1、51 51 社会热点作文之课外实践社会热点作文之课外实践 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） （一）（一） 为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一 篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。 活动内容： 1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念； 2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡 70 年巨变。 你的感想： 1师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助； 2倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国； 3. （考生自己发挥） 要求： 1词数 100 左右。开头已给出，不计人总词
2、数。 2所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。 3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 参考词汇：市民广场 Civic Square In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关
3、信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供 的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念； 2下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮 助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时， 人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语， 尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓 一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具
4、有条理性。 【参考参考范文范文】 In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the Peoples Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sa
5、ng, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizens Square. In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo
6、exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。 该句话 用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。 【高分句型二】 In Peoples Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the gr
7、eat changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该 句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。 （二）（二） 假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经 历。 要求：1.80120 词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Have you ever got close to the countrys
8、ide and had a special experience? Let me share mine! _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于一篇图表作文， 根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。 人称为第一 人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的 信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注 意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系， 表达具有条理性。 多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。 高分句型： 1
9、.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before. 我们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书 中得不到的东西。that we couldnt get from books before.是定语从句，修饰不定代词something。2. We really hope well have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope 后面是省略t
10、hat的宾语从句。 【参考范文参考范文】 Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine. During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school activity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot.
11、 Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting! We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes
12、 of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers life was getting better and better. We really hope well have another activity like that this winter vacation! （三）（三） 人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第 一次。请根据提示，就你的第一次写一篇
13、短文。 内容包括： 1. 第一次的整个过程； 2. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时 态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。 首先开门见山，介绍自
14、己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己 的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣 主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80100。 【参考范文参考范文】 The first time to learn to swim As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim. Last summer vacation, my fat
15、her took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest p
16、art of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldnt move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldnt swim very well, I was very happy. I will never forget this experience, because I not only
17、learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave! （四）（四） 5 月 18 日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历 和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。 注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并 在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达 出来，在此
18、基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注 意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 【参考范文参考范文】 Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science muse
19、ums, tea museums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favorite. Ive been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What Im inter
20、ested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me. Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more? （五）（五） 近几年，旅游已经成为一项全民活动。初中生们旅游的机会也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生 们津津乐道的话题。 你的美国朋友 Tom 非常喜欢中国文化，去年暑假你和他一起从
21、桂林出发去北京旅游了几天，你们 参观了一些著名景点， 还品尝了一些有名的小吃， 请把你们的旅游经历写成一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 参考范文参考范文： A Trip to Beijing My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day， we visited the Palace Museum and Tiananmen Square. The next day， we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. Altho
22、ugh we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world. Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin. The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.
