1、Section_ Writing_介绍饮食的文章一、写作要领在人们的日常生活中,怎么也离不开吃饭、喝茶等行为,不论形成好的习惯还是坏的习惯,不论喜欢吃什么样的食物。这类文章往往可以写成说明文或是议论文。1写这类文章一定要明确自己的写作方向,明确自己的态度和观点;2在写作中要运用一定的写作方法,清楚地将要写的内容表达出来;3还要表达自己鲜明的观点,以及文章用什么时态来写。二、增分佳句1.be supposed to .2keep . in your left hand .3Its polite/impolite/good manners/bad manners to .4While eating
2、, youd better not .5You are not allowed to .over the dinner.6You should express your thanks to .题目要求起源于西方的快餐在中国越来越流行,尤其是在儿童和青少年群体之中,备受青睐。为此,美国某饭店快餐部在你校进行了一次调查。请你以“Fast Food”为题,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文,简单介绍以下几个方面的内容:1快餐受欢迎有其原因;2从营养角度来讲3医生的建议;4你的观点第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁:本文为一篇议论文;2确定中心人称:本文主要人称为第三人称;3确定主体时态:使用一般
3、现在时。二、构思第一部分:说明现象:现如今,快餐在中国日益流行,尤其是受到儿童和青少年的欢迎。第二部分:快餐受欢迎有其原因;但从营养角度来讲,快餐却差强人意。第三部分:说明医生的建议;发表自己的观点:对快餐还是少食为佳。第二步:核心词汇想周全1popular 受欢迎的2convenient 方便的3order 点菜4nutrition 营养5far_from 远非第三步:由词扩句雏形现1现如今,快餐在中国日益流行,尤其是受到儿童和青少年的欢迎。(现在进行时:be popular with)Nowadays,_fast_food_is_becoming_increasingly_popular_
4、in_China.It_is_especially_popular_with_children_and_teenagers.2快餐很方便,可以节省许多时间。(It is convenient to do .)It_is_very_convenient_to_get_fast_food_and_it_can_save_a_lot_of_time.3你只要进入一个快餐店去订购食物,你定的食物会立刻准备好。(and 并列句)You_just_go_into_a_fast_food_restaurant,_order_your_food,_and_your_food_is_ready_in_no_ti
5、me.4其次,它的受欢迎程度也来自于快餐店的清洁、舒适的环境和优良的服务。(result from)Secondly,_its_popularity_also_results_from_the_clean_and_comfortable_environment_of_fast_food_restaurants_and_the_excellent_service_there.5然而,快餐在营养方面远远不能令人满意,特别是对儿童和年轻人的健康和成长。(especially for .;简单句)However,_fast_food_is_far_from_satisfactory_in_nutrit
6、ion,_especially_for_the_health_and_growth_of_the_children_and_young_men.6因此,医生建议人们,尤其是儿童,应该尽量少吃快餐食品。(suggest, as . as possible)Therefore,_doctors_suggest_that_people,_especially_children,_should_eat_as_little_fast_food_as_possible.7你太忙了抽不出足够的时间,快餐是最好的选择。(too . to .)You_are_too_busy_to_spare_enough_t
7、ime_and_fast_food_is_the_best_choice.第四步:句式升级造亮点1把句 1 合成一个简单句Nowadays,_fast_food_is_becoming_increasingly_popular_in_China,_especially_among_children_and_teenagers.2用 so . that .句式改写句 2It_is_so_convenient_to_get_fast_food_that_it_can_save_a_lot_of_time.3用含 when 时间状语从句改写句 7Fast_food_is_the_best_choic
8、e_when_you_are_too_busy_to_spare_enough_time.第五步:过渡衔接联成篇Fast FoodNowadays,_fast_food_is_becoming_increasingly_popular_in_China,_especially_among_children_and_teenagers.There_are_several_reasons_for_its_popularity._First,_it_is_so_convenient_to_get_fast_food_that_it_can_save_a_lot_of_time.You_just_go
9、_into_a_fast_food_restaurant,_order_your_food,_and_your_food_is_ready_in_no_time.Secondly,_its_popularity_also_results_from_the_clean_and_comfortable_environment_of_fast_food_restaurants_and_the_excellent_service_there.However,_fast_food_is_far_from_satisfactory_in_nutrition,_especially_for_the_heal
10、th_and_growth_of_the_children_and_young_men.Therefore,_doctors_suggest_that_people,_especially_children,_should_eat_as_little_fast_food_as_possible.I_quite_agree_to_their_suggestion._In_my_opinion,_fast_food_is_the_best_choice_when_you_are_too_busy_to_spare_enough_time.And_youd_better_turn_to_it_once_in_a_while.