1、 课时课时 4 Writng 四层分析法四层分析法写自然保护类作文写自然保护类作文 一、描述自然属性：the fastest animals on land/live in./feed on. 二、指出问题现状：the number of. is getting./not enough food/not enough place/people kill them for their. 三、提出解决途径：Its a good idea to./do everything to protect./stop selling their. 四、展望美好未来：If the people and the
2、government both do their best to./in the near future./more and more.will. 五、参考词汇和句式 单词单词 protect，enough 短语短语 live in.， feed on.， not enough food to eat， stop selling.， build nature parks， do ones best to. 句式句式 They have.，People kill them for.，The number of. is getting.，Its a good idea. （2015无锡中考）假设你
3、是悉尼大学一名华裔学生，名叫 Jason Wu。你从 China Daily 上看到该报正 在开展主题为 Change for a Better China 的环保讨论活动。你打算结合自己所居住的小镇的变化，给报社写 一封英文信参与讨论。内容提示见下表： 注意事项：1. 英文信须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 表格中感想建议一栏须用 23 句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数在 90 左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 小镇概况 Hartwell, 人口约 50, 000， 澳洲最美小镇之一 过去状况 当地人
4、冬天燃木取暖，引起空气污染、树木被伐 应对措施 立法阻止此类活动，鼓励使用清洁能源 感想建议 参考词汇：澳洲最美小镇 (Australias Nicest Towns) 清洁能源 (clean energy) 【参考范文】【参考范文】 Dear Editor, I am a student of Sydney University. I am living in a small town called Hartwell with a population of around 50, 000.It is one of the Australias Nicest Towns. But things
5、 were very different in the past. The local people used to burn wood to keep their houses warm in winter. That caused serious air pollution and a lot of tress were cut down. Laws were soon made to stop this and people were encouraged to use clean energy. I think we can do something similar in China.
6、 We can use less oil. I believe we can make our world a better place if we keep trying. Yours sincerely, Jason Wu 【名师点评】【名师点评】 本文运用了四层分析法对澳洲最美小镇 Hartwell 的目前状态进行了描述，对其过去面临的污染情 况进行了阐述，并对如何成功解决问题做了总结。针对中国目前的环保情况，作者进行了建议，并对未来 情况进行了预测。第一层：I am living. the Australias Nicest Towns. 第二层：But things.were cut
7、 down. 第三层：Laws were. something similar in China. 第四层：I believe. if we keep trying. 过去分词短语 called Hartwell 作定语、with 介词短语、短语 used to do sth、动词不定式作目的状语以 及keep+复合宾语在文中的使用，充分体现了作者综合运用语言的能力。 目前濒危的动物正在日益剧增。如何保护濒危动物成了我们的当务之急。人们疯狂地捕杀动物，为了 它们的肉、皮毛。我们这样做是不对的，因为动物是我们的朋友，我们应该保护它们，而不是将它们赶尽 杀绝。我们应该停止对动物们的捕杀，更好地保护
8、它们。请以保护动物为题，写一篇 80 词左右的短文。 参考词汇：pandas，golden monkeys，be friendly to，top task，make laws to stop killing，protecting zones， live in their own ways，raise monkey to. _ _ _ _ The earth is not only the home of people, but also that of all animals. But some people kill the rare animals, Lets do more things to protect animals. Its really a meaningful thing to help protect animals.学#科%网
