1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Eight WritingA personal letter,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,书信体写作需要注意三点、把握三步、掌握书信用语。 一、注意三点 1.开头、主体、结束三部分格式，所用语言符合书信体用语； 2.人称、时态使用正确； 3.要点齐全，句式多样，亮点丰富。,写作指导,二、把握三步 写私人信件的步骤： 第一步： 1.格式要正确。 2.时态：一般现在时；人称：第一人称。 第二步： 整理内容要点：首先对来信进行简短评论，接着提出几条建议。 第三步： 连句成文：要选用恰当的词语及合适的句型，并注意使用过
2、渡词。 三、掌握书信用语 注意掌握一些常见的开头语及结尾用语。,1.开头语： (1)Thank you very much for your letter! (2)Glad to receive your letter of July 3rd. (3)Im glad to receive your letter. (4)Thank you for your letter. (5)Im writing to express. (6)Im writing to ask about.,常用表达,2.正文中可能出现的表达语： (1)I suggest you do. (2)I think you sh
3、ould. (3)Im sure you will. 3.结尾常用语： (1)And I do hope you will. (2)Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. (3)Please give/send my regards/best wishes to. (4)Please remember me to.,PART 2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,你(王伟)的好友(李磊)最近经常和一些朋友去网吧、游戏厅玩，有时甚至旷课。请你根据下面要点用英语写一封信，对他进行劝诫。 内容包括： 1.朋友在人的一生中起着重要作用； 2.真正的朋友
4、不会让你去做坏事； 3.我们要明辨是非，慎重交友。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为书信； 2.确定人称：本文应用第一人称来写； 3.确定时态：书信主体的前半部分应用过去时，因为涉及李磊过去已做过的事情，但在自己对他的做法发表看法时，应用一般现在时。 谋篇 1.开头部分：交代写信的目的。 2.主体部分：根据要求写具体内容。本书信的主要内容：(1)李磊的近期表现；(2)朋友的作用；(3)对李磊提出的劝告。 3.结束部分：劝诫李磊听取意见。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.与一起 _ 2.为了做某事 _ 3.担心 _ 4.起重要作用 _
5、 5.做错事 _ 6.考虑 _,遣词造句,查看答案,together with,in order to/so as to do sth.,be worried about,play an important part/role in,do something wrong,think about,关键句式 1.作为你最好的朋友之一，我为你感到担忧。 As one of your best friends，Im very worried about you. 2.是你该想一想上面我谈到的这个问题的时候了。 At this time you should think about the proble
6、m I talked about above. 句式升级 1.用现在分词短语作状语改写句1。，Im very worried about you. 2.用Its high time that.句式改写句2。the problem I talked about above.,查看答案,Being one of your best friends,Its high time that you thought about/should think about,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。 Dear Li Lei， I am writing to
7、 you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you.,查看答案,组句成篇,I noticed that recently you often went to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several of your friends.Sometimes，you even didnt have classes in order to play with your friends.Being one of your best
8、 friends，Im very worried about you.Friends play an important part in ones life.We have to choose our friends carefully.True friends will never ask us to do something wrong.I dont think the friends around you are your true friends. Its high time that you should think about the problem I talked about above.And I do hope you will make a wise decision soon. Yours， Wang Wei,查看答案,
