1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：letter of advice,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信属于应用文，是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。 建议信的正文部分分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题； 第二部分：提出建议； 第三部分：表达祝愿。,写作指导,1.Im glad to receive your letter asking
2、for my advice on. 2.Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 3.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 4.Why dont you buy a computer? 5.Have you considered doing.? 6.Maybe it would be better to. 7.There are several things we could do. 8.I hope you will find these proposals/s
3、uggestions practical/useful/helpful.,常用表达,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，不知道如何结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。 1.表示问候和慰问。 2.提出以下建议： (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动； (2)你的同学遇到麻烦时，你要尽力去帮助他们； (3)你遇到困难时向同学求助。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。,审题 写作要求是就如何在新环境下交友提出建议。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇建议信
4、。写作时注意建议信的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是向对方提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：开门见山，引出话题。 第二段：提出一些交友的建议。 第三段：表达愿望。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.对有帮助 _ 2.改变这种情况 _ 3.更好地了解彼此 _ 4.处于困境中 _,遣词造句,查看答案,be helpful to,change this situation,understand each other better,in trouble,关键句式 1.事实上，你可以做些事情来改变这种情况。 In fact，you can d
5、o something in order to change this situation. 2.邀请你的同学放学后一起参加活动，这会有助于你们更好地了解彼此。 Invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school，and this will help you understand each other better.,句式升级 1.用there be结构和定语从句改写第一句话。 _ 2.用it作形式主语改写第二句话。 _ _,In fact，there is something that yo
6、u can do to change this situation.,It will help you understand each other better to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school.,查看答案,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,Dear Jenny，Im really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others af
7、ter entering the high school.,参考范文,查看答案,Id like to talk about it with you.I hope that my advice will be helpful to you.,In fact，there is something that you can do to change this situation.First，it will help you understand each other better to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together after school.Then，try to help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty. I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,
