1、专题 24 图画式2018 年高考题【2018北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)【答案】Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.On arriving at the tea house, the fo
2、reign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to m
3、ake tea.In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to time.Next came the moment when
4、 I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.At the end of the activity, holding the tea
5、bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，
6、可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。4. 反复审核，修改错误。一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容
7、，看其是否影响文章的内容。亮点说明：巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. 使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：On arriving at the tea houseI gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its pr
8、ofound history, its rich variety,Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique cultureholding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.使用倒装句突出重点。Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.使用 it 做形
9、式主语，使表达更地道。It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.2017 年高考题2017江苏卷81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(boxoffice income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever. Weve
10、 got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the WestEach sounds great! Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua: And the hightech！Li Jiang：Perfect！Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016.At Home.Son：Mum
11、，shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother? We can stay at home and watch films online. Its convenient with our new and faster network.Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the priceWe have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cannot get
12、the moneys worth. Some films are just boring【写作内容】1用约 30 个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。【写作要求】1写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用 to begin with, whats more, last but not
13、least 等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。 【参考范文】The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic de
14、velopment before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the boxoffice income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Int
15、ernet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movi
16、es. Therefore, its boxoffice income will probably enjoy a slight increase.2017北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：视频 video_【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁，主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。参考词汇和句型：1. In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before gradua
17、tion, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers4. Those who are talented in computer contributed to the making of the video.5. edited the video/added our
18、love to6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school内容要点：1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频One possible version：Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we a
19、greed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were u
20、navoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.2016 年高考题【2016北京】书面表达第二节 （ 20 分）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地
21、球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：地球日 Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener EarthA week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to ma
22、ke better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy
23、 with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词 calling upon us to join in th
24、e actions 和 so.that 句型与宾语从句 we can do more for a better world 等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组 call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn.into, give away, be proud of 等，使作文内容变得丰富。考点：情景作文【名师点睛】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。 “地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性
25、，多使用一些连接词。【2016上海】Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣” 。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示） 。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1.描述调研数据；2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。【答案】（略）考点：考查图表作文。 2015 年书面表达之图画
26、式1.【2015上海】Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校即将举办“读书节” ，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。【参考答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Since the Reading F
27、estival is around the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through
28、the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating a
29、nd intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained
30、on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my rec
31、ommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Pan Yang【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用
32、了多种句式和结构。运用定语从句 a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like
33、 that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book； 运用连词 Though, 运用副词 deeply 修饰 impressed运用了宾语从句 discussing heatedly what they have just re
34、ad；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如 not only but also; as far a
35、s Im concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。【名师点睛】一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。2.【2015福建】书面表达(满分 25 分）请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为 120 左右的短文。 内容包括：1. 描述画面；2. 概述其含义；3. 谈谈个人感想。 凿壁偷光注意：1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；参考词汇：凿，钻：boreIn the
36、picture,【答案】In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldnt
37、afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may beOf course, things are totally different today I
38、t is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.【亮点分析】文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词 ing 形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和 with 的复合结构 In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a
39、 shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一
40、个分词结构表示伴随状语 The boy, being poor ,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个 no matter 引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge an
41、d never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。第三段结束 Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个 not but 结构以及宾语从句 It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要
42、的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。【考点定位】看图说话写作。【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。 3.【2015北京】假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅
43、图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于 60.提示词：一个面团 a piece of dough 面人 dough figurine【答案】Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welco
44、me and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally, we put the figurines we made on the
45、 table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【亮点说明】范文注意使用 First, Then, Finally 等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, we
46、 were all very excited.；定语从句 we put the figurines we made on the table；时间状语从句 When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。【考点定位】图表类记叙文【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出
47、来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的
48、高分会有更大的保障。2014 图画式1.【2014北京卷】书面表达（共两节，35 分） 第二节（20 分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意： 1. 词数不少于 60.2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.【答案】There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our schoo
49、l. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.
