A beautiful day in autumn, they decide to go fishing in Colombes which is not far from the base of Germans. A breeze stirred the lake, and they were bathed in the bright sunshine. What a sunny day! The peaceful sight made them feel relaxed. They took out their equipment and prepared to fish. Days were hard when pe
