1、46 46 观点态度观点态度 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题解读与写作素材储备相关话题解读与写作素材储备 相关话题写作解读相关话题写作解读 以简明扼要的主题句为写作核心，是该类作文的基本要求。但在写作过程中，往往会因为支撑信息的 说服力不够，或是提出建议时的论点涣散，而出现中心论点摇摆、模棱两可的错误。因此，论据的有效使 用，在“观点态度”类作文中就显得尤为重要。 在写作的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作: 1.表明态度。在陈列别人的观点之后，要清楚明确地表明自己的态度和立场，可以支持某观点，或者不 同意某
2、观点，为下文的辩论做好铺垫。 2.论据支撑论点。这是文章的重要部分。作者立足于自己的观点，从各个方面证明自己观点的正确性， 可通过反例或者经典例子证明自己的观点是正确的。 3.总结全文。 在文章结尾处要总结全文， 再次强调自己观点的准确性， 呼应前文， 使文章的结构更完整。 必备词汇必备词汇 表示赞成或喜欢表示赞成或喜欢 approve 同意;赞成 agree 同意 share 分享 prefer 更喜欢 wise 明智的 reasonable 理智的 favorable 赞成的 admire 赞赏 appreciate 欣赏 think highly of 高度评价 cannot agree
3、 more 非常同意 表示反对或厌恶表示反对或厌恶 disapprove 不赞成 disagree 不同意 unwise 不明智的 ridiculous 荒唐的 foolish 愚蠢的 childish 幼稚的 hate 讨厌 hatred 厌恶 angry 生气的 irritated 愤怒的 必备句型必备句型 表明观点表明观点 ( 1) I fully agree with the statement that. because. 我完全同意.这种说法，因为. (2) More and more people are talking about whether we should shop
4、online.越来越多的人讨论我们是否应该 网上购物。 (3) My opinion is that we should spend more time with our family. 我的观点是我们应该多花时间和家人待在一起。 (4) I think that traditional festivals are much more important than western festivals in China 我认为， 在中国， 传统节日比西方节日更重要。 (5) As far as 1 am concerned, I think that we should pay more att
5、ention to environmental protection. 就我而 言，我认为我们应该多花时间在环境保护上。 (6) Personally, I like to advocate that students should spend more time in exercise.个人而言，我提倡学生多 花时间锻炼。 (7) I dont think it is a good idea to lose weight by diet.我不认为节食减肥是个好主意。 (8) For me, the former is surely a wise choice.对我来说，前者无疑是个明智的选择
6、。 (9) From where I stand, I support that.从我的角度来看，我.支持. 陈述理由陈述理由 (1) I hold the view for the reason that.我坚持这个观点的理. (2) What is more, it will do good to our environment.还有，这对我们的环境是有益的。 (3) I think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons. 我认为 B 会更好，有以下三个理由。 (4) Firstly,(Reason 1). Se
7、condly,(Reason 2). Thirdly,Reason 3). 第一点，(理由一)。第二点，(理由二)。第三点，(理由三)。 (5) The reason is that.理由是. (6) For one thing, I think it is much more convenient to go by bike. For another thing,by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide. 一方面，我认为骑单车更方便。另一方面，这样做可以减少二氧化碳的排放。 (7) On no account can w
8、e ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。 总结全文总结全文 (1 ) Thus we can conclude that.因此我们总结. (2 ) So it can be concluded that . important to us.所以可以得出结论说，.对我们很重要。 (3) In a word, .play(s) an important role in our life.总而言之，.在我们生活中扮演着重要角色。 (4) From what has been discussed above, you may agree that.根
9、据上面讨论的，你也许会同意. (5) In conclusion, we should pay more attention to.总之，我们要更加重视. 相关话题满分作文解析相关话题满分作文解析 （一）（一） 文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇 英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。 写作要点： I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree
10、/)； 2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability.)； 3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/). 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数不少于80。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做 了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动
11、笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕 要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材 料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语 法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【参考范文参考范文】 范文1 I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we cant change our looks easily, but we can decide and
12、control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better. For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesnt look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our
13、society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool. So lets try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks. 范文2 In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look lik
14、e. A persons personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because its enjoyable to see a good-looking person. For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are
15、kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face. So lets try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks. （二二） 据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄
16、阳市教育主管部门正在研究制 定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)， 考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、 排球或足球， 总分(the score) 也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。请根据写作要 点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。 1要点提示： (l)观点明确（要么赞成，要么反对）： (2)理由充分（可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由）； (3)给出建议（围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议）。 2注意事项： (l)字数：90词左右： (2)行文应连贯流畅； (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 _ _
17、 _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇给材料作文。 襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案， 考虑在原有 项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的 学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观点。文 章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清 楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯； 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简
18、单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率； 词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 【参考范文参考范文】 In my opinion, I agree with the reform plan of “high school entrance examination” physical education examination. It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy. Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker. If the tot
19、al score of high school entrance examination sports is increased, Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education, and its easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen. Students will be healthier and more energetic in their
20、study. It is helpful to improve students comprehensive ability and quality. I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students interest in sports so as to improve students physical quality. （三三） 是否应该帮助陌生人是否应该帮助陌生人 最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如 何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Stra
21、ngers?”为题，写一篇短文。 原因 赞成 帮助他人是美德； 帮助他人就是帮助自己； 反对 怕陷入麻烦； 怕被误解； 你的观点?（至少两点） 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100 左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 参考词汇：美德 virtue Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangersDifferent students
22、 have different opinions 参考范文： Should We Help Strangers? Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangersDifferent students have different opinions. Some think we should try to help strangers Helping others is a virtue， and helping others is helping ourselvesWe may come acr
23、oss some trouble and need others help some dayIf everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，its hard to imagine what our world will be like. However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us troubleSometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness In my opinion， we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help， but we should also protect ourselves from getting into troubleIf everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love.
