1、65 各地中考真题再现各地中考真题再现 01 2021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） （一）（一） 习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务， 作为初中毕业生， 你有什么人 生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 提示： 1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来 越强大，许多科技世界领先； 2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提 高能力，将来成为一名 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要
2、逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相 关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数 80100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。 Hello, everyone! _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Thats all. Thank you! 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确 定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【参考范文参考范文】 Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional cu
3、lture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Change 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on. As a teena
4、ger, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. Whats more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a p
5、erson that the country needs. In addition, wed better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches
6、 and let other countries admire us. Thats all. Thank you! 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓 一致， 特别使用一些亮点词句， 如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try ones best以及first of all, whats more, in addition和last but not least等，增
7、强逻 辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 （二）（二） 假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨 提示。 忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光， 请你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam” （备战中考） 为题，写一篇 80-100 词的短文。 1. 请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。 学 习 区 Listen to the teacher 生 活 区 Eat healthy food 提 示 区 Avo
8、id making mistakes Take notes Exercise Learn to relax Finish doing Have enough sleep Be on time Preparation for High School Entrance Exam _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam为题，介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照 片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容，并给出了一些关键词，学生们应依据这些图片和关键词，展开合理的 想象，充实细节内容，并用正确的英语表达出来。审
9、题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：分学 习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍，注意分清层次和结构，合理安排各个方面的信息，注意上下文的衔接、 过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述，时态应为一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应 注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。 可以简单句结构为主，清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次，应在文中穿插并列句、复合 句以及其他复杂句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。 【参考范文参考范文】 Preparation for High School Entr
10、ance Exam High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time
11、. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise e
12、very day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. Whats more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time! 这是一篇比较不错的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、 快乐的时光。题目
13、以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容，非常新颖独特，分析照片墙可知，文章应从 三个方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。 短文层次很清晰，叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态，符合表达的需要，语法规范，注意了动 词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句 子以简单句为基础，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章的节奏。短文中使用了一些 较好的短语和句型， 如 I still remember the days when our teachers and students work
14、ed together to prepare for it.、 If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、 Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等
15、。 （三）（三） 假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下： 1. 重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算； 2. 邮件不少于 80 词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数； 3. 不得出现真实的个人信息。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适 当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查 验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【参考范文参考范文】 Im going to graduate fro
16、m junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to
17、 tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is imposs
18、ible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life. 这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching Eng
19、lish TV programs.， 这些文章增色不少。 学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时 就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 （四）（四） 假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新 学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。 写作要点： 1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。 2. 介绍学校： (1) 课程有趣； (2) 有多名外教； (3) 活动丰富。 3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯
20、。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少 80 词。 Dear new friends, Its my pleasure to write you this letter. _ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就 是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适 当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态 来写，要注意主谓一致等问
21、题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表 示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正 确无误。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear new friends, Its my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am goo
22、d at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like. Now
23、 you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. Its also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and h
24、elp each other. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping （五）（五） 回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如 Have Your Say 栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你 是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此 次征文活动。 要点如下： say thanks to_ say sorry to_ 1. be not good at. 2. encourage me to 3. make great progress 4. 1. argue with 2. not talk to each other
25、 3. regret doing 4. 注意：(1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当拓展； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数：80-100，书信格式已给出； (4) 首句供参考 Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say. Dear _, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路写作思路】 这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对 某个人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式展示了两个话题的主要结 构，具体
26、的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应 以一般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体 说明你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的 感谢或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注 意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础， 穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、 自然。 【参考范文参考范文】 范文 1 D
27、ear Alice, Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you ha
28、d a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class. Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you goal luck. Yours, Li Hua 范文 2 Dear Alan, Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say sorry to you for a
29、rguing with you. When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didnt talk to each other
30、. I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Lets forget about the past and become good friends again. Yours, Li Hua 这是一篇优秀的作文， 短文作者根据题目要求， 向自己的同学表达了感谢或歉意。 第一篇作文是向Alice 表达了感谢，并详细介绍了Alice帮助自己学习英语的过程；第二篇作文向Alan表达了歉意，介绍了由于足 球比赛失利，互相埋怨，产生矛盾的过程，并表达了自己的悔意。文章内容都非常丰富，叙述也很完整、 详细。
31、两篇作文都使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。注意了谓语动词过去式形式的变化， 尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式结构完整，语言得体、地道，符合英语的 表达习惯。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、 Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再
32、如第二篇中When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Lets forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。 （六）（六） 时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!” 为题，根据以
33、下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。 要求： l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分； 2.不少于 60 词。 提示： l. What did you use to be like? 2. What is the most important change? 3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it. I have changed a lot! _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是 怎
34、么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时 和一般现在时。 【参考范文参考范文】 I have changed a lot! Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldnt remember the wo
35、rds freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. N
36、ow I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文 章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型used to do ;在妈妈及老师的帮助下， 我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结，并指出对于这个变化，我的 心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正 确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。
