1、31 31 感恩感恩 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题解读相关话题解读 感恩，不仅仅指感谢他人的大恩大德。感恩，可以是一种积极向上的生活态度，简单来说，就是对他 人给予的帮助、支持等心存感激，并能有所回馈，将感恩之心付诸行动。在我 导、朋友的关心和帮助等等。上述这些内容 都可以作为本话题的写作素材。感恩之情源于内心深处， 因此这类作文一-定要体现出真情实意。 相关话题写作示例指导相关话题写作示例指导 实践案例实践案例 题目题目 Write at least 60 words about the topic I
2、want to say thank you to ”. (请以“我想对 说声谢谢”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文。) Questions for reference: 1. Who do you want to say thank you to? 2. Why do you want to thank him / her? 3. How will you express your gratitude? 审题审题 这一题目的命题形式是半命题， 需要由学生将题目补充完整之后再写作。 相较于命题作文的过多限制， 半命题作文既能体现命题的中心，又给学生留下了一定的写作空间，写作自由度比较高。根据
3、题目的内容， 这篇作文的主题为感谢，题目中需要补全的，是感谢的对象，那么这个对象可以是父母、朋友，也可以是 老师等。在写作时，可以参考题目下方的提示问题，从感谢对象、感谢她/他的原因以及如何感谢她/他而层 层铺开。 段落结构段落结构 本文可采用“总一分”的写作结构: 总:开头部分简要提出文章的主题或中心，即所感谢的对象。 分: 分层叙述，对文章的主题展开说明，包括为何想感谢她他，以及如何回馈她/他等。注意，在总分 结构中，分总之间必须有紧密的内在联系，总述部分应是分述的总纲;分述部分要围绕总述的中心进行。情 感类的写作，一 定要能体现出真情实感。 核心语汇核心语汇 .thank sb. for
4、 (doing) sth. .感谢某人 be grateful to sb.感激、感谢某人 express ones gratitude 表达某人的感谢之情 be proud of sb.为某人感到自豪 buy sth. for sb./ buy sb. sth.为某人买某物 prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物 参考句型参考句型 Gratitude is the least of virtues; ingratitude the worst of vices.感恩是小德，忘恩是大恶。 Im truly grateful for your help.我非常感激你的帮助。 I
5、couldnt have done it without you.若是没有你，我不可能做到。 My parents are all busy doing . all day.我的父母整日忙. Theres no doubt that .是毫无疑向的。 We cannot emphasize the importance of . too much. 我们再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。 习作习作 1 题目题目 I want to say thank you to my class teacher I want to say thank you to my class teacher. She i
6、s also my English teacher. She is a very kindness and dedicated teacher. She often help me to improve my English after class and encourages me not to give up helps when I get low marks in exams. Because of her support, I always keep my motivation for my studies. Now I want to express my thanks by se
7、nding her a postcard and tell her how much I am thankful to her. 注：注： 1.文中 kindness 应该为 kind 2.文中 help 应该为 helps 点评点评: 该生能依据题目的要求展开写作，对三个提示问题“who“why和how依次进行说明，文章的结构和 内容较为完整，是一篇符合要求、完成度不错的习作。不过文中有些语法错误需改正，如:“she is a very kindness teacher中的kindness 应改为kind ，“she often help me to improve my English这一
8、句子中help 应加“s 。 写作写作 2 题目题目 1 want to say thank you to my mother Nothing is more powerful than mothers love in the world. I want to say thank you to my mother from the bottom of my heart.It is Mom who brought me to the world. It is Mom who brings me up and looks after me well no matter how tired she
9、is.Whenever I get into trouble or desperately need a hand, it is Mom who always supports me and gives me encouragement. Im so lucky that I grow up with her constant care and love. I would like to express my sincere gratitude by writing a thank-you letter to her and sending her a bunch of flowers,whi
10、ch is her favorite. Im sure she will like it. 注：注： 此处使用了两个强调句型 此处使用了状语从句 此处使用了定语从句 点评点评: 这篇习作脉络清楚，衔接自然，该生的词法和句法使用都准确到位，显示了扎实深厚的语言功底。尤 其值得借鉴的是， 本习作的语言表达丰富， 并运用了许多复杂的句式， 比如强调句it is Mom who brought me to the world ;让步状语从句“. no matter how tired she is ;定语从句“Which is her favorite等。这些语句的使 用让文章的句式更多样化，增加了可
11、读性。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） 题目题目 In your life, there must be someone who helps you, supports you or cheers you up and you are really thankful to him / her. Please write a passage with at least 60 words according to the topic Because of you. (在你的生活中， 一定有一 一个帮助你、 支持你、使你振作的人。你一定很感激她/他。请以“因为你”为题，写一篇
12、不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)。 Use the following points as reference. 1. Who are you really thankful to? 2. How did he/ she help you? Please give at least one example. 3. What will you do to him / her in return? 范文范文 Because of you It is lucky for me to have a wonderful English teacher. Because of her, I h
13、ave made great progress in English learning. I would never forget the time I met her at the beginning of the semester. She smiled at me. It seemed like a kind of encouragement to me. Every time I made a mistake or failed the exam, she always corrected my mistakes patiently, taught me English again a
14、nd again and encouraged me to try harder. Because of her, I was no longer afraid of learning English. Because of her, I made progress gradually. Because of her, I realized that hard work would pay off. For me, the best way to thank her is to learn English well to let her be proud of me. I will keep
15、working hard to achieve it! （二）（二） 题目题目 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“I want to give a gift. (以 “我想送给_份礼物” 为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)在过去的日子里，你一定 体验过收到礼物的欣喜和愉悦。新年伊始，你最想给谁送一份礼物，并谈谈为什么要送这份礼物。 注意注意: 1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following is for reference o
16、nly. (以下问题仅供参考。以下问题仅供参考。) 1. I want to give him/ her the gift because . 2. It will be useful / necessary / helpful to . 范文范文 I want to give my best friend Ellen a gift At the beginning of this year, I would like to send a gift to my best friend Ellen. I want to give her the gift, because I want to t
17、hank her for everything she has done for me. During my school days, she always helps me with my studies and tells me funny stories to make me happy when I feel upset. During the weekends and holidays, she often plays with me so that my life becomes more colorful I have chosen her favorite CD as the
18、New Year gift. Im sure she will be very surprised and she will love it very much because it is what she wants for along time. （三）（三） 题目题目 Mothers Day is coming. It is a great chance for us to express our love and gratitude to our mother. How will you celebrate Mothers Day? Please write a passage wit
19、h at least 60words according to the topic The coming Mothers Day. (母亲节即将到来，这是我们想母亲表达爱意和感激之情的绝佳机会。你会如何过母亲节?请 以“即将来临的母亲节”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文） 范文范文 The coming Mothers Day Im so lucky because I have a great mother. She takes good care of me no mater how tired she is She always supports me when 1 am upset
20、. She is always on my side if1 need her. In fact, there are too few things to do to pay back her love. However.,Mothers Day is coming. I would like to take the chance to express how much I love her and how much I am thankful to her. On that day, I will cook lunch for her. Usually, my mother prepares meals for me and I want to do that for her in return. Besides, I will prepare a bunch of flowers as a gift. She loves flowers. Whats more, I would like to take a family photo to record the happy moment. I hope my mother will enjoy an unforgettable Mothers Day.
