1、专题07高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”人与动物故事动物是人类的朋友01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadnt quit and been re
2、placed with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.One day the electric fans werent working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice ca
3、lled out: “Hey! Theres a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.Now most people where I live hunt
4、deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes
5、, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energize
6、d us again and reminded us of what life was all about.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I went out of the house and looked into the woods again._When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily._【答案】Para 1:I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. The l
7、ittle deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.Para 2:When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing
8、and talking happily. I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month?” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good
9、deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐
10、的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。2.续写线索：作者向树林里望去发现小鹿快乐玩耍作者陷入沉思作者回到屋子工人提议做志愿者工作作者感悟3.词汇激活行为类跳跃：skip/jump返回：return/go back回答：reply/respond情绪类焦急地：anx
11、iously/worriedly快乐的：happy/glad【点睛】高分句型1 The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)高分句型2 I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)02“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes”Danny sang while his finge
12、rs pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song. Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt t
13、he name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alo
14、ne instead!On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. The unexpected c
15、haos upturned Dannys hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!”On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced up
16、on the park. For a while his earnings were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didnt last long. One-Eyed came along and appointed itself as Dannys guardian. Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again! That night, Danny hadnt made enough money he should have, all tha
17、nks to the troublesome dog. Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do? Call an animal shelter?” Torn by this problem, he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny didnt watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the l
18、ake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into overwhelming panic. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. _ “My hero! Thank you for saving me
19、,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. _【答案】Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance. In a split second, a splash of brown, out of breath, quickly jumped into the lake. It was One-Eyed! It barked, swimming toward Danny with all its might. On spotting One-Eyed, Danny seemed to see
20、a ray of hope, attempting to move towards it instantly. Instinctively, Danny grabbed the tail of One-Eyed. Ultimately, they managed to climb ashore, exhausted. Gazing at One-Eyed in disbelief, Danny patted it tenderly in return. One-Eyed was no longer troublesome; instead, it became a “hero” in his
21、heart. “My hero! Thank you for saving me, Danny said gratefully with watery eyes. “Youre my brave guardian angel!” Since that night, “One-Eyed” was nonexistent while “Hero”, as the dog was re-named, became a part of Dannys performance. So attached were they to each other that they became genuine par
22、tners. Danny would include his pet as he engaged the audience. Hero also had its own place to lie on-the feet of Danny. While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner. What a perfect match!【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一只叫“独眼”的流浪狗一直跟着街头表演者Danny，其他人以为他们是主人和宠物的关系，而Danny为此感到很苦恼，不想“独
23、眼”跟着他，Danny一心想着如何摆脱这只狗，却没有注意他的脚步，他掉进了湖里，极度恐慌。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“就在这时，远处传来熟悉的狗叫声。”可知，第一段可描写“独眼”如何救Danny。由第二段首句内容“我的英雄！谢谢你救了我，”丹尼含泪感激地说。”可知，第二段可描写Danny被“独眼”救起后他们之间关系的改变。2.续写线索：跳进水里Danny被救起狗改名成为伙伴3.词汇激活行为类跳进：jump into/dive into爬上岸：climb ashore/climb up the bank改名：re-name/rechristen情绪类筋疲力尽的：exhausted/d
24、og-tired高兴地：happily/delightedly【点睛】高分句型1So attached were they to each other that they became genuine partners.(so位于句首引起的部分倒装句)高分句型2While Danny played guitar, Hero would bark happily to harmonize with his owner.(由while引导的时间状语从句)03It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain
25、in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didnt see any rain soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life.I was in t
26、he kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasnt walking in his usual way. He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into th
27、e woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the wo
28、ods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Bra
29、nches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which
30、 I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck didnt threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the water cupped in
31、 my beautiful boys hands.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house._Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him._【答案】When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to a tap in our yar
32、d. He knelt there motionlessly, letting the drip slowly fill up his small “cup”. Just at that moment, his father returned. Thinking Billy was playing with water, he shouted, “Never waste water! If we ran out of the limited water, we would lose everything, even our lives.” Before Billy could make any
33、 explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him. I went up and held him in my arms. Wiping off his tears, I promised to help him save the baby deer. I found him a small pot to carry water. Holding the pot firm
34、ly, Billy walked toward the woods again. As I watched him disappearing into the woods, tears welled up in my eyes. Then came the miracle. Suddenly I felt a drop and then more drops dripping onto my face. I looked up in astonishment. Oh, it was rain! It was as if God was truly moved by Billys sincere
35、 sharing and came to save us finally.【解析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个干旱的季节，作者6岁的儿子用双手捧水，多次往森林里去，作者感到好奇，悄悄跟过去一看，眼前的情景让她为之感动。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当水没了，比利跳起来跑回房子。”可知，第一段可描写父亲回来时以为Billy在玩水责备他，把他弄哭了。由第二段首句内容“我决定不像他父亲那样责骂他，而是帮助他。”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰儿子并答应帮他一起救小鹿，最后终于下雨了。2.续写线索：儿子让水灌满“小杯子”父亲生气斥责Billy哭泣作者擦去儿子眼泪答应帮忙救小鹿看到下雨，感到惊
36、讶觉得上帝被感动了3.词汇激活：行为类装满：fill up/be filled with大喊大叫：shout/yell帮助：help/assist情绪类生气地：angrily/furiously惊讶地：in astonishment/amazingly感动的：moved/touched【点睛】高分句型1Before Billy could make any explanation, he walked into the house angrily, leaving Billy weeping there.（before引导时间状语从句）高分句型2Wiping off his tears, I
37、promised to help him save the baby deer.（wiping off为现在分词短语作状语）04Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Als nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike
38、. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much. It had more wi
39、nd and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steves arm. “Lets go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Bradys leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke f
40、rom burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the riverBrady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. Theyd never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog
41、 was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and
42、shouted for him，but he didnt come back.They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldnt blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way. They hadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark,
43、 and Brady came running toward him.Paragraph1：“Whereve you been?” Steve cried._Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees._【答案】Paragraph 1:“Whereve you been?” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope theyd just climbed.
44、When Steve still didnt get it, Brady grabbed the boys jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled
