1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Eight WritingDescribing your dream house,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本文为说明文体裁，写该类文章要把握要点，层次分明，顺序合理。描写梦想之屋时，通常要包括这些方面：梦想之屋的类型，梦想这样房屋的原因，还有描述它的位置、形状、大小、材料、结构、内部设施、功能、独特特征，以及对这个梦想之屋的评价。,写作指导,1.Im often dreaming of owning a house with. 2.I need a house./My dream house is. 3.I
2、t is located in/on./It stands./It lies./It is built where. 4.It looks like./It is like./It is big/small. 5.There is.in it.It has. 6.It is made up of./It consists of./It is made of./.is used to build it. 7.It is convenient/easy/good for./It provides./It makes. 8.That is my dream house./I like such a
3、house./Such is my dream house.,常用表达,PART 2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,最近中美中学生联谊会向你校征集“My Dream Home”的设计。请你根据以下信息用英文写一篇短文。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。,审题 梦想之屋是一篇说明文，根据要点提示要叙述清楚梦想之屋的布局，理清以下要点：(1)梦想之屋的类型：是宫殿、木屋、别墅，并说明理由；(2)梦想之屋的位置：在市中心、郊区、乡下；(3)梦想之屋的特点：形状、材料、颜色、风格；(4)梦想之屋的内外设施、配备家具、组成部分； (5)对梦想之
4、屋的整体评价或结束语；同时还要有个人想法，人称多用第一人称，时态为一般现在时和将来时。 谋篇 Para.1 开门见山，谈梦想之屋的布局； Para.2 承接上文，叙述梦想之屋的环境； Para.3 评价和感想。,审题谋篇,_ _ _ _ _,必备词汇 1.在一楼 2.与某人生活在一起 3.另外，此外 4.与某人聊天 5.在前面,遣词造句,查看答案,on the first floor,live with sb.,in addition,chat with sb.,in front of.,关键句式 1.我的祖父母与我们一起住在这个大房子里，他们的房间在三楼。 My grandparents l
5、ive with us in this big house.Their room is on the third floor. 2.房子前面是一个游泳池，在夏天我们可以在里面游泳。 There is a swimming pool in front of the house in which we can swim in summer. 3.住在梦想之屋里很舒服。 To live in my dream home is very comfortable.,句式升级 1.用定语从句改写句1。 _ 2.用倒装句改写句2。 _ 3.用it作形式主语改写句3。 _,My grandparents li
6、ve with us in this big house whose room is on the third floor.,In front of the house is a swimming pool in which we can swim in summer.,It is very comfortable to live in my dream home.,查看答案,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,On the ground floor there is a kitchen，a dining room and a bat
7、hroom.My bedroom，study and bathroom are on the first floor.My parents room is on the second floor，which is also very big and clean.My grandparents live with us in this big house whose room is on the third floor.In addition，on the fourth floor，I can play games and chat with friends there.,参考范文,查看答案,M
8、y dream home is very big and clean.It has at least five floors and fifteen rooms.,I also have a big and nice garden which has some big trees.It is beside the house with many flowers and vegetables in it.I can sit under the trees with my family.In front of the house is a swimming pool in which we can swim in summer. I think it is very comfortable to live in my dream home.,查看答案,
