1、2021 高考英语一轮写作基础专项（高考英语一轮写作基础专项（二二） 一：佳作欣赏一：佳作欣赏 近期投放到地铁站点、 公交站点等公共服务区的共享单车给人们带来了很大便利,同时也缓解了交通压力。 但有 些人故意损坏单车,破坏二维码。请你写一篇文章,就此发表评论并提出合理建议。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:二维码 QR code Nowadays,bicycle-sharing system has become very popular.A large number of shared bikes can be
2、 found and rented at a low price in public places.Moreover,you can park the bike almost anywhere you like.In this way,shared bikes make it convenient for people to travel,which in turn can ease the traffic pressure. However,some people deliberately destroy the QR codes.Some even throw the bikes into
3、 rivers.In my opinion,some measures should be taken to solve these problems.Firstly,the government should make more strict laws to regulate the management of bicycle-sharing system.Secondly,the public should raise their awareness of using shared bikes reasonably.In the end,I call on everyone to prot
4、ect public services to make our life more beautiful. 二：知识讲解二：知识讲解 考场作文常见的考场作文常见的 3 类错误及防范措施类错误及防范措施 一、考场作文常见的 3 类错误 考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语。 (一)词汇类错误 考试时，考生很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语思 维的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化错误的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的 词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。 1单词拼写错误 误：By the
5、 way, hes a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china. 正：By the way, hes a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China. 2词形变化错误 误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 3词性不清错
6、误 误：Everyone in my family is like the dog. 正：Everyone in my family likes the dog. 4词汇用法错误 误：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He turned on the light after he entered the room. 5擅自改动习语 误：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education. 正：Nowadays most parents attach much im
7、portance to education. 即时演练 改正下列句子中的错误 1Doing a parttime job always effects study.effectsaffects 2There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English.writenwritten 3In my surprise, he has got the first prize.InTo 4We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak
8、English.attention 后加 to 5We are all entire responsible for our actions and for our reactions.entireentirely (二)语法类错误 一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法也应该准确无误。如果语法不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地表达，语 法类错误的多少会直接影响作文的档次。英语书面表达中语法类错误主要表现在： 1时态错误 误：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed. 正：When he came back, he found
9、that his wife had gone to bed. 2语态错误 误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3主谓一致错误 误：Some students like books tha
10、t is written by Lu Xun. 正：Some students like books that are written by Lu Xun. 4比较级使用错误 误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller. 正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller. 5非谓语动词使用错误 误：The teacher
11、 came into the lab, following by some students. 正：The teacher came into the lab, followed by some students. 即时演练 改正下列句子中的错误 1If it wont rain tomorrow, well go camping.wontdoesnt 2Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another.aream 3 They think students should have their own time
12、 to study and it is more quieter at home. moremuch 或去掉 more 4There are a lot of students stand in a queue to welcome the old soldier.standstanding 5She said she would pay a visit to Suzhou in the next month.去掉 in (三)汉语式英语 一般来说，英汉两种语言既有许多相似之处，又有许多不同之处。在写作时如果想当然地去写，会出现许多汉 语式英语，其中主要包括： 1纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序 误：
13、At this school studying, I really very happy. 正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy. 2句子成分残缺 误：There are many students dont support the project. 正：There are many students who dont support the project. 误：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 正：He told me that all my
14、classmates were sitting in the classroom. 3句子粘连 误：The old man has two sons, both of them work in the same company. 正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company. 正：The old man has two sons, both of whom work in the same company. 4主谓搭配不当 误：He happened an accident yesterday. 正：
15、An accident happened to him yesterday. 5动宾搭配不当 误：They are trying their best to improve their production. 正：They are trying their best to increase their production. 6形容词和名词搭配不当 误：We walked a far way before planting trees. 正：We walked a long way before planting trees. 7动词和副词搭配不当 误：My grandfather very
16、likes black tea and has it every day. 正：My grandfather likes black tea very much and has it every day. 8介词和宾语搭配不当 误：They will build a monument on memory of the national hero. 正：They will build a monument in memory of the national hero. 即时演练 改正下列句子中的错误 1We are impossible to finish the work in such a
17、short time.We are impossibleIt is impossible for us 2Its known that the cost in big cities is very expensive.expensivehigh 3He came here to attend the meeting in car.inby 4I havent heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much.your letteryou 5I have many collections of stamps, some
18、 of them are my favorite.some 前加 and 或 themwhich 二、防范出现错误的 2 个措施 写对句子是作文得高分的关键和保证，考场上要避免上述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施。 (一)确定主语 英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语(祈使句省略了主语 you)。写句子前首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语 与英语的区别。例如： 1北京八月多雨。 误：Beijing rains much in August. 正：It rains much in Beijing in August. 2写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。 误：Written in a hurry, we
19、found the book full of mistakes. 正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us) (二)确定谓语动词 英语中没有动词就构不成句子，但动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方 面： 1注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用。 误：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years. 正：The living standard of the people has risen/ha
20、s been raised in the past twenty years. 2注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用。 误：His grandmother has died for fifteen years. 正：His grandmother has been dead for fifteen years. 3注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词或动词短语。 误：That dictionary is belonged to the library. 正：That dictionary belongs to the library. 课时提能训练 .以下句子含有考生常犯的错误，请改正 1It is
21、 high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents.dodid 或在 do 前加 should 2While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.在 having 前加 we are 或 the doorbell rangwe heard the doorbell ringing 3Recently our village has taken place great changes. Recently great changes have taken place in our villag
22、e. 4Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.areis 5Eating at school is very convenient for students. It is very convenient for students to eat at school. 6Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is the first time visit to the US？去掉 time 7The car hitt
23、ed the old man and drived away.hittedhit; driveddrove 8I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim.theirwhose 或 their 前加 and 9There are many students are planting trees on the hill.去掉第二个 are 或在 students 后加 who 10At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic.swimm
24、ingswim .下面的考生作文中共有 10 处语言错误，请改正 假定你是李华，最近与好朋友 Lucy 吵架了，现在给外教 Melinda 写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含： 1吵架的原因； 2吵架后的心情； 3请求 Melinda 给出解决办法。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 求诊病文 Dear Melinda， The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. The quarrel was o
25、ccurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this a
26、nd I have been felling frustrated ever since. I really dont want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 我来诊断 第一句：writtingwriting; becausethat 第二句：去掉 was; 去掉 at 第三句：because 后加 of 第四句：causedcausing 第五句：sinceresincerely; fellingfeeling 第七句：advicesadvice 第八句：youyour
