1、广东省部分地区广东省部分地区 2020-2021 学年高学年高一一上上期末期末英语试卷分类汇编英语试卷分类汇编 应用文写作专题应用文写作专题 广东省中山市广东省中山市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 61你班将举办主题为How to Stay Safe Online的英语沙龙活动。请你结合自身体会拟写一份英语发言稿，内容包括： 1.健康上网，远离不良网站和信息； 2.控制上网时间，注意自我保护。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 100 左右； 2.发言稿开头已为你写好 Hello, everyone! Its my honor to be here
2、to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online. _ 广东省湛江市广东省湛江市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 56假设你是李华，有一个英语学习交流的博客。看到谢慧在博客留言中说到不知怎么提高自己的英语写作水平，希望得到一些关于提高写作的建议。请用英文在博客留言中给谢慧提供一些写作帮助。 注意：字数 100 字左右。 _ 广东省广州市八区联考广东省广州市八区联考 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题学年高一上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题 61 假定你是小明，
3、 你的英国朋友 John 学习中文多年， 最近遇到困难， 向你请教如何更好地理解中国文化。请你写一封回信，向 John 提出建议。 内容包括： 1.鼓励 John 不要失去信心； 2.提出你的建议； 3.邀请 John 来中国体验中国文化。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear John, _ Xiao Ming 广东省揭阳普宁市广东省揭阳普宁市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 56假定你是李华，你的朋友 John 沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
4、1. 表示理解和关心； 2. 沉迷微信的影响； 3. 提出具体建议。 注意：1. 词数：80 词左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：沉溺于 be addicted to；沉溺 addiction _ 广东省汕头市潮阳区广东省汕头市潮阳区 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 76假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter 来信说今年寒假会到中国旅游，想先学习一些汉语，却不知道如何入门，特向你寻求学习建议。请你用英文给他回一封信，内容主要包括： 1、欢迎他到中国旅行； 2、提出学习汉语的建议（至少两条）； 注意： 1、词数 80 左右
5、; 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3、开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, _ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案参考答案 广东省中山市广东省中山市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 61 Hello, everyone! Its my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online. There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Inte
6、rnet, like violence, porn and so on. Many students get addicted to the Internet. They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies. Whats more, spending too much time on the Internet can make us short-sighted and do harm to our health too. So we should control ou
7、r time online. Last but not the least, protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合自身体会拟写一份英语发言稿，主题为“如何在网上保持安全”。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.健康上网，远离不良网站和信息； 2.控制上网时间，注意自我保护。 第
8、二步：列提纲 （重点词组） too much; do harm to; and so on; get addicted to; concentrate on; give away 第三步：连词成句 1. There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on. 2. Many students get addicted to the Internet. 3. They spend too much time on it so that they a
9、re unable to concentrate on their studies. 4. Last but not the least, protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At las
10、t 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Ther
11、efore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on.这句话运用了关系代词 that 引导的定语从句。 高分句型 2 They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies. 这句话运用了 so
12、that 引导的结果状语从句。 高分句型 3 Whats more, spending too much time on the Internet can make us short-sighted and do harm to our health too. 这句话运用了动名词短语作主语。 广东省湛江市广东省湛江市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 56One possible version Yeah, writing is really hard. I think before you can write, you must read a
13、lot. Correct, native-like English grammar needs to come out automatically as you write. The only way that this can happen is if you have seen at least hundreds of thousands of examples of correctly-written English sentences. You absorb grammar naturally by reading. Whats more, its important to write
14、 every day. Writing in English daily will soon become natural for you, and it will help you master sentence structure, develop word choice, learn punctuation, and more. As they say, practice makes perfect! Also, if you have a friend who knows English well and can check your writing work, you are ver
15、y fortunate. Usually, another person can find your mistakes more quickly mistakes you did not notice because you looked at it so many times. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在博客中给谢慧回复留言，提供一些提高英语写作的建议，帮助她提高写作水平。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 要点： 1.表示理解； 2.提出建议； 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） English grammar； come
16、out； at least； hundreds of thousands of； master sentence structure； develop word choice；learn punctuation；looked at 第三步：连词成句 1. I think before you can write, you must read a lot. 2. Correct, native-like English grammar needs to come out automatically as you write. 3. The only way that this can happe
17、n is if you have seen at least hundreds of thousands of examples of correctly-written English sentences. 4. Whats more, its important to write every day. 5. Writing in English daily will soon become natural for you, and it will help you master sentence structure, develop word choice, learn punctuati
18、on, and more. 6. As they say, practice makes perfect! 7. Also, if you have a friend who knows English well and can check your writing work, you are very fortunate. 8. Usually, another person can find your mistakes more quickly mistakes you did not notice because you looked at it so many times. 根据提示及
19、关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系：Whats more；and；Also； 2.表因果关系：because； 3.表条件关系：if； 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】高分句型 1 The only way that this can happen is if you have seen at least hundreds of thousands of examples of correctly-written English sentences.（使用了由 that 引导的定
20、语从句） 高分句型 2 Whats more, its important to write every day.（使用了 it 作形式主语） 高分句型 3 Also, if you have a friend who knows English well and can check your writing work, you are very fortunate.（使用了由 if 引导的状语从句和由 who 引导的定语从句） 广东省广州市八区联考广东省广州市八区联考 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题学年高一上学期期末教学质量检测英语试题 61Dear John,
21、Learning that you have some difficulty in understanding Chinese culture, Im writing to give my advice. Never lose heart. After all, in learning a language, understanding its culture is the most difficult part. Here are my suggestions for you. Firstly, it is important to watch TV and read books , new
22、spapers and magazines in Chinese. By doing so, youll learn more about Chinese culture easily. Then, it should be a good idea to learn to sing Chinese songs or Chinese traditional operas, which you will find interesting. Thirdly, why not come to China and experience the Chinese traditional customs? I
23、 think it will benefit you a lot. Sincerely hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes ! Yours, Xiao Ming 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给英国朋友 John 关于如何更好地理解中国文化提出建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 建议信 时态：一般现在时 结构：总分法 第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，给 John 提出具体的建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对对方有帮助。 要求： 1. 说明写信的原因：了解到 John 对理解中国文化有困
24、难，给他提出建议 2. 提出具体的建议 鼓励 John 不要失去信心 提出你的建议：看中文电视、阅读中文书籍和报刊杂志；学唱中文歌曲或中国传统戏剧；来中国体验传统习俗 3. 希望建议对 John 有用 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） have some difficulty in doing； Chinese culture； give advice； lose heart； be important to； learn about； sing Chinese songs；traditional opera；experience the Chinese traditional customs；b
25、enefit sb.；be helpful to 第三步：连词成句 (1)Learning that you have some difficulty in understanding Chinese culture, Im writing to give my advice. (2)Never lose heart. (3) In learning a language, understanding its culture is the most difficult part. (4)Here are my suggestions for you . (5) It is important
26、to watch TV and read books , newspapers and magazines in Chinese. (6)By doing so, youll learn more about Chinese culture easily. (7) It should be a good idea to learn to sing Chinese songs or our traditional operas. (8) You will find them interesting. (9) Why not come to China and experience the Chi
27、nese traditional customs? (10) I think it will benefit you a lot. (11) Sincerely hope my suggestions are helpful to you. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 表文章结构顺序： firstlythenthirdly 【点睛】高分句型 1 Learning that you have some difficulty in understanding Chinese culture, Im writing to give my advic
28、e. （现在分词作状语） 高分句型 2 It is important to watch TV and read books , newspapers and magazines in Chinese.（it 作形式主语） 高分句型 3 It should be a good idea to learn to sing Chinese songs or our traditional operas, which you will find interesting.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句） 广东省揭阳普宁市广东省揭阳普宁市 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一
29、上学期期末考试英语试题 56Dear John, Im sorry to hear that youre suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and Id like to offer you some useful advice. First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will
30、 take your mind off WeChat. Besides, youd better make more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face. Theyll help you out when you cant resist the temptation of WeChat. Last but not least, its better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep
31、you healthy but also enrich your life and help you keep away from WeChat. I hope you can accept my suggestions and get rid of addiction to WeChat as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求学生代替李华给 John 写一封建议信，因为朋友 John 沉迷于微信（WeChat）不能自拔。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 建议：adviceproposal/
32、suggestion/recommendation 摆脱：get rid ofcast off/break away from 诱惑：temptationattraction 接受：accepttake/adopt 2.句式拓展： 合并简单句 原句：Im sorry to hear that youre suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and Id like to offer you some useful advice. 拓展句： Extremely sorry to hear that yo
33、ure suffering from WeChat addiction, I really understand how you feel and Id like to offer you some useful advice. 原句： Besides, youd better make more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face. Theyll help you out when you cant resist the temptation of WeChat. 拓展句：Besides, youd better make
34、 more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face, which will help you out when you cant resist the temptation of WeChat. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】 Last but not least, its better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your lif
35、e and help you keep away from WeChat.（这句话使用了 it 做形式主语以及 not only，but also 连接两个动词。） 【高分句型2】 First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat.（这句话使用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。） 广广东省汕头市潮阳区东省汕头市潮阳区
36、 2020-2021 学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题 76参考范文 Dear Peter, Glad to hear that you will take a trip to China this winter holiday, I am writing to provide some advice on learning Chinese. Firstly, I suggest that you choose some daily dialogues as a start, like greeting people and asking for direction
37、s, which can help you a lot during your trip. Meanwhile, you may watch some Chinese materials to immerse yourself in the language environment. Last but not least, it is a good idea to learn from your mistakes. Hope you will find my suggestions helpful and look forward to your fluent Chinese before y
38、our arrival. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。 【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，要给今年寒假会到中国旅游的英国好友 Peter 写信，向他给予学习汉语上的建议，请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1) 欢迎他到中国旅行；2) 提出学习汉语的建议（至少两条）。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：take a trip to (去旅行)；choose.as.(选择作为)；immerse oneself in sth. (沉浸在某事中)；learn from (从学习)；look forward to
39、 (期盼)等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般时为主。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了主从复合句， 如 Firstly, I suggest that you choose some daily dialogues as a start, like greeting people and asking for directions, which can help you a lot during your trip. 这句话中用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句和虚拟语气；使用了非常好的短语，如 take a trip to, choose.as., immerse oneself in sth.等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如 Firstly，Meanwhile，Last but not least。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
