1、2020-2021 学年度新目标九年级上册英语期末复习专练（书面表达） 1仔细阅读下列英语书信，并根据书信中的要求，完成书面表达。 Dear students: Our school English paper, Junior English, is going to hold an English Writing Contest next week for all Grade Nine Students. The topic of the contest is about your biggest problem in learning English after you became a
2、Grade Nine student, and how you plan to solve the problem. You should write at least three solutions to your problem. You must pay special attention to the following points: 1. suppose youre Li Ping, that is to say: your real name is not allowed; 2. write a passage with 80 words in the form of a let
3、ter; the beginning and the ending have been written for you; but the number of the words will not be counted in. 3. last but not least, you should keep your writing neat and clean. Welcome all the Grade Nine students to join in the writing contest. Yours truly, Chief Editor: John Smith Dear Chief Ed
4、itor, Im writing to tell you about my English studies right now as a Grade Nine student. _ _ _ _ I think I will try to get more interested in English learning and do better in it than before. Thank you! Yours truly, Li Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Chief Editor, Im writing to tell you about my English studies r
5、ight now as a Grade Nine student. I have many problems in my English study. But the biggest problem is that my vocabulary is rather small. As a result, I can neither read fast nor understand well, and its really not easy for me to keep in new words in mind. To overcome the difficulty, I have worked
6、out a plan. I recite one or two pages of English words every day, and practice them more. I keep a diary in English and practice writing twice a week. I believe that so long as I practice more, Ill be able to remember the words better. I think I will try to get more interested in English learning an
7、d do better in it than before. Thank you! Yours truly, Li Ping 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍作为一名九年级学生在 学习英语中遇到的最大问题，以及你打算如何解决这个问题。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理 而又紧扣主题的发挥。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；文章开头已给出，写作 时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍你在英语学习中遇到的最大问题以及打算如何解决这个问题； 文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用
8、句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的 准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。 2假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教 Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下 要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。 要点： 1.端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原)； 2.活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况)。 参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar 写作要求： 1.所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2词数：100词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack， The Dragon Boat Festiv
9、al is coming in a few days._ _ _ _ _ _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. Im writing to invite you to spend the festival with my family. To remember Qu Yuan, Chinese people have been celebrating it on May 5th of the lunar cal
10、endar for centuries. On that day, well try to make zongzi with my grandmas help. In the afternoon, we are going to watch the boat races held in Dongpo Lake at 2 oclock. During the exciting races, the dragon boat teams compete with each other while people on each bank cheer up. Im sure youll have a f
11、antastic day. Wish you will join us. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍端午节以及龙舟赛。注 意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接 上文，根据要点提示具体介绍端午节的时间，人们的活动以及龙舟赛的情况；文中一定要包含题干中列出 的所有要点； 可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，
12、语法运用的准确度， 上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。 3有些学生迷恋上网，班主任要再下周班会讨论有关上网的问题。假如你是班主任，根据内容提示写一篇 80 字左右的讲话稿。开头已给出。 益处：学习使用电脑，查学习资料，了解更多的知识 弊端：花更多的时间玩游戏，网上聊天，学习越来越差 建议：在校学习时，不上网，假期可以适当上网，但不能整天沉迷其中。 Good afternoon，everyone. This class well talk about a problem about getting on line. Its good _ _ 【答案】Good afternoon, every
13、one. In this class well talk about a problem about getting on line. Its good for you to learn to how to use computers. You can find out what you need in your study. You can know more knowledge, such as the news and the weather forecasting. But as a student, you mustnt spend too much time on it. Beca
14、use some of you like playing computer games or chatting to each other on line. Some students have failed in exams because of getting on line. So I think you shouldnt get on line during the school time. When you have a holiday, you can get on line to learn something useful and helpful. Please remembe
15、r not to get lost in it. 【详解】 本文属于材料作文，讨论有关上网的问题。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符 合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文， 很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、 主谓一致， 特别使用一些亮点词句， 如 find out, such as, spend+时间+on, each other, because of以及 get lost in。 增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关
16、键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放 的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及 简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自 然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构 是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求
17、等。 4、俗话说“近朱者赤”。最近李华因为结交了一位优秀的同学作为朋友，在他的影响和帮助下，李华发生了 巨大的变化，请你根据以下的提示和要求写一篇短文，详细介绍李华的变化。 过去 现在 1、上学经常迟到；上课喜欢讲话； 2、晚上喜欢熬夜玩电脑游戏，没时间完成作业； 1、准时来校，上课专心听讲； 2、完成各科作业且成绩取得进步； 3、 3、 要求：1、以上内容均要体现，可适当拓展，语句通顺，意思连贯。 2、不少于 80词，开头已给出，不计入总字数。 3、书写工整，注意段落格式。 After making friends with an excellent classmate, Li Hua ha
18、s changed a lot recently._ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文： After making friends with an excellent classmate, Li Hua has changed a lot recently. He used to be late for school, but now he gets to school on time every day. He used to talk in class, but now he listens attentively in class. In the evening, he used to
19、stay up late playing computer games. But now he finishes his homework on time and gets good grades in his exams. He used to fight with other students, but now he is ready to help others and gets on well with his classmates. People sure change. What a good boy Li Hua is now. 【详解】 1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格内容，以第
20、一人称介绍李华的变化，提示中的内容均要体现，且要进行适当 发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，结合一般过去时和一般现在时来介绍李华的变化，可采用 used to 介绍过去，用 but now 引出现在。第一段题目已给出；第二段写李华的具体变化；第三段收尾。要保证单词 和语法正确，语句通顺，内容连贯。 5中国结是中国的一种传统艺术形式。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文来介绍中国结。 1.中国结都是由一根绳或线（a single rope and thread）编成的。 2.每一个中国结都根据其特定的（specific）外形和意义来命名。 3.过去人们用中国结来记录事件，现在人们主要把它当作
21、装饰物（decoration） 。 4.中国结是幸福和好运的象征。 要求： 1.语句通顺，要点齐全。 2.90词左右。首句已给出不计入总词数。 Making Chinese knots is a traditional art form of China. _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文 Making Chinese knots is a traditional art form of China. It is famous in China and has a long history. Every knot is made with a single rope or thread. Ev
22、ery knot is named by its specific form and meaning. In the past, Chinese knots were used to record events by people. But now it is mainly used as a decoration. The Chinese knot is usually red. In China it is seen as a symbol of happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it
23、in our houses. It has become popular in China and all over the world. 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。中国结是中国的一种传统艺术形式，要求根据要点提示，从中国结的构 成、命名、象征等方面，写一篇英语短文来介绍中国结。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据的提示 内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用 一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表
24、达习惯；层次 要分明、条理要清晰。 6 现代科技飞速发展，各种高科技产品为我们的生活带来了极大的便利，尤其是电脑，请以“Computer” 为题，并根据下面的内容要点，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 电脑是上个世纪最伟大的发明之一。 2. 第一台电脑在 1946 年诞生于美国。它体积庞大且价格昂贵，只允许在银行和一些政府机关使用。 3. 现在，电脑越来越小，且价格越来越便宜。它被广泛地运用于人们的日常生活中。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文 Computer is one of the greatest inventions in the last century. The first
25、computer was invented in America in 1946. It was very big and the price was very high. It was only used by banks and government organizations. Now, computer is becoming smaller and smaller and the price is lower and lower. It is widely used in peoples daily life. It is used for helping us to work an
26、d study. People can use it to chat online, search for information, watch movies, shop online and so on. It has become one of the most necessary things in our life. 【详解】 1.题干解读：本题是材料作文，要求就“Computer”这一主题，根据所给要点提示写一篇关于电脑的文章。 写作时不要遗漏要点，将要点全部都写出即可。 2.写作指导：本文写作涉及关于电脑的一些历史知识，在对这部分进行描述时，要用一般过去时，其余部分 则可使用一般现
27、在时。文章应思路清晰，逻辑通顺，注意单词拼写、语法时态使用正确。 7假如你将成为一名司机，你觉得哪些事情是应该做的，哪些事情是不应该做的？请根据以下提示写一篇 短文，不少于 60词。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，句式规范。 提示：1. 不能无证驾驶，应懂得交通规则； 2. 遵守交通法规，不应该闯红灯； 3. 不应该酒后驾车； 4. 不应该在驾车时接打电话。 【答案】If you want to become a driver, you should learn to drive carefully and understand some knowledge about driving. First
28、, you shouldnt drive without a drivers license. You should study the traffic rules. Second, you must obey the traffic rules and dont go when the traffic light is red. Third, you mustnt drive after drinking. Its very dangerous. Fourth, you shouldnt call when driving. 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文属于说明文写作，先总述司机要求 to
29、drive carefully and understand some knowledge about driving；接着分四点介绍哪些事情是应该做的，哪些事情是不应该做的。 2.例文点评：这篇习作虽然只有一个自然段，但结构清晰，是“总分式”结构，用第二人称介绍了一些驾驶 常识。内容丰富，条理清楚，意思连贯，句式规范，是一篇优秀的习作。 3.高分亮点： 短语：want to do、learn to do、a drivers license、the traffic rules、after drinking 句型：Second, you must obey the traffic rules a
30、nd dont go when the traffic light is red.（复杂并列结构） If you want to become a driver, you should learn to drive carefully and understand some knowledge about driving. （条件状语从句） Fourth, you shouldnt call when driving.（非谓语动词结构） 【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考 查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗
31、漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语 和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 8昨天夜里城市上空出现不明飞行物体，同学们纷纷猜测。请根据下面表格中的信息写一篇 80 词左右的 短文。 Who What Annie A sky lantern gave off light Bob A UFO didnt run fast Peter A plane search for something Others The police A hot balloon 要求: 1. 词数 80左右; 2. 意思表达连贯正确,可适当发挥合理想象。 _ _ _ _ 【答案】A piece
32、 of surprising news spread all around the city. Something strange appeared in the sky last night. Annie thought it might be a sky lantern because it could give off light. Bob thought it could be a UFO, although it didnt run fast. Peter thought it must be a plane searching for something. Others thoug
33、ht it might be a star falling. In the end, the police told the public it was a hot balloon. No more mystery now! 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是关于良好饮食习惯的建议，先总说一条令人惊讶的消息 Something strange appeared in the sky last night.，再介绍人们的不同反应，最后由警察揭秘 it was a hot balloon。 2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构。作者运用一般过去时态以第三人称展开叙述，内容充实，结构 完整，条理清晰，
34、是一篇优秀的习作。 3.高分亮点： 短语：a piece of, all around the city, something strange, in the sky, give off, search for , in the end. 句型：Annie thought it might be a sky lantern because it could give off light.（复杂从句结构） Bob thought it could be a UFO, although it didnt run fast.（让步状语从句） Peter thought it must be a pl
35、ane searching for something.（宾语从句） 【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考 查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语 和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 9冼星海是中国最伟大的作曲家之一。请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇关于冼星海的介绍文章。 1.他于 1905 年出生于澳门，与 1945 年去世。 2.曾经在巴黎学习音乐。 3.在 1939年用六天时间写出了黄河大合唱 （The Yellow River Cantata
36、） 。 4.他把中国音乐和西方音乐融合在一起，使全世界的人了解了中国音乐。他的许多歌曲都很受欢迎，流 行了六十多年。 5.他被称为“人民音乐家（Peoples Musician）”。 要求：1.不能逐句翻译。 2.词数为 80 左右。 _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文 Xian Xinghai was one of the greatest musicians in China. He was born in Macao in 1905. He once studied music in Paris. Xian was famous for the song The Yellow River
37、Cantata. He wrote it in 1939. He spent only six days finishing it. He was good at mixing Chinese music with Western music. He wrote many songs. His music made people all over the world learn more about Chinese music. Some of his songs have been popular for more than sixty years. His music made him f
38、amous in China. Thats why he was called “Peoples musician”. He died in 1945. 【详解】 1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，介绍中国最伟大的作曲家之一冼星海，要求给出了 5点提示：他的出 生及去世的时间，学习经历及在音乐方面的贡献。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称；时态采用一般过去时态，写作中适当用一些连词，短语或句型；使文章 看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也符合语法结构，内容包括每一个要点提示，可适当发挥注意语言的逻 辑性。 10俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的 关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇文章，投稿到某英文版的
