1、Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：letter of advice本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信属于应用文，是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。建议信的正文部分分为三部分：第一部分：引出话题；第二部分：提出建议；第三部分：表达祝愿。1Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.2Here are some tips/a few suggestions to he
2、lp you.3I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.4Why dont you buy a computer?5Have you considered doing.?6Maybe it would be better to.7There are several things we could do.8I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友 Jenny 的来信。她在信中说，由于刚
3、进入高中，不知道如何结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1表示问候和慰问。2提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，你要尽力去帮助他们；(3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。注意：1词数 80 左右；2开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。审题写作要求是就如何在新环境下交友提出建议。写作时应注意下面几点：1确定文体：这是一篇建议信。写作时注意建议信的写作特点。2主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3主体人称：由于是向对方提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。谋篇第一段：开门见山，引出话题。第二段：提出一些交友的建议。第三段：表达愿望。必备词汇1对
4、有帮助 be helpful to2改变这种情况 change this situation3更好地了解彼此 understand each other better4处于困境中 in trouble关键句式1事实上，你可以做些事情来改变这种情况。In fact， you can do something in order to change this situation.2邀请你的同学放学后一起参加活动，这会有助于你们更好地了解彼此。Invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school，and
5、 this will help you understand each other better.句式升级1用 there be 结构和定语从句改写第一句话。In fact， there is something that you can do to change this situation.2用 it 作形式主语改写第二句话。It will help you understand each other better to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school.用适当的过渡词语
6、，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇 80 词左右的英语短文。参考范文Dear Jenny，Im really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after entering the high school.Id like to talk about it with you.I hope that my advice will be helpful to you.In fact， there is something that you can do to change this situatio
7、n.First，it will help you understand each other better to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school.Then，try to help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua
