1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：letter of advice,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作要求是写一封劝告信，属于应用文写作范畴。劝告信的目的是让人们的行为更加合理，对达到某一目的或实现某一愿望更加有利。一般说来，劝告比建议语气更重一些，有时还略带几分强制的意味，像“Youd better.”就属于这一类句型。劝告信可采用“三段式”写法，第一段提出问题；第二段写“三要三不要”；第三段表明自己的看法和期望。,写作指导,(一)开头常用句式引出话题 1.I am sorry
2、 you have had so much trouble in. 2.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions. (二)主体常用句式提出建议 1.In my opinion，it would be wise for you to take the following action. 2.First of all，.；Meanwhile，.；In addition，. 3.Its important for you to. 4.In the first place，I would also r
3、ecommend a balanced diet. 5.Why not drink a little，exercise，stop smoking and eat more fruit?,常用表达,(三)结尾常用句式提出期望 1.Cheer up！Your troubles will soon be over. 2.Where there is a will，there is a way. 3.Dont lose heart，whatever happens. 4.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. 5.Please le
4、t me know if I can help further.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John写信询问你关于如何过低碳生活的有关情况。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信，建议他也过低碳生活。 1.陈述理由：为什么要过低碳生活？(环境质量日益恶化等) 2.如何过低碳生活？提出至少三条建议。(必要时才开灯；让电器按节能方式运转；坐公交车或骑自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类等) 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：过低碳生活：live a low-carbon life,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为建议信； 2.确定人称：本文
5、的主要人称应为第一人称； 3.确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。,审题谋篇,谋篇 本文可以分为三个部分： 第一部分，点出写建议信的原因。 第二部分，具体可行的建议：正确使用电器；首选公交车或自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类。 第三部分，提出希望。,必备词汇 1.日益恶化 _ 2.一种做的好方法 _ 3.执行 _ 4.开灯 _ 5.让运转 _ 6.是某人的首选 _ 7.排放 _,查看答案,遣词造句,go from bad to worse,a good way to do.,carry out,turn on the lights,keep. working,be ones first choice,e
6、mission,关键句式 1.过低碳生活是减少温室气体排放的一种好方法。 Living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases. 2.我将用以下几种方法执行我的计划。 I shall carry out my plan in the following ways. 3.只有在必要时，我才会开灯。 I shall turn on the lights only when it is necessary. 4.为了节省能源，我将让冰箱和空调以低碳模式运转。 I shall keep the
7、 refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy.,5.公交车或自行车将是我的首选。 The bus or bicycle will be my first choice. 6.当我购物时，我将限制使用塑料袋。 When I go shopping，I will limit the use of plastic bags. 7.只要有可能，我将把垃圾分成不可回收垃圾和可回收垃圾。 Whenever/No matter when it is possible，I will separa
8、te my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste.,句式升级 1.用as引导的原因状语从句连接句1和句2。 _ 2.用并列连词and连接句3和句4。 _,查看答案,I shall turn on the lights only when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy.,As living a low-carbon life is a good way to re
9、duce the emission of greenhouse gases，I shall carry out my plan in the following ways.,3.用not only.but also.且not only位于句首合并句6和句7。 _,查看答案,Not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I go shopping，but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever possible.,用适
10、当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,Dear John， You have asked for my advice on how to live a low-carbon life and I will try to make some suggestions.With the environmental pollution going from bad to worse，I sincerely suggest to all that we should live a low-carbon life today.,查看答案,组句成篇,参考范文,As
11、 living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce the emission of greenhouse gases，I shall carry out my plan in the following ways.To begin with，I shall turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy.Additionally，the bus or bicycle will be my first choice.Last but not least，not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when shopping，but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever possible. I hope that you will join in the activity. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,
