1、,9/14/2019,Check for errors,Tom is tall and slim. He have a square face. He has big bright eyes and short straight hair. He often wears a blue baseball hat. He looks handsome.,Tom is a honest boy. I can always trust him because he never tells lie. Hes ready to help others any time. he has a good sen
2、se of humour and often tells me funny jokes.,Tom often listens to other people carefully and helps them solve their problems. He would like to be a socil worker when he grows up, I think he will make a good social worker.,an,a,He,.,social,has,Punctuation(标点) Capitalization(大写) Grammar error Spelling
3、,Tom is both my classmate and my best friend.,2. I can always trust him. He never tells a lie.,3. He is a humorous boy. He tells me jokes.,Try to make these sentences better.,I can always trust him because he never tells a lie.,He has a good sense of humour and often tells me funny jokes.,use senten
4、ces of different lengths (长度),(short),(long),1. He often wears a hat.,He often wears a blue baseball hat.,(not clear),(clear),Improve your writing,Rewrite parts,use specific words,Unit 1 FriendsTask,From Zhimei Yong,share things with,help . with homework,future plans,generous,helpful,Betty,personali
5、ty,has a good voice,be ready to help,be a singer,give her seat to,Revision,May,big bright eyes,long straight hair,shorter than .,looks,pretty,Revision,Daniel is going to take part in the writing competition. He is making a list of words that he can use to describe different people. Read his list.,My
6、 best friend,She has a _ face.,New words,The man is _too.,He looks_.,square,fat,handsome,She always wears a _on her face.,Its a _face.,smile n. & vt. 微笑 smiling adj. 微笑的 zxx.k,New words,smile,smiling,The policeman is very _with his work.,They are_.,All her lessons are_.,excellent 杰出的，极好的,New words,p
7、atient,hard-working,excellent,Read and answer,Sample writing,Kate,round,bright, smiling,small,long,tall, slim,friendly, happy, patient, helpful,a teacher,My best friend (Outline),Say who your best friend is.,总体介绍,主体部分,Describe her looks and personality.,小结,Write about his/her future plans.,Introduct
8、ion,Main body,Conclusion,para1,para2,para3,para4,9/14/2019,Kate is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.,Paragraph 1,1. Introduction,Which sentence can we use?,9/14/2019,Kate is tall and slim. She has long hair. She has a round face and a small nose. I like her bright
9、 smiling eyes. They make her look really pretty and kind.,Paragraph 2,Find the details (细节) about her looks.,2. Looks,Which sentence tells the main idea?,Details help the reader “see” the person.,Square straight handsome fat good-looking cute,9/14/2019,Kate is a friendly girl. She always has a smile
10、 on her face and looks happy. She likes to help people. She helps me with my homework and she is very patient. When I feel bored or unhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things.,Paragraph 3,What is she like?,3. Personality,friendly,patient.,help,She always has a smi
11、le,on her face and looks happy.,She helps me with my homework,unhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things.,When I feel bored or,a topic sentence,supporting details,+,generous humorous true sweet,Kate wants to work with children. She would like to be a teacher when
12、she grows up. I think she will make an excellent teacher.,Paragraph 4,Which sentence can we use?,4. Future plans,love drawing,an artist,help people with their problems and make people happy,a social worker,9/14/2019,What would you like to write about your friend?,Future plans _,Looks _,Personality _
13、,My friend,.,Time to practice,Write your own article about your best friend,文章需包含所有要点，并将省略处补充完整。语句通顺，意思连贯。80词左右。,Time to practice,Time to share,1.Volunteers: share your articles with all the class.,2.Share your articles with your partners and give your partners a suitable marl.,9/14/2019,1. The best
14、 part of my article is:,2. The part that still needs work is:,3. The next time I write a descriptive article, I would like to:,Reflecting on your writing (反思),Writing helps you ,Share with others.,Have fun ,Exercise your brain.,Learn more about yourself.,(1) Revise and improve your writing. (2) Choose the best articles and put them on the wall.,Homework,9/14/2019,Thank you!,