1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：letter,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作目标是“劝说信”。劝说信要求就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题劝说某人采纳自己的建议或看法。可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作： 第一部分：引入话题。写信人首先需要说明写信的主要目的。如果需要的话，也可以大致作一下自我介绍。 第二部分：阐述理由。这是劝说信的主体和核心部分。写信人需要在这部分条理地列出自己的理由。理由要客观，真实，有说服力，要重点突出，层次分明。同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功
2、力，以便更好地展现自己的立场。 第三部分：总结全文。重申自己的核心观点，提出希望。这部分要注意语言的简练和冲击力，切记冗杂拖拉的表达。,写作指导,1.引入： (1)I am writing to. (2)These days we are often told that.But is this really the case. (3)Faced with.，quite a few people argue that. (4)Currently there is a widespread concern that. (5)Now people in growing numbers are com
3、ing to realize that. (6)I was very worried when I heard that.,常用表达,2.阐述： (1)Here are my reasons.First of all，I think it would be better if. (2)On the one hand.，on the other hand. (3)Moreover./Whats more. (4)However./Instead. (5)Here Id like to give my advice on. (6)I would like to suggest that./If I
4、 were you，I would.,3.总结： (1)All things considered. (2)As far as Im concerned. (3)Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision. (4)I do hope that.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你是李华，请你给在外地读书并正在生病的朋友王鹏写一封100词左右的说服性信函，说明锻炼的重要性和好处，鼓励他积极锻炼身体，从而为更好地学习打下基础。,审题 写作要求是给正在生病的朋友写一封信，劝他积极锻炼身体。写作
5、时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是劝说别人积极锻炼身体，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。,审题谋篇,谋篇 第一段：应开门见山，引入话题。 第二段：阐述理由，给出建议。 第三段：总结全文，发出希望。 最后：结束语。,必备词汇 1.全神贯注于 _ 2.对有害 _ 3.对有益处 _ 4.导致，有助于 _ 5.不时地 _ 6.总之 _ 7.提出 _ 8.从今以后 _,遣词造句,查看答案,be absorbed in,be harmful to/do harm to,be benefi
6、cial to/do sb. good,contribute to/result in/lead to,from time to time,in a word,put forward,from now on,关键句式 1.你已经全身心投入学习了。 You have been so absorbed in study. 2.你没有时间锻炼。 You have had no time for exercise. 3.你有了健康的身体。 You have a strong body.4.你就会一直学习而不生病。 You can keep on studying without feeling bad
7、 or ill.,句式升级 1.请把第一句和第二句按括号内的提示词合成一句话。 (1)_(because) (2)_(so.that.),查看答案,You have had no time for exercise because you have been so absorbed in study.,You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.,2.请把第三句和第四句按括号内的提示词合成一句话。 (1)_(unless) (2)_(“only状语从句”引起的倒装句),查看答案,You ca
8、nt keep on studying without feeling bad or ill unless you have a strong body.,Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文 Dear Wang Peng， I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you hav
9、e got better now.You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.But it is really harmful to your health.I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.,查看答案,In fact，exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind.Only
10、 when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill.Otherwise，your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness. In a word，exercise is as useful and important as your study.So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hours exercise every day from now on. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,
