1、Period Eight WritingA concert review每当我们读完一本书、看完一场电影或听完一场音乐会，我们或多或少都会有一些感想。如果我们把这些感想写出来，这就成了评论。下面我们就以听一场音乐会为例，来学习一下写音乐评论的方法。第一步：我们要列出有关这次音乐会的信息。例如：音乐会的类型(是摇滚乐还是爵士乐) ；歌手、乐队；时间、地点；表演者的演技；音乐、声音及灯光效果；听众的反应等。第二步：把列举的内容连接成句，然后再连句成篇即可。1On the evening of last Sunday，I watched the concert given by Wang Leeho
2、m.2During the 3hour concert，he sang a lot of songs.3It shows that he has a great talent for music.4The audience enjoyed his performance very much.5Everyone felt excited at the performance.6The atmosphere during the concert was extremely exciting.7His performance is very popular with the audience.8I
3、hope I will watch his performance again in the future.请按以下提示用英语写一篇日记。1假设昨天晚上香港著名歌手张学友在北京举办了演唱会(vocal concert)，你很幸运，买到了一张票，并且去听了他的演唱。2张学友是亚洲知名的音乐歌手，出了很多唱片，他在亚洲各地演唱过。他的歌经常在收音机和电视机中播放。3你被他的歌曲深深地打动了。日记的日期是 2018 年 10 月 21 日，星期日，晴。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2不要逐字翻译。审题1确定体裁：本文表面上要求写一篇日记，实则写一篇音乐会的评论；2确定人称：本文应用第三人称来写；3确
4、定时态：描述歌手信息时应该用一般现在时态，介绍音乐会的过程经过时应该用一般过去时态。谋篇Para.1 引入话题，介绍演唱会情况；Para.2 简要介绍著名歌星张学友的情况；Para.3 演唱效果和感受；Para.4 个人想法。必备词汇1举办演唱会 give singing performances 2做某事是幸运的 be lucky to do sth. 3录唱片 make records4在收音机和电视机上播放 be broadcast on the radio and TV 5优美而自然 beautiful and natural 6被深深打动 be deeply impressed by
5、关键句式1张学友是一位著名的香港流行歌手。Zhang Xueyou is a famous Hong Kong pop singer.2他昨天晚上在北京举办了演唱会。He gave a vocal concert in Beijing last night.3我有幸得到一张票。I got a ticket luckily.4我被他的演唱深深打动了。What he sang made me very impressed.句式升级1用含有同位语的句子连接句 1 和句 2。Zhang Xueyou，a famous Hong Kong pop singer，gave a vocal concert
6、in Beijing last night.2用“beadj .to do”结构改写句 3。I was lucky to get a ticket.3用被动语态改写句 4。I was deeply impressed by what he sang.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。参考范文Sunday Oct.21,2018SunnyZhang Xueyou，a famous Hong Kong pop singer，gave a vocal concert in Beijing last night.I was lucky to get
7、 a ticket and went to his concert.Zhang Xueyou is one of the most famous music singers in Asia.He has made many records and has sung in many countries in Asia.His songs are often broadcast on the radio and TV.He sang wonderfully last night.His songs were beautiful and natural.I was deeply impressed by what he sang.I hope I can go to his concert again.
