1、15 自然风光自然风光 2021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题相关话题范文解析引路范文解析引路 （一）（一） The Yellow Mountain The Yellow Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province. It is one of the most well-known mountains in China. Every year, thousands of tourists at home and abroad come to visit it. Its
2、 a little far from the city. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. Climbing the mountain may make you a little tired. However, on the way to the top of the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning, when the sun rises, t
3、he sky looks very beautiful. You would be amazed by the wonderful scenery there. It is really worth visiting. 参考译文参考译文 黄山黄山 黄山位于安徽省的南部。它是中国的名山之一。 每年，成千上万的中外游客去那里游览。它离市区有 点远。坐汽车的话，大概要 3 个小时才能到达那里。爬山可能会使你有点累。然而，在向山顶前进的过程 中，你可以欣赏环绕着你的云海、奇松和怪石。清晨，当太阳升起来时，天空看起来非常美丽。 你会惊讶于那里的美丽景色。它真的很值得去游玩。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 1.tho
4、usands of 成千上万的 2.at home and abroad 海内外;中外 3.tired 疲倦的;劳累的 4.unique 独特的;独一无二的 5.amaze 使惊讶;感到惊讶 出彩句型出彩句型 1. is located in. .位于. 2.It is one of the most well-known.它是最著名.之.。 3.It takes yo. to do sth.这会花费. (时间等)去做某事。 4.On the way t. you can. 在.的路上，你可以. 5.It is worth doing sth.值得做某事。 高分点评高分点评 本文围绕中国的一座
5、名山一黄山展开， 介绍了它的概况、云海、奇松、怪石、日出等，呈现出绝美的 山上奇景。作者的文笔非常出色，sea of clouds unique rocks等表达惟妙惟肖地展现了黄山之景。文中的 句式多变，如“it”引导的形式主语句、动词的-ing 形式作主语等，都是文章的加分点。 （二）（二） Beihai Beach Beihai Beach is very famous in my city. The beach lies in the north of the city, about 8 kilometres away. lts one of the best beaches in t
6、he city. The sand on the beach is fine, soft and clean. And the water is clear with small waves.Therefore, its very suitable for swimming and playing beach volleyball. Many people come here to spend their holidays. Everyone says it is a beautiful place to travel. Moreover, the people here are very f
7、riendly. I think you all can enjoy yourselves here. 参考译文参考译文 北海滩北海滩 北海滩在我的城市非常出名。这个沙滩位于城市的北部，距离城市大约 8 公里。它是城中最好的沙滩 之一。 沙滩上的沙质很好，又柔软，又干净。海水很清澈，带有小小的浪花。因此，这里非常适合游泳和打 沙滩排球。很多人来这里度假。每个人都说这是一个适合游览的美丽的地方。而且，这里的人非常友好。 我觉得你们都会在这里玩得很开心。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 1.soft 柔软的 2.wave 波浪 3.suitable 适合的 4.beach volleyball 沙滩排球 5.e
8、njoy oneself 玩得开心 出彩句型出彩句型 1. lies in. .位. 2.The water is clear with small waves.海水很清，带有小小的浪花。 3.Its very suitable for. 非常适宜做. 4.Many people come here to spend their holidays.很多人来这里度假。 5.You all can enjoy yourselves here.你们都会在这里玩得很开心。 高分点评高分点评 本文将北海滩的美丽景色呈现在我们面前，充满了作者对这一片沙滩的热爱之情。 文章中的句子均简 单明了，如表示位置的
9、lie n.、描述海水的The water is clear with small waves，都清楚地描述了海滩的朴 素之美，展示了作者扎实的语言功底。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） Green grasses，blue lakes and beautiful mountains are waiting for you!Welcome to colorful nature pare! There is a clean river. There are some colorful flowers. There is a beautiful mountain near
10、the nature park. The air is fresh. The sky is blue. The clouds are white. The tree is green. The bridge is tall. The grass is green. I can run on the grass. There is a path near the lake. There are many fish in the lake. There is a forest in the nature park. There are many trees on the mountains. Th
11、ere are many flowers near the path. Look! There are some birds in the sky. One, two, three oh! So many! I like this nature park very much. I am so excited. 参考译文：参考译文： 绿色的草，蓝色的湖和漂亮的山脉在这里等你!欢迎你来到色彩丰富的自然公园! 这有一个干净的河流，有许多色彩丰富的花朵，有一个漂亮的山脉在自然公园里。空气是新鲜的， 天空是蓝的，云是雪白的，树是绿的，桥是高的，草是绿的。我能在草上奔跑。湖泊旁边有一条小路， 有许多鱼在湖
12、泊里，有一片森林在自然公园里，有许多树在山脉上，有许多花在小路旁边。 我非常喜欢这个自然公园，我好兴奋! （二）（二） Beautiful spring spring with light footsteps coming toward us, in this season for revival, everything around become full of vitality, lets find together followed in the footsteps of spring, the beauty of spring! Spring thunder rumbled with
13、continuous rain, rain moisten the whole of the earth. Feline winter in the land of grass after the baptism of the spring rains are scrambling to drill out of the earth. Although small, although very thin, although very soft but the grass is very strong, they will still stand tall, spring back to pre
14、vent the growth of the grass. The earth covered with a layer of green. Spring is a colourful flowers blooming season, look at the shops opened, yellow primrose, blow the trumpet, as if to say: spring is coming! Yellow peach blossom zhankai smiling faces, this beautiful peach blossom for park added a
15、 lot of vitality, peach blossom has a lot of color, have a plenty of mei red, or pink, and white. The peach blossom is so delicate, mei red and pink peach blossom is so shy like a sensitive plant, not all of the peach blossom is temperamental. Look at that white peach blossom is that race to the ope
16、n atmosphere, to meet the baptism of the rain. More let a person like rape, far look like the boundless yellow carpet on the shop. Spring is so beautiful! Look at that, in the field a view of jubilation, farmers are permeated with smile on her face, trying to sow together. The distance of children p
17、ut the kite, they release their dreams. It was a happy moment. It was a beautiful spring, the spring of hope, joy of spring. In the spring, we also want to sow, planted the seeds of hope with hard sweat in it to make it a little bit of growing up, fly our dreams! 参考译文参考译文 美丽的春天春天迈着轻盈的脚步向我们走来了，在这万物复苏
18、的季节，周围的一切都变得生机勃 勃，让我们跟随着春的脚步一起寻找春天的美丽吧! 轰隆隆的春雷带来了绵绵的春雨，春雨滋润了整个大地。在土地里猫冬的小草经过春雨的洗礼后 个个争先恐后的钻出了大地。虽然很小，虽然很细，虽然很柔软但小草非常的坚强，它们仍会挺直腰 板，春寒又袭都阻止不了小草的生长。给大地披上了一层新绿。 春天是一个五颜六色、百花盛开的季节，看那迎春花开了，黄黄的迎春花吹起了小喇叭，好像在 说：“春天来了!一朵朵桃花绽开了笑脸，这美丽的桃花给公园增添了许多生机，桃花有很多颜色，有 的是玫红的，有的是粉红的，还有雪白的。玫红色的桃花是那么娇滴滴的，而粉红色的桃花呢却是那 么的羞涩像含羞草一
19、样，可不是所有的桃花都是那么的娇气。看那白色的桃花是那样的大气都竞相开 放，迎接春雨的洗礼。更让人喜欢的是油菜花，远看就像铺上了无边无际的黄地毯。春天好美丽呀! 看那田野里，一片欢腾的景色，农民脸上都洋溢着微笑，一起来努力地播种。远处小朋友放着风 筝，他们放飞了自己的梦想。那真是快乐的时刻。 这真是一个美丽的春天、希望的春天、快乐的春天。在这春天里我们也要播种，种下希望的种子 用辛勤的汗水浇灌它让它一点点的长大，放飞我们的梦想吧! （三）（三） A Spring Morning It was early in the morning. The sun was just creeping(爬)
20、out of the eastern horizon(地平线) and golden red was penetrating (穿透) through the white clouds and across the sky. The lakes, the trees and the bamboos looked as if they were all gilded. The ground was covered with tender grass, on whose blades some dew drops were glistening(晶莹剔透) under the sunshine.
21、Birds flew around the woods singing cheerfully and restlessly. Some boys were quietly jogging along the path, while a couple of girls were reading aloud under the trees lining the bank of the lake. A gentle breeze came up, wrinkling(使起皱) the surface of the lake. It was really a beautiful and lively morning. 参考译文参考译文 春晨春晨 清晨时分，太阳从东边的地平线慢慢爬起，一片金黄透过白色的云彩，划过天空。湖泊、树木和 竹林都似乎染上了金边。地面上长满了绿油油的小草，小草的叶片上，几滴露珠在阳光的照耀下晶莹 剔透。 鸟儿在树林里飞翔，不停地欢唱。一些男孩子沿着小路安静地慢跑，而一些女生则坐在湖边成排 的树下大声朗读。 一阵清风吹来，湖面掀起了涟漪。真是一个美丽动人而又意气盎然的清晨。
