1、专题十二短文改错议论、应用类考点 01：冠词 3 颗星考点 02：代词 3 颗星考点 03：介词和介词短语 2 颗星考点 04: 名词 3 颗星 考点 05：主谓一致 5 颗星考点 06：形容词和副词 5 颗星考点 07 情态动词和虚拟语气 3 颗星考点 08：非谓语动词 5 颗星考点 09：动词的时态和语态 5 颗星考点 10：定语从句 3 颗星考点 11 名词性从句 3 颗星考点 12 并列连词 4 颗星考点 13 状语从句 3 颗星考点 14 特殊句式 2 颗星考点 29 短文改错议论文 5 颗星考点 30 短文改错应用文 5 颗星一、语法填空1 阅读下面短文,按照句子结构的语法性和上下
2、文连贯的要求, 在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空。Jonny: Hey! Im just practicing Tai Chi (太极). Would you like to join me?Peter: I know nothing about it. Is it difficult?Jonny:It seem seasy,but you need a lot of practice. You just follow me like this.Peter: OK. Dont laugh me. I may look funny.Jonny: Bend your knee
3、s slightly and reach out your arms like tree branches, naturally and (soft). Try to keep your body straight. Move slowly, then be sure to keep your balance and dont let your body shake.Peter: I cannot control my body well. My legs become (pain).Jonny: Keep (hold) your position for a while. It helps
4、develop your strength and flexibility. Raise your leg and let stay in the air for seconds.Peter: I feel my legs shaking. I cannot do this any longer.Jonny: Be patient! Tai Chi ( call)“ shadow boxing“ in English. It asks you to act like water: to be flexible as well strong. In real competition , a Ta
5、i Chi master borrows the strength of the competitor and uses this energy to fight back. The (hard) you try to beat him, the more likely you will get hit. He controls you!Peter : Unbelievable! Oh , you dont mind,Ill stop and take a deep .2 阅读下面短文,在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。One morning, I was waiting
6、at the bus stop, worried about (be) late for school. There were many people waiting at the bus stop, some of them looked very anxious and (disappoint) . when the bus finally came, we all hurried on board. I got a place next the window, so I had a good view of the sidewalk. A boy on a bike (catch ) m
7、y attention. He was riding beside the bus and waving his arms. I heard a passenger behind me shouting to the driver, but he refused (stop) until we reached the next stop. Still, the boy kept (ride). He was carrying something over his shoulder and shouting. Finally, when we came to the next stop, the
8、 boy ran up to the door of the bus. I heard an excited conversation. Then the driver stood up and asked, “ anyone lose a suitcase at the last stop?” A woman on the bus shouted, “Oh, dear! It s (I)”. She pushed her way to the driver and took the suitcase thankfully, Everyone on the bus began talking
9、about what the boy had done, and the crowd of strangers (sudden) became friendly to one another.3.阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1 个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Traditional Chinese painting is highly regarded all over the world for its theory(理论), _(express)and skill. And it is also one of _oldest continuous artistic traditi
10、ons in the world. It is known in Chinese _guohua, meaning “national or native painting“.Traditional Chinese painting is done with a brush _isdipped(蘸) in black or colored ink. The most popular paintings are made of paper and silk. The _(finish) work can be put in albums or on walls.Traditional Chine
11、se painting has its own special tools, consisting of brushes, ink, xuanpaper and so on.Chinese painting can _(divide) intofigure paintings, landscapes and flower- and -bird paintings according to the subjects. Land scapes, mainly _(describe) the natural scenery of mountains and rivers, represent a m
12、ajor type of traditional Chinese painting.In the 1980s Chinese oil painting developed _(quick). Then folk painting became popular, suchas, Chinese New Year pictures. It is put up on doors, room walls and windows _(invite) blessings during the New Year. And woodcuts _(become) increasingly various in
13、style, theme an artistic form since the early 1980s.4.阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1 个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式(最多三个单词)。Enough sleep is important to health. The amount of sleep needed(人们所需睡眠的数量) _(depend) on the age of the person and the conditions in _(提示,此处为定语从句) sleep takes place. The young may need more sleep than t
14、he old, but usually eight hours are enough for the health of grown-ups. Some can do with _(少于) than this amount, but _may need more. Every person knows his own need _is then a matter of good judgment to satisfy his need. Sleep _(提示,此处为情态动词) always be enough to make one bring back his _(strong) and g
15、et ready for a days work.Fresh air is necessary to sound sleep. So it is not without reason for some people to think that it is practicable to sleep in the open air. A bath at bedtime, _hot nor cool but of body temperature, may be _(help) to sleep. Sleep producing drug(帮助睡眠的药物) should never be taken
16、 except when _(suggest) by a doctor.二、短文改错5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Hello,boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what
17、youshould do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the fire fighters will come and put out a fire.If its a
18、 false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线
19、,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exerc
20、ise. 42% of the students wont obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one cant achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or
21、more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.7 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处。Dear Jeremy and Ali
22、ce,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have be
23、en disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you c
24、an figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。Guilin is in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomo
25、us Region, China, famous of its mountains and waters. I went here last summer and stayed for five day. During that time not only I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the unique mountains and clean rivers, but also I try the traditional weaving of Zhuang people. That impressed me most was the amazing
26、 folk-song-singing competition on the Li River, which attracted thousands of visitors or locals. Guilin enjoys a worldwide fame for it beautiful scenery, so its well worth visiting. I am strongly recommend you to visit it. I am strongly recommend you to visit it. I believe you will have a wonderfull
27、y time.参考答案一、语法填空答案： at; softly; painful; holding; it; is called; as; harder; if; breath解析： 1.at laugh at sb. “嘲笑某人”。2.softly and 连接并列成分,前面是 naturally,所以后面用 softly。3.painful become 后接形容词,构成系表结构,故用 painful。4.holding keep doing“持续/一直在做某事”。5.it 特指 your leg。6.is called 此处表示被动。7.as as well as 连接并列形容词(fle
28、xible 与 strong) 。8.harder 此处为 the harder.the more.结构。9.if “如果你不介意的话”,表示条件。10.breath take a deep breath“深呼吸”。答案： being; and; disappointed; to; caught; to stop; riding; did; me/mine; suddenly3.答案：expression; the; as; which/that; finished; be divided; describing; quickly; to invite; have become4.答案：dep
29、ends; which; less; others; It; should; strength; neither ; helpful; suggested二、短文改错5.答案： Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk what you withaboushould do when a fire alarm off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at goesthe door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to yo
30、ur Afrteacher and . Dont panic or get out of line, and to clasmte tryingremain quiet and . Soon the firefighters will come and put out lyca athefire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead usyoback to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing hurt, andrtell
31、 your teacher immediately.解析：1.talk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。2.主语是 a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。3.wait for sb. to do sth.等待某人做某事。4.第 classmate 是可数名词,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。5.and 连接的是两个并列的祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面应是肯定的祈使句,所以要用动词原形。6.此处作系动词 remain 的表语,所以应用形容词,和 quiet 并列。7.此处应该是特指上文提到的防火警报。8.人称代词错误。前文用的是人
32、称代词 you,所以此处也应该是 you。9.引导词使用重复,that 已经引导宾语从句,所以 when 多余,而且不符合语境。10.此处应该是选择关系而不是并列关系。6.答案： It is shown that many middle school students have physical clearyand mental problems. 68% of the students have studying anxiety as surveyingdwell as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage sleep. 52% are sho
33、rt lacksof physical exercise. 42% of the students wont obey parents or ourtheiteachers. Personally, I think we should balance our physical exercise studenand studies. Without sound body, one cant achieve anything. However, too amuch attention has been paid only studies. As a result, I suggest we ont
34、 arebgiven less homework more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in orandthis way can we live a happy and healthy life.解析：1.考查副词。修饰过去分词 shown,应该用副词。故 clear 改为 clearly。2.考查过去分词。句意:被调查的 68%的学生有学习焦虑以及视力问题。students 和survey 之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词作定语。故 surveying 改为 surveyed。3.考查副词。too 和 as well as 重复,均表示
35、“也”。故删去 too。4.考查主谓一致。完整的主语应该是 a larger percentage(of the students),应该用复数谓语。故 lack 改为 lacks。5.考查代词。根据句意“42%的学生不服从他们的父母和老师“,应该用 their。故 our 改为their。6.考查同位语。student 作了 we 的同位语,应该用复数。student 改为 students。7.考查冠词。根据句意“没有一个健康的身体“,所以加上 a。8.考查介词。固定搭配 pay attention to sth。故 on 改为 to。9.考查虚拟语气。suggest 后跟宾语从句,谓语动
36、词用 should+动词原形,should 可以省略。故 are 改为 be。10.考查连词。根据句意“我们应该给予更少的作业和更多的时间“。肯定句中表示“和”应该用 and。故 or 改为 and。答案： Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several about Cleos early mornin
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