1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingRecount：newspaper article,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是写一则新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。 一、注意事项 1.写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性、及时性。 2.要有明确的文章结构。 3.语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。,写作指导,二、基本结构 英语新闻报道通常包括四部分。 1.标题：标题应当简洁明了。 2.导语：导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，要简明扼要地揭示出消息的核心
2、内容。 3.主体：主体是消息的主要部分，要用充足的事实表现主题，对导语的内容做进一步的展开和阐述。 4.结束语：通常是对全文内容进行概括性的总结。,1.It is reported that an activity was organized to get the students close to nature. 2.As is reported/According to the report，a terrible earthquake happened. 3.Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion/It seemed that people were shocked
3、. 4.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. 5.Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwork. 6.The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was beneficial to us.
4、,常用表达,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,5月1日，高一(3)班的学生志愿者李月和张华去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫卫生、聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则80词左右的新闻报道。内容包括： 1.时间、地点、人物、活动； 2.老人们的反应； 3.简短评论。 注意：报道的标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,审题 写作要求是写一篇新闻报道。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇新闻报道。写作时注意新闻报道的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍志愿者去敬老
5、院的活动，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：要简明扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容：李月和张华去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动； 第二段：是文章的主题，介绍活动内容； 第三段：结束语；对全文内容进行概括性的总结。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.送给某人某物 2.与某人聊天 3.因某事而感谢某人 4.丰富某人的生活,遣词造句,查看答案,_ _ _ _,present sb. with sth. /present sth. to sb.,chat with sb.,thank sb. for sth.,enrich ones life,关键句式 1.李月和张华一到达就受到了热情的欢迎。 Li Yue an
6、d Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed as soon as they arrived. 2.干完活后，他们坐在院子里和老人们聊天。 Everything had been done and they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. 3.他们说这是美好的一天，他们会永远记住这一天。 They said it was a beautiful day and they would remember it forever.,句式升级 1.用“uponn.”作状语改写第一句话。 _ 2.用after引导的从句
7、改写第二句话。 _ 3.用such.that.结构改写第三句话。 _,Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed.,After everything had been done，they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.,They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.,查看答案,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英
8、语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day，Li Yue and Zhang Hua，students from Class Three，Grade One，went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.,查看答案,Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed，and they presented the elderly with flowe
9、rs and fruits.,Then，they started working at once，cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.After everything had been done，they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave，the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie，School Newspaper,查看答案,
