1、18 树木花草树木花草 2021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题精彩范文引路相关话题精彩范文引路 （一）（一） My Favorite Plant My favorite plant is the Lucky Bamboo. I was attracted by it when I first saw it. It is always green and easy to plant. It is also slim and tall. At first, I thought if I could give it enough
2、water, it would grow quickly. However, a month later, I found the leaves were still the same size as when I got the plant. I asked my grandma why the bamboo couldnt grow up. She told me that the Lucky Bamboo needs a lot of sunshine. So I moved it to my table by the window sat once. Now it is growing
3、 bigger and stronger. And it seems to be greener and greener. Thanks to the Lucky Bamboo, it brings me more fresh air and makes my room look nicer. 参考译文参考译文 我最喜欢的植物我最喜欢的植物 我最喜欢的植物是富贵竹。当我第一一次看到它时，就被它吸引住了。它四季常绿，并且很容易 种植。它又瘦又高。 开始， 我认为，只要给予它足够的水分， 它就可以长得很快。然而，一个月过去了，我发现叶 子还是一一样的大小， 就像我刚得到这棵植物时一样。 我问奶奶，
4、为什么富贵竹长不大。她告诉我， 富贵竹需要很多的阳光。所以我马上将它移到了窗边的桌子上。现在它长得又大又强壮。它看起来也 越来越绿了。 感谢富贵竹，它带给了我很多新鲜空气的同时，还让我的房间变得更漂亮了。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 bamboo 竹子 grow up 成长，长大 At once 立刻，马上 出彩句型出彩句型 slim 苗条的 I was attracted by.我.吸.引。 . is/ are sill the same size as. .还是.一样的大小。 It seems to be. 它似乎. 高分点评高分点评 本文是一篇较为成功的状物文章，围绕着富贵竹这一植物， 分别从其颜
5、色、形状、大小展开，随 后辅之以作者的种植经验，从各个角度展现了富责竹的特点。文章的词句描写非常具体详细，如easy to plant slim等，形象展示出了富贵竹独有的特点。 （二）（二） Tomatoes The tomatoes are very common, but they have some special characteristics. They are usually red and round. There are often some green leaves on the tomatoes. When you taste tomatoes, most of them
6、 are sour and sweet. But they are juicy, too. How delicious they are! They can also be used to make all kinds of tasty dishes.Besides, the tomatoes are green food. If you usually eat tomatoes, you will be healthy and strong. I like tomatoes very much. How about you? 参参考译文考译文 西红柿西红柿 西红柿非常常见，但它们也有一些特别
7、的特点。 它们通常是红红的、圆圆的。西红柿上通常会有一些绿色的叶子。 当你品尝时，大部分酸酸甜甜 的而且很多汁。它们是多么美味啊!它们也可以用来做各种各样美味的菜肴。除此以外，西红柿是绿色 食品。如果你经常吃西红柿，你会变得健康和强壮。 我非常喜欢西红柿。你呢? 亮点词汇亮点词汇 common 常见的;普通的 characteristic 特点;特征 sour .酸的 juicy 多汁的 green food 绿色食品 出彩句型出彩句型 They have some special characteristics 它们有一些特别的特点。 There are often some. .on. .
8、上通常会有一些. They can also be used to.它们也可以被用来. If you. ，you will be healthy and strong 如果你.你你会变得健康和强壮。 高分点评高分点评 本文描述西红柿时，从颜色、形状、味道等多方面展开，体现了作者对这种蔬菜的喜爱之情。how 引导的感叹句和 if 引导的条件状语从句，都为文章增色不少。文章层次清晰，介绍有条理，值得学习。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） Plant spring Spring is coming. Birds are singing and flowers are bloo
9、ming. I wanted to plant spring in my home, so I, together with my dad, went to the market and bought some flower seedlings. We prepared to plant them in the yard. When we were back home, we went into action in no time. Some time later, we finished. I will patiently wait for spring to come to the yar
10、d now. （二）（二） Rainwater is important to Plants We all know that water is very important to human beings, while rainwater is also very important to plants. Their mother gives their first life, but rainwater provides them the second life. Without rainwater, the plants, especially the wild plants will
11、thirst to die. As living in the wilderness, they cant get the att ention from human beings. So they have to drink the natural water, which is from the rainwater. We all know that we can bear hunger for a short time, but we couldnt stand thirsty. So do the plants. So, you can see how important rainwa
12、ter is to plants. 参考译文参考译文 我们都知道，水对人类来说是非常重要的，而雨水对于植物来说也是非常重要的。他们的母亲给他们 第一个生命，而雨水却为他们提供了第二个生命。没有雨水，植物，尤其是野生植物会渴死的。由于生活 在野外，他们得不到人们的照顾。所以他们只能喝天然水，也就是从雨水中来的。我们大家都知道短期内 的饥饿我们是可以承受的，但是口渴我们却是无法承受的。对于植物来说也是一样的。所以，可见植物对 雨水的重要性。 （三）（三） Most children like to eat meat, but I am one of them, I like to eat vege
13、table. The reasons I like vegetable are various, first, I like the color. When I see the green color, I will be very comfortable and have a good mood. Second, vegetable is good for my health, it contains all kinds of vitamins, the more I eat, the fitter I am. 参考译文参考译文 大部分孩子喜欢吃肉，但是我却和他们不一样，我喜欢吃蔬菜。我喜欢
14、吃蔬菜的原因有很多，第 一，我喜欢蔬菜的颜色。当我看到绿色，我会感到很舒适，有一个好的心情。第二，蔬菜对我的健康 有益，它包含了各种各样的维生素，我吃得越多蔬菜，就越健康。 （四）（四） Many of my friends do not like eating vegetables, because they think that vegetables are not delicious. They like KFC or Mcdonalds. Being different to them, I like vegetables very much. When I was a little
15、child, my mother told me that I should eat more vegetables, so that I can be tall. Besides, in order to make me eat, my mother often gave me some rewards. As time goes by, vegetables become my favorite. Vegetables contain many essential vitamins and other nutrients, which helps us build a healthy bo
16、dy. In addition, eating more vegetables can prevent diseases. Therefore, we should have the good habit to eat vegetables. 参考译文参考译文 我很多朋友都不喜欢吃蔬菜，因为他们觉得蔬菜不好吃。他们喜欢吃肯德基或者麦当劳。我和他 们不一样，我很喜欢吃蔬菜。当我还是个小孩的时候，我妈妈就告诉我应该多吃蔬菜，那样我才能长 高。而且，为了让我吃蔬菜，我妈妈经常给我一些奖励。时间久了，蔬菜就成了我喜欢吃的。蔬菜含 有很多有助于身体健康的必需维生素和其他营养。另外，多吃蔬菜能够预防疾病。因此，我们应该养 成吃蔬菜的习惯。
