1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Seven WritingA film review,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是写电影评论，即影评。影评一般包括三方面内容：背景介绍、内容简介及电影评论。具体来说一般包括以下三部分： 1.简介背景。对电影名称、导演和演员等作简要介绍。 2.简述故事情节。对影片内容进行简要介绍。 3.发表评论。评论部分是影评的重点，可以从不同角度进行评价。最后进行总体评价。,1.A truly wonderful film can leave you thinking and feeling for hours
2、 after walking out of the cinema. 2.I will recommend a quite good movie called “.”.Its really enjoyable. 3.I like the film “.” very much！.is brave and funny. 4.I will be a person like.He is warm-hearted.Most importantly，he is a real hero！He is my idol! 5.The movie is also sending such a message to u
3、s. 6.The movie is intended to tell people that.by this character.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,请根据下面的提示写一篇关于电影战狼(Wolf Warriors )的影评。 1.由吴京导演，由吴京及其他著名演员(包括一名英国演员)主演； 2.主人公冷锋被军队开除后，意外卷入非洲某国家的叛乱，本可以安全离开，但他选择了留下救人； 3.反映主题：强大的中国可以保护所有的中国人不受伤害。 注意：词数100左右。 参考词汇：叛乱rebellion,审题 写作要求是写一篇影评。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇影
4、评，写作中应注意影评的常规格式。 2.主体时态：可采用一般过去时态介绍背景，采用一般现在时态介绍剧情并作出评价。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍一部电影，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,谋篇 第一部分：简介电影情况(导演、演员、受欢迎情况等)。 第二部分：叙述电影背景和情节。 第三部分：谈谈对电影的评价。,必备词汇 1.主演 _ 2.被开除 _ 3.被卷入 _ 4.处于危险中 _ 5.保护免受 _ 6.喜欢 _,查看答案,star in,be removed from.,be involved in,in danger,protect.from.,be fond of,关键句式 1.2017年的电影战
5、狼由吴京导演。 The film Wolf Warriors was directed by Wu Jing in 2017. 2.这部电影在中国大受欢迎。 This film was very popular in China. 3.他正要开始一种悠闲的生活。 He was about to begin a casual life. 4.但是那时一场意外改变了他的整个生活。 But at that time an accident changed his whole life. 5.中国很强大。 China is very strong.,6.中国能保护所有中国人不受伤害。 China ca
6、n protect all the Chinese people from being hurt.,句式升级 1.请把句1和句2按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)The film Wolf Warriors ， ，was very popular in China in 2017.(定语从句) (2)The film Wolf Warriors ， ，was very popular in China in 2017.(非谓语动词作定语) 2.请把句3和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)He was about to begin a casual life _ _.(并列句) (2
7、)He was about to begin a casual life _. (when引导时间状语从句),查看答案,which was directed by Wu Jing,directed by Wu Jing,but at that time an accident changed his,whole life,when an accident changed his whole life,3.请把句5和句6按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)China is very strong _ _.(并列句) (2)China is _ _.(so.that.),查看答案,and she
8、 can protect all the Chinese people from being,hurt,so strong that she can protect all the Chinese people from being,hurt,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,参考范文 The film Wolf Warriors ，directed by Wu Jing，was very popular in China in 2017.Wu Jing and some other famous actors starred in it，i
9、ncluding a famous actor from England.A soldier named Leng Feng was removed from the army.He was about to begin a casual life when an accident changed his whole life.,查看答案,查看答案,He was involved in a rebellion in some country in Africa.He could have left safely，but he chose to stay to save the people in danger.This film shows that China is so strong that she can protect all the Chinese people from being hurt，which is the important reason why so many people are fond of it.,
