1、 1 中考英语写作满分标准中考英语写作满分标准 1. 结构要清晰结构要清晰 阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就会喜 欢你的作文。最常见的结构便是”三段式“。 第一段， 要开门见山， 直接拿出主题。 给大家举个例子， 比如， 写我的妈妈， 第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。 第二段，说明她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She
2、 always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。 第三段， 得出结论。 大家可以发表自己的观点， 也可以提出建议和希望。 如， I love my mother. I love my family！ 2. 时态、语法要准确时态、语法要准确 1.英语作文除了结构，时态这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、 数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙 一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现 在时；对于未来的憧憬要用 一
3、般将来时； 过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用 乱配。 2. 语法和拼写错误每个扣 0.5 分，重复错误一般不计。低级的语法错误不仅影响分数，更影响老师 对你英语水平的总体评判。低级的语法错误包括男女不分，时态错误，语态错误，单数复数等等。 3. 短语运用要灵活短语运用要灵活 2 写作文的时候，尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关 键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章 的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这 些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。 还有对关联词的使用， 如 first of all， se
4、condly， finally， last， so that， in order that， not.but， not only.but also 等。还可以使用更高级的词，如 in a word，all in all （表示总结的），but，yet，however（表示 转折）等。阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了整个文 章的思路。 4. 写全要点写全要点 近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，通常都是 3 5 个 提示点。这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再 好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是
5、文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后 围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。 5. 书写要整洁书写要整洁 作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁，同一篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有 2 到 3 分的 差距。 给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写，最简单的得分点就是我们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写 会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。 中考写作万能句型中考写作万能句型 【开头句】【开头句】 1. I think / As far as I know / In my opinion/as far as I am concerned/ from my
6、point of view 我认为我认为 3 In my opinion/From my point of view, we should know more about good manners. 在我看来，我们应更懂 礼貌。 2. It is clear that / Clearly 显而易见显而易见. It is clear (that) this city needs more schools, buses and hospitals. 显然，这个城市需要更多学校、公车和 医院。 Clearly, people who laugh more are healthier! 显然，笑得更多
7、的人更健康！ 3.As an old saying goes. 俗话说俗话说 As an old saying goes, “Good health is worth more than wealth.” 俗话说：“健康比财富更重要。” 4. generally speaking 一般来说；总的来说一般来说；总的来说 Generally speaking, I think life is better today. 总的来说，我认为如今的生活更好了。 5.The topic ofis becoming more and more popular recently. 最近最近话题越来越流行话题越
8、来越流行 The topic of shopping online is becoming more and more popular recently.最近，网购的话题越来越火热。 6. it is believed + (that) 从句人们认为从句人们认为 It is believed that the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. 人们认为互联网有利也有弊。 7. it is said (that) . 据说据说 It is said that about half of the people in China smok
9、e. 据说在中国大约有一半的人吸烟。 【衔接句】【衔接句】 1. though 虽然；尽管虽然；尽管 Though we are young, we can still do something to help. 虽然我们年轻，但我们还是可以做点事来帮忙 的。 4 2. even though / even if 即使；虽然即使；虽然 Even though they are busy, they are always thinking of me. 即使很忙，他们也总会想着我。 3. however 但是；不过；然而但是；不过；然而 He was feeling bad. However,
10、he went to school. 他感觉不舒服，但他还是去上学了。 4. not (that) but (that) 不是不是而是而是 Life is not a competition, but a trip, step by step. 生活不是竞赛，而是一场一步接着一步的旅行。 5. On one hand, ; on the other hand, 一方面，一方面，；另一方面，；另一方面， On one hand, I want to go to the party, but on the other hand I ought to study for the exam. 一方面我
11、想去参加宴会，但是另一方面我又得复习迎考。 6. reason for (doing) sth One good reason for reading is that it is useful. 要读书的一个很好的理由就是它很有用。 7. reason + (why / that) 从句从句 The reason that I ask for leave is that I hurt my left foot in the P. E. class this afternoon. 我之所以请假是因为今天下午在体育课上伤了左脚。 【结尾句】【结尾句】 1. in short/in a word/
12、in conclusion/to sum up/all in all 总之；简而言之总之；简而言之;一句话一句话 In a word，we should make our own happiness by ourselves. 总而言之，我们要自己来创造幸福。 2.finally 最后；最终最后；最终 Finally, thank you all for your help. 最后，感谢你们所有人的帮助。 3. Personally, I believe that 就我个人而言，我相信就我个人而言，我相信 5 Personally, I believe that the better we t
13、ake care of the environment,the more beautiful the world it will be. 4. From above, we can predict that. 从以上情况，我们可以预测从以上情况，我们可以预测. 中考写作高分锦囊中考写作高分锦囊 锦囊锦囊 1：巧用连接词过渡：巧用连接词过渡 1）次序关系： 第一/首先：first, firstly,first of all, to begin/start with, 第二/第三：second, secondly,third,thirdly 表最后：finally, eventually, las
14、tly, at last, last but not least 2) 递进关系： Whats more，moreover, besides, on the one hand., on the other hand., 3) 因果关系： because, since, as, for, due to, in view of, for this reason, as a result, so, therefore 4) 转折关系： but, however, though, even though 5) 并列关系： and, also, too, as well as, either, or,
15、both.and. 6) 归纳总结：in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole,in general 锦囊锦囊 2：掌握常用句型：掌握常用句型 重点句型 1. Its adj for sb to do 做对某人来说 2. so/such that 如此 以至于； too to do. 太 而不能 3. notuntil 直到才 4. The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 的原因是 5. That is why + 句子那是的原因 6. That is because + 句子那是因为 6 7. It is said tha
16、t + 句子据说It is reported that + 句子据报道 8. There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问 9. It goes without saying that + 句子不言而喻，毫无疑问 10. There is no need to do 没必要做 11. 主语+.find/think it adj. to do sth. 某人认为做某事. 提建议 1. had better (not)do 最好(不)做 2. Its +adj./n.of/for sb. to do 3. I suggest that you(should) do 我建议你做 4
17、. be supposed to do 应该做 5. If I were you, I would do我要是你的话，我会做 6. Dont forget to do=Remember to do. 7. Why not do / why dont you do? 为什么不 8. How about / what about doing 怎么样? 表示喜欢和感兴趣 1. like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜欢做 2. prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做 A 也不愿做 B 3. be interest
18、ed in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing . 感兴趣 努力做 1. try to do 努力做 try ones best to do= do ones best to do 竭尽全力做 2. make efforts to do= make every effort to do 尽力做 3. do what sb can (do) to do 尽力做 spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做 7 do what /everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做 打算做 / 计划做 1. inten
19、d / plan to do 打算做 be going to do 打算/计划做 2. decide to do 决定做 determine to do 决定做 3. make up ones mind to do 下定决心做 表示想/希望 1. want to do = would like to do 想做 2. hope/wish to do 希望做 expect to do 期待着做 3. desire to do=have a great desire to do 只加 doing 作宾语的动词 finish / keep /practice / suggest / allow /
20、consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing 固定搭配 1. look forward to doing 盼望做keep on doing 坚持做dream of doing 梦想做 2. cant help doing 情不自禁地做 keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做 3. be busy (in )doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做 4. spend time / money(in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间
21、做 5. have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心 锦囊锦囊 3 ：适当升级句型：适当升级句型 1. 普通级句型比较级句型 The environment is bad. The environment is getting worse and worse. 2. 动名词作主语 Reading is a good way to relax myself 3. 感叹句增强情感 8 How important it is forstudents to do sports！ 4. 形容句型升级 It was an unusual e
22、xperience in my life It was one of the most unusual experience in my life. 5. 简单句从句（状语从句、定语从句、宾语从句） 锦囊锦囊 4：常用的名言警句：常用的名言警句 1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩. 2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友. 3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成. 4. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通
23、罗马. 5. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点 6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母 7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。 8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。 9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。 10. Alwa
24、ys prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。 11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 12. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里。 写作小写作小 tips： 动笔写作之前，先在草稿纸上对写作思路进行构思。先在草稿纸上对写作思路进行构思。 用笔圈画题目的提示语用笔圈画题目的提示语，保证提示语中的每个点在作文中都有对应的句子。 初中作文最佳的字数是初中作文最佳的字数是 100 字左右字左右， 如果学生的作文写了不到 80 个字 （标点除外） ， 那么可能他们的文章内容也不够完整。 9 保证单词、语法无误前期下，适当使用更高
25、级的词汇和句型。保证单词、语法无误前期下，适当使用更高级的词汇和句型。 检查！检查！检查！把每个句子都当作改错题那样纠错。检查！检查！检查！把每个句子都当作改错题那样纠错。 各类文体写作模板各类文体写作模板 (一一) 议论文议论文 【写作步骤】【写作步骤】 第一段：确定主题，引出论点； 第二段：通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一 起； 第三段：得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文 模板模板 1观点态度型观点态度型 Many students think that., because. . But as to me, I am not in favour
26、of this point of view. I think, ., so.（我的看法）. First of all, .（原因一）. Secondly,.（原因二）. Thirdly/Most important of all, .（原因三）. All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that .（总结观点）. And I hope .（提出愿望）. 模板模板 2观点态度型观点态度型 The topic of _is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opi
27、nions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of .（理由一）. Whats more, .（理由二）.Moreover, .（理由三）. While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), .（理由二）. Third(Finally), .（理由 三）. From my point of view,
28、 I think .（我的观点） . The reason is that.（原因） . 10 As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice. 模板模板 3说明利弊型说明利弊型 Nowadays,more and more people like to.（社会现象）. About this different people have different opinions. On the one h
29、and, some people think .（优点一） . Moreover ,.（优点二）. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, .（缺点一）. Besides, . （缺点二）. I think.（我的观点）. 模板模板 4解决方法型解决方法型 In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is.（问题）. For example, some.（例一）; some .（例二） ; some .（例三） and still some.（例四） . Faced with this, we shoul
30、d take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should.（解决方法一）. For another thing, wed better .（解决方法二). Because, we should.（解决方法三）. In my opinion, if . , we will. 【范文】 In recent days, we have to face a problem(我们正面对着一个问题): that is many students have bad eating habits. For ex
31、ample（例如）, some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks; some always like to eat the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health. Faced with this （面对这些问题） , we should take(我们应该采取) a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thi
32、ng （首先）, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods, such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. For another thing（其次）, wed better have meals at the right time. Besides（还有/此外）, we should not eat too much especially before we go to bed. In my opinion（在我看来）, if we have god eating habits, we will hav
33、e good health. And we can study beer.6 11 （二）记叙文（二）记叙文 【写作步骤】【写作步骤】 第一段：第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等； 第二段：第二段：详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等； 第三段：第三段：评价该事件：表明自己的看法、感受等。 【范文】【范文】 Yesterday our class had a basketball match with Class Two. Class Two was the top team of our grade, but we didnt want to settle fo
34、r second best. The match began at 4:30. At first, Class Two played better and was always in the lead. We were standing around the court, cheering loudly for our team. Whenever we scored, I jumped and shouted, forgetting Im a girl. The unfavorable situation lasted for three quarters. In the last quar
35、ter, our team changed the plan and slowly caught up. In the last minute the score became 81 to 80. Our class won the match. The exciting match gave us a lot of fun. 【常见的【常见的 4 种开头形式】种开头形式】 1. 开门见山式开头开门见山式开头 一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到开门见山，在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如 A Trip to Huangshan(黄 山之旅)的开头可以是：Last month, my fam
36、ily went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 2. 回忆性开头回忆性开头 这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如 never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、 unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的). 12 如
37、A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had. 3. 疑问性开头疑问性开头 在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住 中心。 如Planting Trees(种树)的开头可 以是：Have you ever planted trees? Dont you think planting trees is . 再如Traveling Abro
38、ad(出国之旅)的开头可以是： If you have an chance to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore? 4. 倒叙式开头倒叙式开头 在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。 如Catching Thieves (捉贼)的开头 可以这样写： I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let
39、me tell you. Its a lovely story. 特别注意： 1. 全文人称，时态前后的一致。 2. 全文叙述要有条理，顺序，无论是倒叙，顺序或者是插叙，切记要条理清晰 3. 注意叙述的过渡。 一般在地点转移或者时间、 事件的转换以及由概括说明到具体阐述时会发生过渡。 【加分句子】【加分句子】 1. Sth. impressed me greatly. 2. What impressed me most is that.7 （二）说明文（二）说明文 1. 阐述主题题型阐述主题题型 述名言或主题所蕴含的意义述名言或主题所蕴含的意义 分析并列举使其更充实。分析并列举使其更充实。 I
40、n recent days, we have to face _your topic_ problem, which is becoming more and more serious. First.（说明问题现状）. Second,. （举例子进一步说明问题） 13 Faced with this problem, we should take some measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,. （解决方法一）. For another.（解决方法二）. Finally.（解决方法三） Personally，I believe
41、that.（我的解决方法如何）.Therefore, Im confident that a bright future is waiting for us because.(解决方法带来的好处) 2.现象说明文现象说明文 例如：新中国成立以来社会发生了翻天覆地的变化 Recently., what amazes us most is., it is true that.（描述现状） There are many reasons explaining. The main reason is.， Whats more. Thirdly. As a result. （现状发生的原因） In con
42、clusion,.（总结上文的现象和原因，做总结） 3.说明利弊说明利弊 说明事物现状说明事物现状 事物本身优缺点（或一方面）事物本身优缺点（或一方面） 你对现状或前景的看法你对现状或前景的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has an important role in our daily life. Generally, its advantage can be seen as follows. First.（优点之一）,Besides.（优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. One of the i
43、mportant disadvantages is that.（A的第一个缺点）. To make matters worse.（A的第二个缺点） Above all, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the situations we are in. Only by this way.（对前景的预测） 4.图表说明文图表说明文 As is shown by the percentage in the table/picture/chart, 作文题目的议题 has been rose/decreased(increase
44、/drop) from _ to _. From the sharp decline/rise in the chart, it goes without saying that. There are at least 2 good reasons accounting for_. 14 On one hand,_. On the other hand, _, _ is due to the fact that_.In addition, _ is responsible for _. Maybe there are some other reasons to show_. But it is
45、 generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as Im concerned, I hold the point of view that _. I am sure that_. 5.事物说明文事物说明文 总评（过渡到事物介绍）总评（过渡到事物介绍）具体介绍事物（物品特征、事物发展历史、产品用途）具体介绍事物（物品特征、事物发展历史、产品用途）结束（评结束（评 述、意义说明）述、意义说明） 例：My toy dog I have a toy dog. My cousin
46、gave it to me. It looks funny and it is very fat in shape. On its funny head. Under its belly. The toy dog has been my best friend. It cant speak, but it can help me. I like it very much. 6.介绍地点介绍地点 总说（引出场所）总说（引出场所）按照顺序介绍场所（空间、时间顺序）按照顺序介绍场所（空间、时间顺序）结尾（点缀评价性、宣传性文字）结尾（点缀评价性、宣传性文字） 例：My study room My sister and I study in the same study room. Its. Come and see our study room. You can see. Near the window there is a. At the corner.Behind the door, you can find. Here is the place where we can get knowledge. What do you think of it?
