1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingDescription of a famous person,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是人物描写。人物描写主要是介绍某人的基本信息及其事迹。一般是介绍人物的童年、少年、青年、中年及老年的成长经历(包括生活、工作和学习)，末尾一般总述人物的功绩成败，也可以在记叙成长经历的同时加入一些议论。 人物描写的写作步骤： 1.总体介绍； 2.列举主要经历； 3.总结全文。,写作指导,1.He/She was one of the greatest scientists in the
2、 20th century. 2.He/She was born in 1911. 3.He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University. 4.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 5.He/She devoted all his/her life to the work. 6.He/She made great contributions to our country
3、. 7.He/She was highly thought of by many people. 8.He/She will live in the hearts of us forever.,常用表达,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右介绍郎平的英语短文。 1.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队； 2.从1980年起，郎平获得很多荣誉及奖励； 3.退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎平带领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(the Ri
4、o Olympic Games)上获得金牌； 4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。,审题 写作要求是写一篇人物介绍。写作时应注意下面三点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物介绍。写作时注意人物介绍的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍人物，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：总体介绍郎平的情况； 第二段：按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历； 第三段：总结全文。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.在岁时 2.加入队伍 3.因为 4.获奖 5.中国女排 6.参加,遣词造句,查看答案,_ _ _ _
5、_ _,at the age of.,join the team,because of/as a result of/thanks to,win the award,the Chinese Women Volleyball team,take part in,关键句式 1.她在十三岁时开始练习打排球。 She began to play volleyball at the age of 13. 2.她刻苦努力，获得了很多奖项。 She was hard-working and she won a lot of awards.,句式升级 1.用when引导的状语从句改写第二句话。 _ 2.用so
6、.that引导的状语从句改写第三句话。 _,She began to play volleyball when she was 13.,She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards.,查看答案,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文,Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much.,She began to play v
7、olleyball at the age of 13.She joined the national team because of her excellent performance in the national volleyball game.She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards.After she retired from the volleyball team，she became a volleyball coach.In 2016 she took the Chinese Women Volleyball team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.She is loved and respected by us all.,查看答案,
