1、33 33 幸福幸福 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题解读相关话题解读 幸福，是-种心理感受，一种满足的心态。它可以是父母无微不至的关爱，也可以是假日里悠闲地品茶 读书的惬意。不同的人对幸福也有着不同的理解。 此话题的写作内容比较广泛，既可以让学生谈谈什么是幸福，什么让人感到幸福，也可以具体记叙-一 个幸福的瞬间，一件让人感到幸福的小事等。此话题的写作体裁多为记叙文和说明文。时态以现在时和过 去时为主。 相关话题写作示例指导相关话题写作示例指导 实践案例实践案例 题目题目 Write at least 60 w
2、ords about the topic makes me happy . (请以“_使我快乐”为题， 写篇 不少于 60 个词的短文。) Questions for reference: 1: hat makes you happy? 2. Why does it make you happy? 审审题题 这是篇半命题作文。 想要写好半命题作文， 首先要报一个恰当、 新颖的感目。做米说，半命题作文 中所需补充的内容往往是?作的中心内容。学生在将题目补充完整的同时， 其实也确定了写作的素材，明确了写作的中心。在拟题时，首先要在选材上认真思考，题目宜“大题小 作”，即选取一个小的切人点，以便写深
3、写透，写出特点。这篇作文的重点在于，要突出题目中所填信息与 幸福之间的关系一 为什么这件事能让我开心?这-点必须在文中有清晰的呈现。本文应以一般现在时为主， 需避免出现大量过去时的句子，或以较大的篇幅来叙述过去的事件。 段落结构段落结构 本文可采用“总一分总”的写作结构: 第一段:文章的总起，抛出主题“ 让我快乐”，横线上所填部分，可以是一个 爱好、一项运动等。 第二段:分层叙述，对主题展开说明，尤其要说明横线部分和快乐之间的联系。 第三段:概括文章内容，首尾呼应。 核心语汇核心语汇 bring happiness to sb.给某人带来幸福 be satisfied / pleased wi
4、th .对.感到高兴 link happiness to .把快乐.联系起来 . enable me to do sth.使我能. benefit from sth.受益于. be worth doing 值得做. relieve the pressure of 缓解.的压力 shape ones character 塑造性格 参考句型参考句型 It is my pleasure to do sth.我很乐意做某事。 Thats why I.那就是我.的原因。 not only . but also.不仅.而且. An advantage of it is that . .的一个好处. It
5、is +被强调部分+ that+句子的其他成分 正是. (强调句) 习作习作 1 Travelling makes me happy I like travelling. It makes me happy. During the winter and summer holidays, my parents often take me to many places at home and abroad. I can enjoy a lot of amazing landscapes and historical interests, delicious food, exciting exper
6、iences and so on during my journey. Furthermore, travelling is also a process of discovery, which I enjoy a lot. More importantly, travelling can help to reduce my study pressure, tell me how big and beautiful the world is, and let me know more about history and culture. Thats why it makes me so hap
7、py. 注：注： 这两句话可以合并成 travelling makes me happy 点评点评: 本文围绕“旅游使我愉快”这一主题展开写作，条理分明，结构合理，甸式多样。文中从几个层面阐述了 旅游给作者带来的愉悦， 内容充实， 表达清晰， 总的来说是一篇佳作。 个别语句可以合并为-句， 比如第一“ 、 第二句话，可以改成 travelling makes me happy,显得更为简洁。 习作习作 2 Reading makes me happy Ive formed the habit of reading books since I was a little girl For me.,
8、2530reading has been an enduring pleasure in my life.I enjoy the company of the magic world in Harry Potter, of evil criminals and thrilling cases in Sherlock Holmes, of thousands of interesting people I would have never met in real life. Reading not only provides me with knowledge, but also enables
9、 me to understand the world around me. It is an education in a classroom that has no walls. It is reading that always brings me fun and joy. 注注 这句话体现了学生的写作功底。 点评点评:本文清晰明了地阐述了“阅读使我愉快”的理由。文章的时态、语态以及人称的使用都非常娴熟， 其中“I enjoy the company of the magic world . in real life这句句子的表述，不仅增加了说服力，也体现了作 者很强的语言表达能力。文章
10、以一句强调句收尾，既增添了文采，也起到了点题的作用。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words on the topic“My Secrets of Happiness. (以“我的快乐秘诀”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。短文开头已给，所给部分不 计人字数。) Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I. Outline for reference : 1.
11、 Tell your secrets of happiness. 2. Give the supporting details. 优秀范文优秀范文 My secrets of happiness Everyone has his or her own secret of happiness, so do I. One of my secret of happiness to do sports regularly. I usually do yoga with my sister on Saturday morning .I enjoy yoga very much and at the sa
12、me time, I can relax myself and become healthier. Another secrete is that I make an everyday list of all the things and people am thankful to, so that I can be content with what I already have. 1 would enjoy my life rather than complain about everything These are my secrets of happiness, and I hope
13、it can be helpful to others. （二）（二） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words on the topic Id like to make . feel happy. 以我想使.高兴为题写一篇不少 于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。 Suggested phrases and expressions: not afford to buy spend . doing sth. with sb. bake sth. for sb. make ones own present(s) become healthier 优秀范文优秀范文 Id like
14、to make my mother feel happy Mother is always ready to give anything she has to her children, not to receive.Therefore, I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return. As Mothers Day is coming, I would like to take this chance to express my gratitude to my mother.Though I cant afford
15、 to buy something expensive for her,I can make a present for her on my own. These days, I have spent my spare time practicing baking cakes secretly. Im sure my home -made cake will be a big surprise for her. I just cant wait to see the smile on my mothers face and share her happiness. （三）（三） 题目题目 Wr
16、ite a passage on A happy memory in my junior high school in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (似“我初中时期的一次快乐的回忆”为题，写: 不少于 60 个词的文章。） Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考以下短语仅供参考): a spring outing a class meeting a party take part in play with be happy 优秀范文优秀范文 A happy memory in my junior
17、 high school The happy memories I have had in my junior high school are countless. The most impressive one is the celebration of my fourteenth birthday. Our school held a party in a hall for the students of our grade. On that day, I sang and danced with my classmates on the stage. Our performance was a big success, which made me happy and excited. After that, we had a big dinner together in the school canteen. The food was delicious and we liked it very much. I had a good time. It was really a happy and unforgettable memory for me.
