1、28 28 责任责任 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题解读与作文示例指导相关话题解读与作文示例指导 话题解读话题解读 对责任的理解，通常可以分为两个层面。一是个人对自己、家庭、社会应该做的事、应该尽的责:二是 个人没有做好分内之事面应承担的责任或不利后果。 责任感是每个人必备的品格， 它既包括对自己的责任， 也包括对他人、对社会的责任。对中学生而言，努力学习、追求上进就是对自己负责的表现:规范自己的言 行，遵守社会公约，就是对他人和社会负责的表现。 和责任有关的英语话题作文， 往往会涉及责任意识的重要性、如何提
2、高责任心、我们的责任具体有哪 些等方面，也可以事记情，即通过记叙一件事情来谈谈对责任心的体会。在写作时要注意，对责任的态度 应该是积极的、正面的。 我们先来看一篇以责任为主题的英语文章，以供参考: Responsibility and teenagers: what you need to know During the teenage years, childrens need for responsibility and autonomy gets stronger- - its an important part of their path to young adulthood. To
3、become capable adults,teenagers need to learn to make good decisions on their own. The process of helping children take responsibility and make decisions is a key task for parents. You have an important role to play in training and supporting your child to be ready for more responsibility. This mean
4、s you need to plan when and in what areas to let your child start making decisions. How quickly you hand over responsibility to your teenager is up to you. It depends on many factors, including your own comfort level, your family and cultural traditions, and your childs maturity. Ideally, you and yo
5、ur child should both feel comfortable with the shift of responsibility and the pace of change. Too much or too soon might leave you both feeling overwhelmed.Too little or too slow might end up with your child feeling impatient or rebellious. 相关话题作文示例指导相关话题作文示例指导 （一）（一） 题目题目 Write a composition in at
6、 least 60 words on the topic Learn to be responsible. (iul“学会承担责任”为题， 写一 篇不少于 60 个词的短文。) Questions for reference: 1. Why should we learn to be responsible? 2. What should we be responsible for? 3. How can we be responsible? 审题审题 这是一篇以“学会承担责任”为题的全命题说明文。题目的要求和指示非常清晰，即围绕“why”、“what 和“how 这三个问题写作。在写作时，我
7、们需阐述责任的意义和重要性，明确责任的内容，比如我们对家 庭有哪些责任，对自已又有哪些责任，以及如何去具体地承担、履行我们的责任。为了使行文更连贯，可 以适当使用一些过渡词和连接词，使文章更有层级感和逻辑性。同时也要注意时态，本文应使用一般现在 时，切忌使用一般过去时详细叙述过去的某个事件或经历。 段落结构段落结构 本文可采用三段式的写作结构: 第一段(开头): 提出文章的主题，即作者想要阐述说明的主要内容。 第二段(中心段):是文章的中心部分，对文章的主题展开说明。可以适当使用 些过 2 黄渡词，使文章层 次分明， 衔接自然。 第三段(结尾):文章的结尾段，对全文进行总结，概括事理，起到首尾
8、呼应的效果。 核心语汇核心语汇 have a strong sense of responsibility 有很强的责任感 take responsibility for sth.对.负责 be responsible for sth.对.负责 spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力. be fully aware of.充分意识. . play an important role.起重要作用 cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 参考句型参考句型 Its your duty to do sth.是你的责
9、任。 The reason why . is that .的原因是. Without responsibility, we would .没有了责任，我们便会. I have become more responsible by doing sth.通过.我变得更有责任心了。 We should bear it in mind that .我们应当.牢记在心。 .Responsibility is one of the most important qualities that a person should have. 责任心是人所应具备的重要品质之一。 I didnt realize ho
10、w important responsibility is until .直到.我才意识到责任的重要性。 写作写作 1 Learn to be responsible It is an essential lesson for students to learn to be responsible. How to learn it? In my opinion, the following two aspects are very important. First, we should learn to take some basic duties step by step from ever
11、y details. Second, we should learn to admit every mistakes we have made. Because it will make us avoid making the same one next time as well as be trusted by other people.In a word, Abe responsible people means we have already grownup. 点评点评: 这篇作文内容比较完整， 表达比较流畅。 但是， 根据题目内容和要求， 写作要点应在于“why、 “what 和 “h
12、ow, 而这篇作文的阐述不够充分。此外，文中的一些语法问题，比如 every +名词单数形式、because 连 接原因状语从句不可单独成句，以及动名词作主语等，可以通过检查及时纠正。因此，建议该学生要尽量 减少、更正以上语法错误，并对“为什么要学会承担责任”这一问题，进行具体的阐述。 : 习作习作 2 Learn to be responsible In my opinion, being responsible is the key to success. Without responsibility, we wont be considered reliable enough. Thou
13、gh we are under 18 years old, we still need to learn to be responsible for ourselves. For example, we should learn to be responsible by sharing some housework in our family, such as washing the dishes, mopping the floor and so on. In this way, we can be more independent. 2In addition, we should lear
14、n to be responsible for our studies. We should work hard and try to learn from our own mistakes so that we can make greater progress. In a word, 3it is a strong sense of responsibility that makes us trust worthy and successful. 点评点评: 从结构来看，本文是典型的三段式作文，段落结构完整，首尾呼应。从内容来看，本文开门见山地提 出了责任心的重要性，接着阐述了我们应对什么
15、负责，应该如何去落实，内容充实，层次分明。通篇时态 运用合理，用词准确，复合句和强调句的运用使得文章句式富有变化。总的来说，是一篇比较好的作文。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words on the topic: makes me responsible. (以“ 使我有责 任心”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 提示:日常学习和生活中有很多事情有助于我们培养责任心。请举个例子 加以说明，并谈谈你的体会。 范文范文 Doing housework makes me responsible As a
16、 student, though Im always busy with studies, doing housework is never a waste of time. It can not only make my parents less tired, but also help me become more responsible.Doing housework makes me responsible because I can learn the necessary life sill,such as cooking meals, washing clothes, tidyin
17、g up the rooms. By doing housework,I can learn to be more independent, and to be responsible for myself. Besides, doing housework is a chance to show my gratitude and love to my parents. In this way, I can ease the burden of my parents, and be responsible for my family as well. All in all, doing hou
18、sework makes me responsible. （二）（二） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words about the topic To be a responsible student! (请以“做一个有担当的学生!”为题，写 篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Situation: 新时代的学生都需要有责任意识，无论是在自己家中、在学校或者是在社会上都需要有担当。请你谈 谈你的认识，并举例说明你的理解。 范文范文 To be a responsible student! Hav
19、ing a strong sense of responsibility helps us to be better and better. To be a responsible student, I think we should do the following things. First, as a student, studying is my major task. To be a responsible student, I should try my best to behave well at school. For example, I should listen to t
20、he teachers carefully, take notes when necessary and think actively in class. Second, as a family member, I should be responsible for the family too. I should care for my father, mother and my grandparents and I should do some housework as well. All in all, I should be responsible for not only mysel
21、f but also my family members. （三）（三） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words about the topic We should be responsible for ”以“我们应该对 负责”为题，写篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 ) 范文范文 We should be responsible for ourselves Since we are not little babies any more, I think we should take the responsibility for ourselves. To beg
22、in with, we should learn to look after ourselves. We need to learn how to cook,how to wash clothes and how to manage our time and money wisely so that we can be more responsible. Whats more, we need to study hard on our own. We should try hard to solve problems by ourselves instead of depending on others. We need to do homework independently. In conclusion, as we are growing up, it is time for us to be responsible for ourselves.
