1、2021 高考英语一轮写作基础专项（一）高考英语一轮写作基础专项（一） 一：佳作欣赏一：佳作欣赏 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将从广州出发到北京进行为期一周的旅游,发邮件请你推荐合适的交通方 式及北京的景点。请你回复邮件,内容包括: 1.推荐从广州到北京的交通方式; 2.推荐两到三处北京景点; 3.表达祝愿。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Terry, Knowing that youre going to Beijing for vacation, Im more than pleased to give you some a
2、dvice. I suggest taking the high- speed train to Beijing from Guangzhou. For one thing, its comfortable and convenient. For another, you can enjoy the wonderful scenery along the way. After you arrive in Beijing, the first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall. As a symbol of ancient Chinese
3、 civilization, it is one of the worlds oldest and most magnificent man- made scenes. The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best- preserved royal garden in the world. May you have an unforgettable tourist experience! Yours, Li Hua 二：知识讲解二：知识讲解 五大基本句
4、式讲解五大基本句式讲解 写作是考生失分的重灾区，针对这一薄弱环节，建议高三考生采用 4 步学习法，先完成再完美；先求稳再 求变；先仿作再创作；先写好再写快。四个层级梯度设置，步步登高、级级提档。今天我们学习第一个层级里 面的第一步： 层级一表达无误保住分层级一表达无误保住分“写对句子写对句子”是基础是基础 写作中写对句子是最基本的要求，其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。所以，在平时训练时一定要从掌握基 本句式做起，通过观摩、背诵、仿写，最终写出准确无误的句子。在高考中即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气 十足，也一定要写得像模像样，硬伤不多！所以学写作，要先从最基本的句子抓起。 (一一) 万变不
5、离其宗的万变不离其宗的 5 种基本句式种基本句式 句子成分构成了英语中各种各样的句子，其实英语中最基本的句式只有五种，其他各种句式都是由这五种基本 句式演变而来。 一、主语谓语(不及物动词) 该句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点为：句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思，这类动词叫作不及物 动词，后面可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等结构。 The 13th National Games will take place in Tianjin at the end of August.(2017 天津高考书面表达) 第十三届全运会将于 8 月底在天津举行。 And I can play outsid
6、e too！(2016 四川高考书面表达) 我也可以在外面玩！ 即时演练 补全句子 1(2017 江苏高考书面表达)如图所示，中国电影的票房收入从 2012 到 2015 不断上升。 As is indicated in the graph, the box- office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015. 2(2015 北京高考书面表达)训练营将于 7 月 20 号开始。 This camp will open on July 20th. 二、主语谓语(及物动词)宾语 该句式特点为：谓语动词均为实义
7、动词，都是主语发出的动作，但不能表达完整的意思，必须跟一个宾语(宾语 可以由名词、代词、动名词、不定式等来充当)，即动作的承受者，才能表达完整的意思。 I plan to find a part- time job in a foreign capital company.(2016 全国卷书面表达) 我计划在一家外资公司里找一份兼职。 It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.(2015 北京高考书面表 达) 它给像你和我这样的青少年提供了一个享受运
8、动和学习中国文化的机会。 名师指津 该句式的谓语动词要用及物动词或及物动词短语。 We debated over what to put into the video.(2017 北京高考书面表达) 我们讨论了将什么放进视频中。 即时演练 补全句子 1(2017 全国卷书面表达)我们学校的乒乓球队现在正在招收新队员。 The Student Table Tennis Team of our school is looking for new players right now. 2(2018 陕西高考书面表达)作为一名外向的女孩，我和同学们相处得很好。 As an outgoing girl,
9、 I get along well with my classmates. 三、主语系动词表语 该句式就是常说的主系表结构。此句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样，谓语动词需用系动词(主要是 be 动词)， 表语多为形容词，也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式、分词、从句等。 Tang Poetry is what we are going to learn the next class, scheduled on July 20 in the school library.(2017 全国卷书 面表达) 唐诗是我们下一节课将要学习的内容，定于 7 月 20 日在学校图书馆进行。 This is sure
10、ly a good chance for more people to see them.(2016 全国卷书面表达) 对于更多的人来说这确实是观看它们的一次好机会。 即时演练 补全句子 1(2019 北京高考书面表达)收到你的来信真是太棒了！知道你对中国历史有兴趣，我很自豪。 Its great to hear from you! I feel proud of knowing your interest in Chinese history. 2现在，在中学课外活动正变得越来越受欢迎。 Nowadays, after- class activities are becoming more
11、and more popular in high schools. 四、主语谓语(及物动词)间接宾语直接宾语 该句式中的谓语动词必须跟两个宾语才能表达完整的意思。一个是表示人的间接宾语；一个是表示物的直接宾 语。一般间接宾语在前面，直接宾语在后面。 The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outing for us these days.(2017 浙江高考应用文写作) 我写信的目的是想告诉你最近我们有一次郊游。 Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a s
12、afe return.(2016 天津高考书面表达) 现在，我代表全校同学，祝你们一路平安。 即时演练 补全句子 1(2018 北京高考书面表达)首先，他向我们演示了捏面人的基本步骤和技巧。 First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. 2同时，父母给孩子的保护太多了。 At the same time, parents are giving their children too much protection. 五、主语谓语(及物动词)宾语宾语补足语 该句式中的谓语虽然是及物动词，但是只跟一
13、个宾语还不能表达完整的意思，必须加上一个补充成分来说明宾 语，才能使意思完整。宾语补足语是用来补充说明宾语的情况的，直接跟在宾语之后。 Therefore, I would like you to join our schools table tennis team.(2017 全国卷书面表达) 因此，我想邀请你加入我们学校的乒乓球队。 During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship.(2016 天津高考书面表
14、达) 在这两周期间，我们在一起学习、生活，这给了我们增进友谊的机会。 即时演练 补全句子 1(2016 北京高考书面表达)事实上，他鼓励我在大学主修英语。 In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college. 2(2018 辽宁高考书面表达)你的投稿将会使得这次活动获得巨大成功。 Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. 3作为一名中学生，我认为英语是一门非常重要的科目。 As a high school student, I consider Eng
15、lish a very important subject. 课时提能训练 .根据要求补全句子 1我们尚未决定什么时候再讨论这个问题。(主语谓语宾语，“特殊疑问词不定式”作宾语) We havent decided when to discuss the problem again. 2每天早上我们都能听到他大声朗读英语。(主语谓语宾语宾语补足语) Every morning we hear him read English aloud. 3奶奶昨晚给我讲了一个很有趣的故事。(主语谓语间接宾语直接宾语) My granny told me a very interesting story la
16、st night. 4早睡早起是一个好习惯。(主语系动词表语，动名词作主语) Going to bed early and getting up early is a good habit. 5我真的很感谢你过来帮我补习数学。(主语谓语宾语，动名词复合结构作宾语) I really appreciate your coming over to help me with my math. 6最近 10 年，我的家乡发生了巨大变化。(主语谓语) Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years. .根据要求完成下
17、列题目 ()用简单句翻译下列各句，并写出所属的基本句式 1我是一名美国学生，名叫吉姆。 I am an American student, Jim.(主语系动词表语) 2上周我和家人去了北京，参观了许多名胜。 Last week I went to Beijing and visited many places of interest with my family.(主语谓语宾语) 3在我参观期间，我在北京大饭店(BEIJING GRAND HOTEL)住了五天。 During my visit, I stayed at the BEIJING GRAND HOTEL for five day
18、s.(主语谓语) 4这个旅馆给我们提供了很好的服务。 The hotel offered us good service.(主语谓语间接宾语直接宾语) 5他们总是将房间保持得很整洁。 They always keep the rooms clean and tidy.(主语谓语宾语宾语补足语) 6外国游客住在那里很方便。 It is very convenient for foreign visitors to stay there.(主语系动词表语，it 作形式主语) ()适当添加细节将()中的 6 个句子合并成一篇短文 I am an American student whose name
19、 is Jim. Last week I went to Beijing and visited many places of interest with my family. During my visit, I stayed at the BEIJING GRAND HOTEL for five days, which offered us good service. And they always keep the rooms clean and tidy. Whats more, with everything labeled in both English and Chinese, it is very convenient for foreign visitors to stay there. I was deeply touched by this.
