1、16 地域风情地域风情 2021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题写作指导示例相关话题写作指导示例 话题：话题作文话题：话题作文美丽的黄河风情线美丽的黄河风情线 假如你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line)为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。 1. 风情线总览(the Yellow River, run through the city of Lanzhou, a famous r
2、oad called Binhe Road, along the Yellow River)； 2. 聚焦景观(Zhongshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks)； 3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess)； 4. 特色游览(go sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。 要求：1. 80 词左右； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；内容上可适度发挥。 注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。 【写作思路】【写作思路】 这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的
3、黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景 观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息， 并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符 合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密， 符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【参考范文】【参考范文】 The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Tourist Line The Yellow River is our mother river. Do you know what
4、scenic spots the beautiful Yellow River has? Let me tell you! The Yellow River flows through Lanzhou. There is a famous highway called Binhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. Along the Yellow River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhongshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and so
5、on. There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. There, you can enjoy special tours, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellow River is waiting for you! 【名师点评】【名师点评】 【高分句型一】【高分句型一】 There is a famous highway called B
6、inhe Road, which runs along the Yellow River. 有一条著名的公路叫做 滨河路，它沿着黄河行驶。句子 which runs along the Yellow River.是由 which 引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】【高分句型二】 There are many places for leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and so on. 有很多休 闲娱乐的地方，如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用 there be 结构来写。 相关话题相关话题范文解析范文解析 （一）
7、（一） A City There is a city in the north of China. It has a population of over 5 million. There are many places of interest and well- protected historical sites there. It is a famous tourist city. Many visitors across the country come here to spend their holidays. Besides, the city is very modern. On
8、 both sides of the wide roads, there are many tall buildings. You can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The people of the city live a happy life. They are also very nice, who often help others. Many visitors think highly of the city. You are all welcome to visit this city
9、. 参考译文参考译文 一座城市一座城市 在中国的北方，有一-座城市。它有超过 500 万的人口。 那里有很多名胜古迹和保护得很好的历史遗迹。它是一座著名的旅游城市。全国的很多游客来这里度 假。除此以外，这座城市非常现代化。在宽阔道路的两旁，有很多高高的建筑。随处可以看到高高的树木、 美丽的花朵和绿草。城市中的人们过着幸福的生活。他们还非常友好，经常帮助别人。 很多游客对这座城市评价很高。欢迎来这座城市参观。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 population 人口 places of interest 名胜古迹 historical sites 历史遗迹 Tourist city 旅游城市 Everywh
10、ere 到处 Think highly of.对.评价很高 出彩句型出彩句型 . in the north of. . .在.的北面 It has a population of.它有.人口 On both sides of the wide roads, there are.在宽阔的道路旁，有. You are all welcome to .欢迎你们来. 高分点评高分点评 本文描写的是中国北方的一座城市，展现了其历史和现代并存的特点，突显了这座城市的与众不同和 地方风情。文章的表达非常地道，如描写人口时，使用的“It has a a population of. 句式，描写“某地有 某物”
11、时，使用的there be 句式。 （二）（二） A Beautiful Town In the southwest part of China, there is a small town with a population of about 5,000. The town is very beautiful with high mountains around it. And the mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboos, Through the town runs a small stream. There is al
12、so a new railway outside the town, People in the town are all hard-working.Though they are having a rich and good life, they are still working hard to build their town into a modern one. Is a beautiful town, isnt it? Are you attracted by it? 参考译文参考译文 座美丽的小镇座美丽的小镇 在中国的西南部，有一座小镇，小镇上大约有 5000 人。 小镇非常美丽，
13、四周有高山环绕。山上覆盖着各种各样的绿色竹子。有一条小溪穿小镇。在小镇外面， 有一条新的铁路。镇上的人都很勤奋。虽然他们过着富足的好生但他们还是努力将他们的小镇变得现代化。 这是一座漂亮的小镇，不是吗?你有被它吸引吗? 亮点词汇亮点词汇 southwest.西南部 bamboo 竹子 stream 小溪;溪流 railway 铁路 hard-working 勤奋的;勤勉的 出彩句型出彩句型 In the . part o. there is.方位，.有. The town is. with high mountains around it.小镇.被群山环绕着。 . are covered wi
14、th.复盖着。 Through the town runs a small stream.有一条小溪穿过小镇。 Its a beautiful town, isnt it?这是一个漂亮的小镇，不是吗? 高分点评高分点评 本文据写了一个美团的小值，主要抓住两个特点一自然风景和人文风情，展现了小镇美你的一面，文 事的句式运用是大出彩的地方， 如倒装句Through the town runs a small stream.”反义疑问句Its a beautiful town, isnt it?“”显示出作者扎文的语言功底。 英语满分作文必背英语满分作文必背 （一）（一） 假设你是刘伟， 你的美国朋
15、友 MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。 请你根据提示， 给 Mike 写 一封 e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。 内容提示： 1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日; 2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) 提示词语：Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money 根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 80 词的短文。所给英文提示 词供选用。注意：不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。
16、 满分范文满分范文 Dear Mike, How are you? Im really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditio
17、nal holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival
18、 Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish one another a happy year and good luck. How happy we are. Best wishes! Yours, Liu Wei （二）（二） 近几年，旅游已经成为一项全民活动。初中生们旅
19、游的机会也有很多，因此，旅游也是初中生 们津津乐道的话题。 你的美国朋友 Tom 非常喜欢中国文化，去年暑假你和他一起从桂林出发去北京旅游了几天，你 们参观了一些著名景点，还品尝了一些有名的小吃，请结合下表，把你们的旅游经历写成一篇不少 于 80 词的短文。 满分范文满分范文 A Trip to Beijing My American friend Tom and I went to Beijing by plane last summer. On the first day， we visited the Palace Museum and Tiananmen Square. The nex
20、t day， we climbed the Great Wall. We took lots of photos. Although we felt tired，it was a fantastic experience. The third day we relaxed. Then we had the Beijing roast duck for lunch. I think it is the most delicious food in the world. Tom is interested in Chinese culture，so we drank tea and saw Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse in the evening. Finally，we did some shopping and flew back to Guilin. The trip to Beijing was short，but it was wonderful. Tom said that he would never forget it.
