1、七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 1 页 共 14 页 Unit 1 Can you play the guitar? 你们学校的“周末音乐俱乐部 （Weekend Music Club)”正在招聘， 急需两名教授钢琴和吉他的音乐老师。 俱乐部的联系电话是 886-8686.请你根据以上信息，为“周末音乐俱乐部”写一则英文招聘广告。 Teachers Wanted for Weekend Music Club Hey, friends! Our club needs your help. We need two music teachers to teac
2、h the piano and the guitar. Can you play the piano or the guitar?Do you have time on the weekend? Do you want to join us? Please call us at 886-8686. 点评：点评：本文采用了“三步法”的写作方法，第一步：招聘原因（第 13 句）；第二步：招聘条件和要求 （第 45 句）；第三步：鼓励号召及联系方式（最后两句）。文章语言简练、结构完整。 添彩点添彩点：在写招聘条件和要求时，运用了本单元所学句型 Can you.?Do you have.?语气委婉，说
3、明 了招聘条件和要求；使用了 call.at,不仅用法正确，而且回扣了主题。 题笔：题笔： 校庆日快要到了，校庆日当天将会有丰富多彩的活动。活动项目包括舞蹈、演唱、乐器演奏、书法 绘画、 故事会等。 你会这些项目吗？请拨打 622-6066 给 Wang Li 打电话。 请你以 Students Wanted for the School Day 为题写一则广告发表在校报上。要求 40 个词以上。 Students Wanted for the School Day The School Day is coming. 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Students Wanted for the Schoo
4、l Day The School Day is coming. It is on December 18th. Can you dance? Can you sing? Can you play the piano,the guitar, the violin or the drums? Can you write or draw well?Can you tell stories? Then you can be in our School Day.Please call Wang Li at 622-6066. Unit 2 What time do you go to school? 根
5、据下面表格中的内容写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 6:00 in the morning 7:00 get up; take a shower have a glass of milk and some bread 7:10 go to school 8:00 classes begin, four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon 16:30 play football with my classmates 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 2 页 共 14 页 18:00 go home a
6、nd do my homework 21:00 go to bed Hi,Im Jim. I am a boy. Im a student in Hongxing Middle School.On school days, I usually get up at six oclock in the morning. Then I take a shower. At seven, I have a glass of milk and some bread for my breakfast. I go to school at about ten past seven. Classes begin
7、 at eight oclock. I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have two classes. At half past four in the afternoon ,its time for me to play football with my classmates. We are all tired but happy. Then, I go home and do my homework at six in the evening. I usually go to bed at nine. This
8、 is my school day.What about you? Please tell me. 点评：点评：本文运用“3W 法”写日常作息习惯，从人物、时间到活动内容。本文从时间人手，按照时间 先后顺序，把表格中的事情说清楚，时态为一般现在时。 添彩点：添彩点：从自我介绍开始，逐渐切人主题。 It is time for sb.to do sth.某人该干某事的时间到了。 点题之笔。增加了短文的文采 题笔：题笔： 时间 活动 上午 6:00 起床 上午 6:15 跑步半小时 上午 6:45 刷牙和淋浴 上午 7:00 在家吃早饭 上午 7:20 步行去上学 上午 11:50 在学校吃午饭
9、下午 5:30 放学回家 晚上 6:309:00 吃晚饭、做作业、看电视 晚上 9:00 睡觉 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 3 页 共 14 页 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 Dear Rick, How are you? Now,let me tell you about my day.I usually get up at 6:00 in the morning. Then I run for half an hour. I brush my teeth and take a shower at a quarter to seven. Then I have
10、 breakfast at 7:00 am. at home.At twenty past seven,I walk to school. I have lunch at ten to twelve at school. I usually get home at5:30 pm. after school. I have dinner,do homework and watch TV from 6:30 to 9:00.And I go to bed at 9:00 pm. Yours, Scott Unit 3 How do you get to school? 根据汉语提示及要求，用英语写
11、一篇短文。 提示：王聪是我的好朋友，她在长沙上学。她的家距离学校约 2 公里，她通常骑自行车去上学，大约 用 15 分钟。但下雨天她乘出租车，大约 4 分钟。她的父母在离家 5 公里的一家医院工作，每天开车 去上班，大约要用 10 分钟。 要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 2.词数不少于 70. Wang Cong is my good friend. She studies in Changsha. Her home is about two kilometers from her school. She usually rides her bike to school a
12、nd it takes her about fifteen minutes. But when it rains , she goes to school by taxi. It takes her about four minutes. She likes to go to school by taxi because the taxi is fast. Her father and mother both work in a hospital. Its five kilometers from their home. They take a car to work. It takes th
13、em about ten minutes. 点评：点评：本文用“三步法”描写了如何到达目的地，要点齐全、结构完整、语言通顺。第一、先介绍王聪 的总体情况。第二、介绍她平时去学校的方式和下雨天的方式，以及各自所花费的时间。第三、表达 王聪的感受，乘出租车很快。文章后面又介绍了父母的情况，包括出行方式以及所需时间。 添彩点：添彩点：使用 when 引导的从句介绍下雨天的出行情况。 使用句式 It takes sb.+时间to do sth.介绍所花费的时间。 题笔：题笔： 以“My Best Way of Going to School”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：不少于 70 词。 七下七下 Un
14、it-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 4 页 共 14 页 提示：选择怎样的交通方式最为合适，为什么？说明理由（至少三条）。 佳作欣赏：佳作欣赏： My Best Way of Going to School I like to go to school on foot best.First,my home is not far from the school.Second,on my way to school,the traffic is heavy. The street is full of bikes, motorbikes,buses and cars. I t
15、hink its safe to go to school on foot.Third,I also think walking is a kind of sport. I can take exercise by walking. Its good for my health. So the best way for me to go to school is on foot. Unit 4 Dont eat in class. 社会的和谐发展离不开家庭的安定团结， 每个家庭中都必须有一些规定。 那么， 在你的家里， 爸爸、 妈妈对你有什么规定呢？请根据图片提示，以“My family ru
16、les”为题，简要叙述你家中的规定。词数不 少于 80. My family rules In my home, I have many rules to follow. I cant talk loudly at home.I have to wash my hands before eating. I cant eat when Im reading.After school,I have to do my homework first. I cant watch TV too late at night. And I cant go to bed late or get up too l
17、ate. I think its good for our health to go to bed early and get up early. These rules can help me. 点评：点评：本文作者运用了“总分总法”介绍家庭规则。总：开门见山，写出了在家庭中有许多规则（第 一句）。分：详细介绍了家庭规则（第 2 句第 8 句）。总：最后总结全文，写出对家庭规则 的感受（最后一句）。 添彩点：添彩点：熟练使用本单元所学的情态动词 cant,have to 来介绍家庭规则。 句式简洁，叙述清晰，过渡自然，层次分明。 题笔：题笔： 根据目前班级学习英语的现状，你的老师对旧的学英语
18、规则进行修改，请你（Zhang Bin)根据提示写 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 5 页 共 14 页 一篇 70 词左右的发言稿（开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数），向同学们介绍修改后的规则。 学英语规则： 1.上课前准备好课本和笔记本。 2.说英语，少说汉语。 3.大声读，别害羞。 4.听录音，要安静。 5.找个伙伴，练习说英语。 提示词语：get ready for 为.做准备；notebooks 笔记本；aloud 大声地；partner 伙伴 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: Hello,everyone! We have some new rules ab
19、out learning English. Firstly, we have to get our books and notebooks ready be fore having an English class. Secondly, we have to speak English but we can speak only a little Chinese. Thirdly, read English aloud and dont be shy in front of a group. Fourthly,we have to be quiet when we listen to the
20、tape. Finally, we must have a partner. We can help each other practice speaking English. If you remember the rules,you can learn English well. Thats all. Thanks for listening. Zhang Bin Unit 5 Why do you like pandas? 假如你是李铭，最近养了一条宠物狗。请你根据下表向你的美国好友亨利介绍一下你的新宠物。 名字:埃米 年龄:5 个月 毛色:黄白相间 习性:对人友好,爱玩球 最喜欢的食物
21、:苹果 要求：1.短文内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.60 词左右。 Henry,I have a dog! Shes yellow and white and her name is Amy. She is only five months old, and she is cute. She likes playing with me and she also likes playing with the ball. She is friendly to us and all of my family like her.Oh! Her favorite food is appl
22、es. I think shes interesting. Do you think so? 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 6 页 共 14 页 点评：点评：本文作者运用“一引二介绍三点评法”介绍了小狗。一引：引入话题（第一段）；二介绍：介 绍动物的名称、年龄、喜好和性格特点（第二段的 16 句）；三点评：总结性点评，并用问句 结束全文（第二段第 78 句）。 添彩点添彩点:熟练运用本单元单词如 cute,friendly 等； 熟练运用 and 连接的并列句，增强了文章的结构性，使得文章层次分明，一目了然。 题笔：题笔： 几乎每人都有自己喜爱的动物，
23、那你喜欢的动物是什么呢？请你写一封电子邮件把你喜欢的动物告 诉你的笔友。注意：写出它的特征及你喜爱它的原因，50 词左右。 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: Dear Allan, Thanks for your letter.Do you want to know about my favorite animals? Well,I like pandas best. I like pandas because theyre from my mother country-China,and I think they are very beautiful and clever. I also like dol
24、phins very much. Dolphins are very friendly and clever. I like seeing the dolphin show. And I like koalas, too.They sleep during the day, but at night they get up and eat leaves. Arent they very interesting? Please write and tell me about your favorite animals. Yours, Jane 单元复习课 Unit 6 Im watching T
25、V. 假设你是 Sarah,Peter 是你的美国网友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以 下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。 内容：1.你的爱好和特长； 2.你的日常生活习惯（至少两点）； 3.你的主要上学方式； 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 7 页 共 14 页 4.你对动物的看法； 5.这些天你正在做的事（一件即可）。 要求：1.100 词左右；2.书写工整、规范。 Its Saturday today. Jeff and his family are all at home. Jeff is doing his homework.
26、His father is reading newspapers. His grandfather likes watching TV very much. He is watching a TV soap now. Jeffs mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. Where is Jeffs sister? Oh, she is painting in the garden! They are having a good time now. 点评：点评：本文作者运用了“4W1H 法”描述正在发生的事情。交代了时间（Saturday,now)、地点（
27、at home、 in the kitchen、in the garden)、人物（Jeff、his father、his grandfather、Jeffs mother、Jeffs sister)、活动（doing his homewok、reading newspapers、watching a TV soap、cooking lunch、painting)、 评价（having a good time) 添彩点添彩点：本文灵活运用现在进行时态对正在发生的事情进行论述。 文章完整地将时间、地点、人物、活动和评价写出来，要点完整。 题笔：题笔： 今天是周日，李磊一家都在家中。请根据下面表格
28、内的提示，以 What Are the Family Doing?为题，写 一篇 50 词左右的短文，描述一下李磊一家人的活动，可适当发挥。 李磊:做作业 李晶晶（妹妹）:玩玩具 父亲:洗车 母亲:打扫房间 祖父母:看电视 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: What Are the Family Doing? Its Sunday today. Li Lei and his family are all at home.Li Lei is doing his homework. His little sister, Li Jingjing is playing with toys. His father i
29、s washing his car. His mother is cleaning the rooms.What are his grandparents doing? Well , they are watching TV. What a happy family! 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 8 页 共 14 页 Unit 7 Its raining! 今天是星期六，外面下着雨，天气很凉爽。鲍勃全家都在家，他们都在做自己喜欢的事情来度过 休闲时光。请根据下表信息写一篇短文，描述鲍勃一家人的活动。要求：不少于 60 词。 Time:9:00 a.m
30、. Weather:rainy,cool Bob:read a sports magazine His father:read newspapers His mother:listen to music His sister Sarah:play with her toys His brother Mike:draw a picture Today is Saturday. Its rainy and cool. Bobs family are all at home. Now its 9:00 a.m. Bob is reading a sports magazine. His father
31、 is reading newspapers. His mother is listening to music. Music is her favorite.His sister Sarah is playing with her toys. His brother Mike is drawing a picture. Everyone is having fun. What a happy family! 点评：点评：本文运用“三步法”描述天气及人物活动。第一步：点明时间（第一段）；第二步：描述天气 情况，描述人物活动（第二段）；第三步：表达感受（第三段）。格式正确，结构完整清晰，段 落分
32、明，详略得当，语言表达顺畅。 添彩点：添彩点：一些高级词汇如 favorite、magazine 等提升了文章的档次； 恰当使用现在进行时态描述正在发生的事情，让读者身临其境。 题笔：题笔： 假如你们学校周日在大明湖组织了一次郊游，天气很好，同学们都玩得很高兴。有的在唱歌，有的 在跳舞，有的在拍照，还有的在画画.请适当发挥想象，描述一下这次郊游的场面。50 词以上。 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: Today is Sunday,and its a beautiful , sunny day.Were on a school trip by the Daming Lake.All the students
33、 are having a good time. Some are singing under a tall tree ,some are dancing, some are taking photos, and others are drawing pictures. Look, a group of boy students are playing soccer on the grass. I think this is a good place to have fun. The students are really very relaxed. 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文
34、归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 9 页 共 14 页 Unit 8 Is there a post office near here? 假设你叫李磊，马克是你的美国笔友，他要来你家做客。请给马克写一封不少于 70 词的信，告诉 他出了机场后到达你家的路线。 Dear Mark, I am very happy that youre coming to visit my family. Now let me tell you the way to my house. You need to take a taxi from the airport. Go down Long Street and
35、turn left at the zoo. Then go along Second Avenue and turn right at New Street. Go down New Street and turn left at Hongxing Supermarket. My house is just across from the supermarket. I hope to see you soon. Yours, Li Lei 点评：点评：本文以书信的形式进行介绍，采用“三步三段法”介绍了如何选择道路的情况。第一步：开门 见山，表明写信目的，引出下文。第二步：详细介绍通往作者家的路
36、的情况。第三段：表达了作者的 期待。 添彩点：添彩点：熟练运用本单元所学的“指明方向”的词汇，如 go down,turn left/right 等； 熟练使用表示方位的介词（短语），如 along,down,across from 等。 题笔：题笔： 下图是某街区的平面图，最近来此旅游的人很多，为方便游客，请写一份旅游指南。 佳作欣赏：佳作欣赏： 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 10 页 共 14 页 Welcome to Center Street Take a taxi from the airport.Go down River Street,
37、and you will pass a big park on your left and then turn left on Bridge Street. Go down Bridge Street and then turn right. Now,you are on Center Street.Center Street is a good place to have fun. Its a very busy street.You can enjoy flowers in the garden. Its there,between the post Road office and the
38、 restaurant. If you like reading,you can visit the bookstore. And when you are hungry,you can go to the restaurant across from the bookstore. We hope you have a good time on Center Street! Unit 9 What does he look like? 请用英语写一篇短文，从职业、上班方式、外貌和兴趣爱好等方面介绍自己的父母。 要求：1.参考下面表格中的要点进行表达，也可以进行适当发挥，但不要出现真实的个人信息
39、 （人名、 地名、学校名等）； 2.词数不少于 80. Father Mother job doctor teacher go to work drive a car by bus look like hobby fat,tall,short hair swimming,basketball thin, medium height,curly hair reading,singing This is my father. He is fat and tall. He has short hair. Hes a doctor. He usually drives a car to work. H
40、e likes swimming and playing basketball. On weekends, I like playing basketball with him. And this is my mother. She is a teacher. She teaches English in our school. She is thin and she has curly hair. She is of medium height. Her students like her very much. She goes to school by bus with me. She l
41、ikes reading and singing. I love my parents. I love my family. 点评：点评： 本文采用 “1W2L 法” 介绍了自己的父母。 第一步： 引入要描述的人物My father and my mother. 第二步：介绍父母的体型、发型、职业、上班的方式、爱好等。第三步：对父母的评价。 添彩点：添彩点：作者能够运用本单元学习的词汇来描述人物，如，thin,curly,be of medium height 等，做到学 以致用。 题笔：题笔： 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 11 页 共 14 页 假
42、如你结识了一位名叫 Eric 的新笔友，根据他发给你的有关信息，向你的同学简要介绍，50 次左右。 Name: Eric Age:14 From: Australia Looks:medium height,a little bit heavy,short curly brown hair Likes:playing sports,reading Wants to be:reporter 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: I have a new pen pal. His name is Eric. Hes from Australia. Hes 14 years old. Hes o f medium h
43、eight and he is a little bit heavy. He has short curly brown hair. He likes reading and playing sports. He wants to be a reporter. He thinks its an interesting job. He can meet lots o f interesting people. Unit 10 Id like some noodles. 根据以下信息为朱老大饺子屋（Zhu Laoda Dumpling House)写一则广告。 内容提示： 1.本店饺子品种齐全，个
44、大味美； 2.现有两种饺子：蔬菜饺子每 10 个 8 元，牛肉饺子每 10 个 15 元； 3.欢迎光临本店。地址：光明路 118 号。电话：685-8588. 要求：1.必须包含上述内容，可适当发挥想象。2.词数为 70 左右。 Zhu Laoda Dumpling House Would you like to have dumplings? At Zhu Laoda Dumpling House,we have all kinds of dumplings and they are all large and delicious. Now we have two great specia
45、ls!Special 1, dumplings with vegetables are just 8 yuan for 10. Special 2, dumplings with beef are only 15 yuan for 10. Welcome to our house! The address is No. 118 Guangming Road. Our telephone number is 685-8588. 点评：点评：本文很好地使用了“三步法”写一则广告。将广告相关的所有信息准确无误地表达出来，并且 合理清晰。文章用一个问句引出话题，开门见山。 添彩点：添彩点：Would
46、you like to.句型的使用。all kinds of,welcome 等词汇的使用提升了文章的档次， 给文章增色不少。 七下七下 Unit-Unit10 单元作文归纳总结单元作文归纳总结 第 12 页 共 14 页 题笔：题笔： 请根据下面的汉语提示，为店主写一篇小广告，词数不少于 60. 在南京路开了一家叫 Happy Dessert 的甜点屋，现新上三种很好的特色甜点：苹果香蕉冰淇淋橘 子脆梨冰淇淋西瓜草莓冰淇淋。有大杯、中杯、小杯三种。店内还有果汁、可乐和绿茶。 佳作欣赏佳作欣赏: Happy Dessert Welcome to Happy Dessert! What kind of dessert would you like? We have three great new specials: Apple and banana ice cream. Orange and pear ice cream. Watermelon and strawberry ice cream. And what size dessert would you like? We have large, medium and small cups of ice cream. We also have juice, cola and gr
