1、36 36 信函、信件信函、信件 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题体裁解读相关话题体裁解读 信函和信件是中考中最常见的应用文写作类型，是人们相互交流信息的书面通讯方式。从写作对象上 看，信函和信件通常分为公开信和私人信。从写作内容上看，信件(信函)主要有建议信、推荐信、求助信、 告别信、感谢信等，中考中曾经出现过的写作类别为建议信。此外，信件(信函)还分为初次写信和写回信。 因此，考生应当仔细审题，根据不同的信件(信函)类别写作。 书信格式组成书信格式组成 在英语信件(信函)写作中尤其要注意书写格式:英文书信由
2、信头、称呼、正文、结束语、结尾谦称几部 分组成。 1. 信头。指写信人的地址和写信日期，写于信纸右上角。地址由小到大写，日期写在地址下。称呼 顶格写在左上角，后面的标点用逗号。 2. 称呼。常以 Dear 开头，如果不清楚收信人性别，则写 Dear Sir or Madam。 3. 正文。在称呼下一行开始，可顶格，也可段首缩进。正文的开头通常有两类: (1)主动给对方写信，开头应当写明写信的目的或背景，再详细叙述。常用开头有:I am writing to you to. 我写信给你是为了. I am sorry to hear that .得知.我很难过。 I am very glad to
3、 write a letter to you. These days we are talking about .很高兴写信给你，最近我们正在 计. Its been a long time since we met last time.我们已经好久不见了。 (2)写回信给对方，开头应当先表明感谢收到来信。常用开头有: Thank you for your letter From your letter I learnt that .感谢你的来信，从你的信中，我得-. I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.抱歉没有早些回信。 I am glad yo
4、u ask me for help.感谢你向我求助。 4.结束语。在正文下自成段，表达祝愿或希望。常用的结束语有: Best wishes!请接受我的美好祝福! Looking forward to your reply!期待你的回信! I hope to hear from you soon.期待不久能收到你的回复。 Hope my suggestions will be helpful.希望我的建议能帮到你。 I hope what I said can help you.希望我说的对你有所助益。 Have a good time!过得愉快! 5.结尾谦称。写于结束语下一行。如正文左顶格写
5、，结尾谦称也左顶格。如正又段结尾谦称则从信偏右 的地方开始写。注意首字母大写，后面使用逗号。常用的谦称有:Yours, Yours ever, Yours sincerely, Truly yours, Yours respectfully, 书信书信(信函信函)写作格式示例写作格式示例 (写信人地址) 11 Nanjing Road, Shanghai, China (写信时间) May 1st, 2017 Dear Mr./ Ms. . (称呼) I am writing to. (正文开始写明目的或背景) (正文) Hoping to hear from you soon! (结束语)
6、相关话题中考满分作文解析相关话题中考满分作文解析 （一）（一） 随着我们不断成长，生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光，同时伴随不少烦恼仔细阅读下面小华写给 英语报社的信，结合自己的实际，运用所学知识，请你以编辑的名义，就他的频恼在回信中给出好的建议 Dear sir， Im Xiaohua， 15， a middle school student I have some problems to tell you， my parents always say to me， Study， study， do homework， do your homework when I come back How
7、ever，they don t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 pm every day And last Sunday， my 3yearold brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam I really wanted to get better grades， so I couldnt stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried
8、loudly Then my mother came in， she blamed me without asking why My eyes were full of tears at that time It was not my fault Why did she treat me like that？Didnt mother love me？ After all Im also her birth child， My dear editor， what can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？ Sincerely， Xiaohua 要求
9、： （1）卷面整洁（无污迹），书写工整（有美感） （2）全文字数不少于 90 词书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数 （3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确 （4）内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议，并适当发挥：文中不能出现真实的人名、地名 Dear Xiaohua， Im glad to receive your letter I have ever had the same experience I even had a fight with my parents But now， I fully understand them _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope th
10、ese help! Tony 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Xiaohua， Im glad to receive your letter I have ever had the same experience I even had a fight with my parents But now， I fully understand them（开篇表明自己也碰到过） First，As parents，their dream is that one day you can get good gradesSo they put emphasis on homework every day Wh
11、y not talk with your parents？ 【高分句型一】 you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it Or you can help them do some housework after school Second， For your little brother， He is just a babyHe is glad to see you after your coming back from schoolSo he wants to play with youWhy d
12、ont you play with him for a few minutes And you also can tell him that you have something important to do Maybe he will get your point At last， Believe your parents They all love you forever All you need to do is communication Then you will get on well with your parents and brother【高分句型一】（针对对方的信提出三点
13、建议） I hope these help!（结尾给出期望） Tony （二）（二） 假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新 学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。 写作要点： 1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。 2. 介绍学校： (1) 课程有趣； (2) 有多名外教； (3) 活动丰富。 3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 至少 80 词。 Dear n
14、ew friends, Its my pleasure to write you this letter. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就 是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适 当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态 来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表 示转折、因果、并
15、列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正 确无误。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear new friends, Its my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teach
16、ers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like. Now you are going to be middle school student
17、s. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. Its also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other. Best wishes! Yours, Li Pin
18、g （三）（三） 假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施山与海对话（ Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea）项目今年暑假，你的手拉手活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动请根据下列 提示给他写一封 80 词左右的书信内容包括： 自我介绍 年龄、性格、爱好 校园生活介绍 社团活动 家乡介绍 自然环境，名胜古迹 你的建议 上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化 注意：1文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数 提示词：遵义海龙囤 Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址 Z
19、unyi Conference Site Dear Xiaohai， Im glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea Now let me tell you something about me and my city_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Welcome to my city! Im looking forward to meeting you Yours sincerely， Daming 【写作思路写作思路】 本题是一篇材料作
20、文，也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一般现在 时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发 挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。 写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Xiaohai， Im glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea No
21、w let me tell you something about me and my city I am fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls and running. I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after c
22、lass. After school, we often do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi is beautiful and therere many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, li
23、ke Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyis history and culture, you can go online for it. Welcome to my city! Im looking forward to meeting you Yours sincerely， Daming 【名师点评】【名师点评】 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。 考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和
24、句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句 式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、 标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。 写作六步法： 1.审题：文体，时态，人称。 2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。 3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。 4.连句成文，合理使用连词。 5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。 6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。 （四）（四）
25、 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的 体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。 地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一 代表 幸福，可以带来好运 使用场所 婚礼，春节等 表达方式 剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼 提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for Dear Tony, Its great to receive your letter. Im writing to tell you something about Chinese red. _ _ _ _ _
26、_ _ _ I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Tony, Its great to receive your letter. Im writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people.
27、It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck. People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding
28、room is decorated with red. Whats more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China. I truly ho
29、pe my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua （五）（五） 假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友 Nathan 犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为 帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历用英语回信开导他。 To： From： Subjects： Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hue, Im unhappy that Ive made some mistakes recently. Theyre troubling me a lot
30、 these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me? Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes? Can you tell me one of your mistakes? How did you deal with your problem? What have you learned from the mistake? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best
31、, Nathan 注意： l. 词数 90 左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量； 2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Nathan, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes Su Hua 【写作思路写作思路】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维， 考查运用所学英语
32、知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短 语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Nathan, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone makes mistakes. Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends
33、that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will underst
34、and you. Then you will feel much better. I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes. Su Hua 【名师点评】【名师点评】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example， so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way， feel much better等。而固定
35、句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和Its true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesnt matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结 牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 （六）（六） 假定
36、你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表 示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活 动。 要求： (1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Milk, Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生 态
37、公民), we did a good job. Last _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua 【写作思路写作思路】 在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连 词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。 【参考范文参考范文】 Dear Mike, Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecolo
