1、沪教版（2024）七年级上册英语Unit1-Unit8单元话题作文范文一、unit1 友谊1 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tom 在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你写一封建议信，帮助他解决人际沟通中遇到的问题。 提示：(1) 表示安慰；(2) 提出建议；(3) 表达祝愿。 要求：(1) 须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；(2) 词数不少于 90 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。Dear Tom,Im glad to receive your letter. Yours, Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Tom,Im glad to receive your letter. Im sorry
2、to hear that you have trouble getting along with your friend. Its common to face this problem, but youd better solve it in aright way, or you may lose your friend. Here is some advice for you.Firstly, you can talk with your friend to explain why you cant play with him all the time. In this way, he c
3、an understand you well. Secondly, if he still feels bad, you can buy him a dog. It will take him much time to take care of the dog and maybe he wont feel lonely.Ihope its helpful for you and that you can get along well with each other.Yours,试卷第 1 页，共 43 页Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇书信作文；时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
4、提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“给 Tom 一些关于交友的建议”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 写作步骤第一步，借用文章开头，给 Tom 安慰； 第二步，根据 Tom 的问题，提出建议；第三步，表达祝愿并希望他能解决这些问题。 亮点词汇all the time 一直take care of 照顾 高分句型Here is some advice for you.（倒装句）It will take him much time to take care of the dog and maybe he wont feel lonely.（and 表并列）2 请从相貌，性格，爱好等方面描述一下自己的朋友；
5、请恰当运用本单元所学的短语和句子，字数 在 80 字以上。My Best Friend_试卷第 2 页，共 43 页【答案】例文:My Best FriendMy best friend Li Yao is 12 years old. Now let me introduce her to you.Li Yao and I are in the same class. She is atall girl. She has around face, longhair and big bright eyes. She is very lively and always brings all of
6、us joy and fun. She likes painting and dances well. She is good at maths, too.She can be my best friend because we like doing the same thing. We often paint and dance together. I often share my happiness with her. When one of us feels sad or blue, we tell the other one and this makes us feel better.
7、 Most importantly, she is caring and helpful. When I meet maths problems, she always teaches me patiently. With her help, my maths has improved a lot. I also become more confident and open now.I think a friend in need is a friend indeed. I understand close friends should count on each other for love
8、, admiration, respect and support.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；提示：文章应该包括朋友的外表、性格、爱好等方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多 用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。写作步骤第一步，介绍最好的朋友的姓名，引出话题；第二步，介绍朋友的基本情况，包括外表、性格以及爱好等； 第三步，陈述你们能成为最好的朋友的原因；第四步，表达你的感受。 亮点词汇 count on 依靠，指望 be good at 擅长试卷第 3 页，共 43 页高分句型 I thi
9、nk a friend in need is a friend indeed. (宾语从句) When I meet maths problems, she always teaches me patiently. (when 引导时间状语从句)3 假如你是李华，想和 Mike 交网友。请根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你自己。词数 80 左 右。提示：1. 你来自深圳，高个子，长头发；2. 家里有五口人，有一个姐姐和一个哥哥；3. 学校离家近，每天和姐姐步行去学校；4. 最喜欢的运动是游泳，也喜欢踢足球和读书，但是不喜欢看电视；5. 你的理想是当一名英语老师。Dear Mike,My
10、name is Li Hua.试卷第 4 页，共 43 页_Bestwishes, Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Mike,My name is Li Hua. Id like to be your e-friend. Im from Shenzhen. Im tall. I have longhair. I have a nice family. There are five people in my family. I have an elder sister and an elder brother. My school is near my house,so Igo to sch
11、ool everyday with my sisteron foot. My favorite sport is swimming. I also like playing football and reading books. I dont like watching TV. My dream is to be an English teacher.Best wishes, Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：本文的主要时态为一般现在时；提示：根据题目要点提示，完成本篇书面表达，可以适当增加细节，注意表述正确，应用正确的时态和 句式。写作步骤第一步，介绍个人的基本信息
12、；第二步，介绍上学的方式及自己的喜好； 第三步，介绍自己的理想。亮点词汇elder sister 姐姐on foot 步行like doingsth. 喜欢做某事 高分句型My dream is to bean English teacher. (动词不定式作表语）4 友谊（friendship）在人一生中非常重要。假如你是李华（Li Hua），你的英国网友彼得（Peter）昨 天发了一份电子邮件给你，问及你对友谊的看法，请你给他回一封电子邮件，说说你对友谊的看法及理由。 要求如下：1. 简单问候和表达自己的心情。2. 你对友谊怎么看？3. 你认为友谊中重要的是什么？（至少 2 个观点）理由是
13、什么？4. 问一下彼得对友谊怎么看。5. 你对和彼得之间友谊的期待或祝愿。参考词汇：观点 viewpoint；天长地久的 everlasting Dear Peter,试卷第 5 页，共 43 页Yours, Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Peter,Hows it going? I am very glad to receive your letter. Im writing to you to share my opinion aboutfriendship. As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us
14、warm and helps us grow.” I think that it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hangout together and have fun.First, I think the most important thing for friendship is honesty and kindness. When you are in trouble, he or she always tells you the truth and is willing to help y
15、ou correct your mistakes. Secondly, I think its important torespect each other, because we can respect our friends and treat them in the way that we want to be treated. What about yours? Finally, I hope our friendship is everlasting.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；时态：时态为一般现在时；提示：写作要点已给
16、出，可适当添加细节，不要遗漏写作要点。写作步骤第一步，简单问候，表达对友谊的看法；试卷第 6 页，共 43 页第二步，写出你关于友谊中重要的是什么的观点以及理由； 第三步，询问对方的观点，表达期待和祝愿。亮点词汇be glad to do 很高兴做某事hangout 闲逛have fun 玩得开心each other 相互高分句型When you are in trouble, he or she always tells you the truth and is willing to help you correct your mistakes.（when 引导的时间状语从句）二、unit2
17、 学校生活5假设你是 Alan，Mary 是你新认识的朋友，以下是她一天的日常安排，请根据表格提示写一篇英语短文。时间活动7:00 a.m.起床7:50 a.m.坐公共汽车去学校（Mary 的家距离学校大约 5 千米，要花 15 分钟）11:50 a.m.吃午饭4:00 p.m.去游泳俱乐部9:00 p.m.睡觉要求：1 要点齐全，表达清楚，内容连贯，无语法错误。2 词数不少于 80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。I am Alan, a middle school student. This term, I have a new friend Mary._试卷第 7 页，共 43 页【答案】例
18、文I am Alan, a middle school student. This term, I have a new friend Mary. Let me tell you something about her daily life.Mary lives a healthy life. She usually gets up at 7:00 a.m. Then she gets dressed and brushes her teeth. After a delicious breakfast, she takes a bus to school at 7:50 a.m. Its ab
19、out 5 kilometers from her home to school, and it usually takes her 15 minutes to get to school. She has lunch at school at 11:50 a.m. She eats a lot of fruit andvegetables for lunch because she thinks they are good for her health. After school, she goes to a swimming club at 4:00 p.m. She enjoys swi
20、mming and she is good at it. She always goes to bed at 9:00 p.m. because she thinks “early to bed, early to rise” is a good habit.Mary has a healthy lifestyle. Do you think so? 【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻 辑关系，语意连贯。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，根据表格提示，介绍
21、 Mary 一天的日常安排； 第三步，书写结语。亮点词汇healthy 健康的get dressed 穿好衣服be good for 有益于enjoy doingsth.喜欢做某事be good at 擅长 高分句型She always goes to bed at 9:00 p.m. because she thinks “early to bed, early to rise” is agood habit.(because 引导 原因状语从句；省略 that 的宾语从句)6 同学们进入初中快一学期了，相信大家初中学校生活一定丰富多彩。假如你是李华，你的美国笔 友 Lily 来信询问你的学
22、校生活情况。请根据以下要点内容，给她回复一封电子邮件，80 词左右。开头和结试卷第 8 页，共 43 页尾以给出，不计入总词数。1. 在校上课情况。（科目，上课时间，放学时间等）2. 课后活动；3. 喜爱的学科和原因。Dear Lily,Nice to write to you again.Best wishes.Li Hua【答案】例文 Dear Lily,Nice to write to you again. Now let me tell you something about my school life. Our school life starts with a with abig
23、, healthy breakfast at 7:20 a.m. Our classes begin at 8:00. We have 4 classes in themornig and 3 classes in the afternoon. We have different subjects every class, we study Chinese, maths, English, art, music, PE.geography, history and so on. I like maths best because maths can make me think carefull
24、y and help me solve many problems. The maths teacher is also funny and patient. I am poor at English. I always forget English words. I think its too rocky to study. Classes end at 3:30. We can take part in many interesting activities such as playingbasketball, football, painting, dancing, handwritin
25、g, singing. I am good at painting, so I take part in drawing club. In the evening, it is necessary to do my homework. Igo to sleep at about 10:00.I think my school life is colourful and interesting. Best wishes.试卷第 9 页，共 43 页Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一封电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重
26、点。 写作步骤第一步，承接上文，点题介绍“我” 的学校生活；第二步，具体介绍在校学习科目、上课时间与放学时间并介绍课后活动以及喜欢的学科及原因； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。亮点词汇carefully 仔细地rocky 头晕目眩的take part in 参加 高分句型I like maths best because maths can make me think carefully and help me solve many problems.（because 引导的 原因状语从句）In the evening, it is necessary to do my homework.（it
27、 固定句式）7 宽阔的操场，充满书香的老师，琅琅的读书声，这一切来自我们如同家一般温暖的校园，我们每 天都在美丽的校园里快乐地成长着，请根据提示以“My School Life”为题写一篇 70 词左右的小短文与大家分 享你丰富多彩的校园生活。提示：1.谈一谈你每天上学的时间安排；2.列举 12 项你课后经常做的活动以及你喜欢与不喜欢的学科，并说明理由；3.谈谈你对你的校园生活的感受。 要求：1.内容包括所给提示，可适当延伸；2.书写工整，文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。My SchoolLife 试卷第 10 页，共 43 页【答案】范文My school lifeHi, I am Limin
28、g. Imin Class 1, Grade 7. My school life is very interesting. I like it very much.I usually getup at 6:40 a.m. Then I have breakfast at 7:00 a.m. I go to school at 7:10 a.m. Our classes begin at 8:00 a.m. I have 4 classes in the morning and 3 classes in the afternoon. I study Chinese, English, math,
29、 politics, geography and some other subjects. I like English and Chinese best, because they are very interesting and easy. But I dont like math at all, because it is difficult and boring. What do you think of them?I also like reading, so afterschool, I often read books in the library. Sometimes I pl
30、ay basketball with my classmates, wearevery happy.I have a colorful school life. I love my school, my teachers and classmates very much. What about yours? Can you tell me something about it?【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据提示内容介绍丰富多彩的校园生活，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 写作步骤第一步，开门见山，通过表达校园生活很有趣来引出下文； 第二步，介绍每天上
31、学的时间安排；第三步，介绍学习的科目及喜欢与不喜欢的科目及原因，并介绍课后的活动； 第四步，书写结语，表达对校园生活的感受。亮点词汇getup 起床have breakfast 吃早餐试卷第 11 页，共 43 页like doingsth 喜欢做某事 高分句型I like English and Chinese best, because they are very interesting and easy. （because 引导原因状语从句）I also like reading, so after school, I often read books in the library.（s
32、o 连接的并列句）三、unit3 季节8 你们班最近就“最喜欢的季节”展开调查，以下是你们小组成员的调查结果。请据此写一篇英语短 文。组员最喜欢的季节理由Ben春天气候温暖，到处都是鲜花绿树Joe夏天可以游泳，和家人到海边度假Kim秋天适合野餐和爬山I?写作要求：1 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2 书写要整洁、规范；3 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Our group members have their own favourite seasons._【答案】例文Our group members have their own favourite season
33、s. Let me tell you something about them.Ben likes spring best because itswarm and there are beautiful flowers and green trees everywhere in spring. Joes favourite season is summer. Summer is hot. It is exciting to go swimming in summer. He can also goto thebeach to build sandcastles with his family
34、during the holiday. Autumn is the best season for Kim. It is cool, so its a goodtime to climb mountains and have a picnic.As forme,winter is the best season because its great fun to make snowmen with friends!试卷第 12 页，共 43 页【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的重要信息，围绕主题“最喜欢的季节
35、”进行写作， 写作时可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，由给出的开头提示引出本次写作的主题“最喜欢的季节”； 第二步，逐个阐述组员最喜欢的季节及理由；第三步，补充自己的观点。 亮点词汇goto the beach 去海边with his family 和他的家人a goodtime to do 做某事的好时间have a picnic 去野餐As forme 就我而言 高分句型Ben likes spring best because it is warm and there are beautiful flowers and green trees everywhere in s
36、pring.(原因状语从句)It is exciting togo swimming in summer. (it 固定句型；不定式作主语)9 假如你（Lingling）的英国笔友 Jim 要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最 佳时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封 80 词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入 总词数。Dear Jim,Im very glad that youll come to visit China._试卷第 13 页，共 43 页_I hope you can come soon.Yours, Lingling【答案】参考范文 Dear
37、 Jim,Im very glad that youll come to visit China. I will tell you something about the weather in China. There are four seasons in a yearspring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. Its oftenrainy. Compared with the other seasons, winter is the coldest. Sometimes it sn
38、ows, and you can come at this time of the year. But it depends on you. I think it is best to visit China in spring or autumn because the weather is neithertoo hot nor too cold.I hope you can come soon.Yours, Lingling【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信。时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示” 中中国的气候特点的介绍要点，适当添加细
39、节， 并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你给你的笔友写一封 80 词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。”来引出 重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“ 中国的天气情况、来中国的最佳时间、希望早点来等”几个方面重点介绍中 国的气候特点的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望你能快点来” 的愿望。亮点词汇tellsb about sth 告诉某人关于某事；compare with 与 比较；depend on 依靠；试卷第 14 页，共 43 页neithernor既不，也不 高分句型There are four seasons in a yearspring, su
40、mmer, autumn and winter. (“there be”句型)Compared with the other seasons, winter is the coldest. (过去分词作状语)10今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“最喜欢的季节” ，以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请根据提示写一篇70 词左右的英语短文。组员最喜欢的季节理由Ben春天温暖，鲜花绿树Joe夏天去海边Kim秋天野餐、爬山I?写作要求：1.词数 70 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，要根据要点提示适当发挥； 2.书写要整洁、规范；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Our group mem
41、bers have their own favourite seasons.【答案】例文：Our group members have their own favourite seasons. Ben likes spring. It is warm and there are a lot ofbeautiful flowers and green trees. Joe likes summer. Because he likes going to the beach and swimming in the sea. Kim likes autumn because he likes going to the picnic and climbing the mountain. I like spring. I can go out and play without feeling cold. In spring,I can also wearmy new clothes and goto the park to fly my kite. I like spring best.
