1、专题01高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”-成长故事读后续写“一波三折”：1. 情绪-情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。2. 细节-进一步描述。3. 转折-个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。4. 转机-事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。5. 失望-问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。6. 想法-面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。7. 结局-在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。8. 点题-呼应前文备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情
2、节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。每个人都会成长。在点点滴滴中，在大风大浪中，在自我挣扎中01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Heres the story of my growth over the past year. Its a story of how I found the strength to change myself for better and then how I get rid of my fears to be even better. If anyone is inspired by this, tha
3、ts wonderful.Id been stuck as this incredibly insecure, under-confident and just scared individual for years and years. Since childhood Id been stuck like this. Kids I met for the first time looked at me rudely and unkindly. Even my friendsactually, I had very few friends because I just felt too ash
4、amed and frightened to make some, though I was eager to and felt extremely lonely in the depth of my heartlaughed at me and gave me bad nicknames. I felt terrible, but Id just resigned to a life where Id be afraid of everything and be this “introvert” (内向的人) or whatever. I thought I would never be a
5、ble to change, never, for my whole life.But then it all started changing. Something clicked. I suddenly determined to go on a diet, and lost some weight. It was tough. I felt hungry all the time. I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger, even when I didnt see them. But the toughest t
6、hing was that even if I had just had my meals, I felt hunger mentally. However, I held on. In over a period of 6 months I finally managed to stick to one of my diets. I didnt know how. But I did make it.The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight. This isnt the best pa
7、rt. More importantly and inspiringly, I suddenly found strength in me. I realized I could be totally different. And maybe, I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself.Then I wondered, perhaps, I could also get rid of those of my fears, just like I succeeded in
8、losing my extra pounds. It might not be easy, but it might not be that difficult.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Chance presented itself soon._It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly._【答案】Chance presented itself soon. One single time, I heard about a public speaking thing go
9、ing on at my university, and for the first time, I actually managed to build up the courage to go there. It was liberating. For the first time I was able to share my story, and able to do it in front of dozens of people potentially judging me, and suddenly all the random fears about speaking publicl
10、y started disappearing. This taught me I could get rid of my fears.It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly. Using the fact that I could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers
11、, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更
12、好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。2.续写线索：公开演讲摆脱恐惧其他改变感悟3.词汇激活 行为类消失：disappear/vanish摆脱：get rid of/extricate oneself from开始：start/begin情绪类害怕：fear/dread【点睛】高分句型1. Using the fact that I could change, and tha
13、t I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. (由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)高分句型2My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing thin
14、gs, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one. (“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)02 Be a true runnerFor me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and
15、 win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, because my camp counselors（辅导员）and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I kn
16、ew I was no ones first choice. I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body tensed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasnt been in other events to
17、 run the two-mile!”He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself from the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him. “But I dont know the way around the lake!” “Youre in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smiled. Bill was my friend
18、and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch（最后一程）on the field, just throw your head back and run.”At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled. “On your mark Get set.” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I stayed close on Bills he
19、els, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!” I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept my eyes on Bill. It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around the lake back to the fi
20、eld. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him. 注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置。In a moment, Bill was up again and running._I didnt know when I crossed the finish line._【答案】In a moment, Bill was up and running. I couldnt think of anything
21、but to follow him closely. I could even feel the air hitting my face and I was totally worn out. Naturally, my pace slowed down. Just at the moment, Barrys words “Just follow Bill” called me back. Convinced that I was no longer a loser, I refreshed up again and accelerated and soon I was quite close
22、 to Bill again. Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line. The gun cracked again, announcing the last 200 meters. I closed my eyes, threw my head back and ran with my last ounce of strength, in the direction of the dream line.I didnt know when I crossed the line. I still kept running
23、 on when a thunderous applause burst, which signaled the birth of the champion. I stopped and opened my eyes and saw my camp of kids and the camp counsellor gathering around me. “We have won the race! We are the champion!” they shouted and cheered, throwing me in the air. Showered with hugs and appl
24、ause and whistles, I felt a surge of gaiety sweeping over me. To me, the race meant more than a champion; it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential. Just as Hemingway put it, “The true nobility is superior to your former self.”【解析】本文以人物和时间为线索展开
25、，讲述了Fred因个儿小人瘦弱而一直没有机会在赛道上为自己队争得荣誉，心生自卑，但是一次环湖2英里的比赛中，辅导员Barry选他当第四个参赛运动员，并指点他只要跟着他的朋友，跑得最快的Bill就行了；Fred照做了，尽管心里忐忑，疲惫不堪，但最终获得了团体冠军，也使他对自己充满了自信。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“不一会儿，比尔爬了起来，又开始跑”可知，第一段可描写Fred跟在Bill后面的状况，Barry的话鼓舞了Fred，在最后200处他全力冲向终点线。由第二段首句内容“我不知道我什么时候越过了终点线。”可知，第二段可描写Fred的努力使小组赢得冠军，看着欢呼的老师和同学时Fre
26、d的心理变化。2.续写线索：Bill爬起来后Fred筋疲力尽时最后200米时越过终点线后得知比赛结果后3.词汇激活 行为类.疲惫不堪：be worn out/be tired out/be completely exhausted .加速：accelerate/speed up.发掘我的潜力：explore my potential/exploit my potential 情绪类.充满自信：be injected with confidence/be filled with confidence.喝彩：cheer/applaud【点睛】高分句型1. Injected with confide
27、nce, I headed for the finishing line. （运用了过去分词作状语）高分句型2.it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）03One afternoon after school, Mary and his brother, Keith, were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to sha
28、re their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.Mary saw the handphone on the table.
29、She quickly told Keith, “ Keith, the girl left behind her handphone.” Keith looked at the handphone. It was one of the latest models on the market. Looking very sleek, it was red in color with a black cover. The handphone must be expensive.Keith had always wanted a handphone, But his parents refused
30、. He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on very word, “ I want to take the handphone, ” Mary could not believe her eyes. She merely stared at her brother, “ you cant! What if the owner comes to look for it?”Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and pu
31、t it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Marys hand and led her out of the cafe quickly. Outside the caf, he ran to his bicycle. Mary had to run after him.Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Looking at the handphone, he liked it so much. Now he had his own handphone. But Ma
32、ry told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the handphone. What will you tell father about this handphone?” Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.”Mary said, “ Now you are lying, too. ” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest?Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of t
33、he handphone, “This phone number is the girls phone number. Why dont we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone.” She was trying her best to talk some sense into him.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That night, Keith couldnt go to sleep, refle
34、cting in bed._Back home from school, they phoned the owners house phone._【答案】Paragraph 1:That night, Keith couldnt go to sleep, reflecting in bed. He had difficulty sleeping. Of course, he liked the new handphone. However, he was feeling sorry for the owner. The lady looked young. She would be very
35、sad at the loss of her handphone. In the morning, he decided to return the handphone to the owner. After school, he told Mary, “ Im going to phone the owner. ” Mary was glad to hear that.Paragraph 2:Back home from school, they phoned the owners house phone. A girl answered the phone. Keith asked,“Ar
36、e you the owner of the handphone? Im Keith. I have your handphone. Can you come and get it?” The girl replied excitedly, “ Yes, yes! Im the owner. Thank you! Thank you! I will come now.” Ten minutes later, she was at the same cafe to meet Keith. Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile
37、 happily, Keith realized that honesty was indeed the best virtue.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一天下午放学后，Mary和他的弟弟Keith在他们家附近的一家咖啡馆吃饭时，另一个女孩把手机遗落在了桌子上，Keith于是拿了手机回家，最后出于愧疚还是归还了手机。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，Keith睡不着，躺在床上想着心事。”可知，第一段可描写Keith内心的挣扎以及做出了归还手机的决定。由第二段首句内容“他们从学校回到家，打电话给房主。”可知，第二段可描写Keith归还手机的经过和感悟。2.续写线索：K
38、eith无法入睡Keith内心挣扎决定归还手机归还手机感悟3.词汇激活行为类做某事有困难：have difficulty doing sth./have trouble doing sth.决定：decide/determine打电话：phone/call情绪类高兴：glad /pleased悲伤：sad /sorrowful【点睛】高分句型1 He had difficulty sleeping. (运用了动名词作宾语)高分句型2 Handing back the handphone to her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized th
39、at honesty was indeed the best virtue. (运用了that引导宾语从句)04My knees started shaking, yet my body froze. It felt as though my soul departed my body and I had no control over it. Anxiously, I looked through the roster (名单) posted on the wall of the locker room. My heart was beating harder and harder as I
40、 slowly saw all my friends names on that list but could not find mine. At that moment, I froze. I just could not accept that all my friends were on the basketball team while I was not. I was so convinced there was a mistake that I went and found the coach. “Hey coach, are you sure that the roster yo
41、u posted is correct?” I asked anxiously, dreading (担心) his answer. “Yes, the names on the list are finalized. Sorry if you did not make it this year, there is always next year,” the coach replied. I could feel the hot, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran out of the room as fast as I could. Tryin
42、g to forget about the situation, I headed over to the cafeteria to buy some food. I felt dead inside, like nothing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pound weight tied to my backpack. My mind was also blank for the rest of the school day. Everything my teachers said w
43、ent in one ear and out the other. After school, as I walked to the parking lot to get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear of the lot, celebrating and joking around. I detoured (绕道) around the side of the school to avoid them, trying not to think about being the only one in our fri
44、end group failing to make the team. I saw my fathers car pull up near the school lot, and I walked up to the car and got in. He smiled at me, played the radio, and started driving home. 注意1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong. _ Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal. _
