1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingDescriptive writing：description of a tourist attraction,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是介绍旅游景点。旅游景点介绍实质上是说明文的一种，所以它首先要具备说明文的特点，即要按照一定的结构顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)和模式(先总后分、由整体到局部、由概述到细节等)来展开描写。其次，要重点突出，详略得当。写作时不要面面俱到，应重点描写该旅游景点的特别之处，突出其特色(如其独特的自然风景、历史典故、地理风貌、风土人情、
2、传说故事、民族习俗或名胜古迹等)，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。最后，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感且产生强烈的旅游欲望。,写作指导,注意事项： 1.说明要介绍的旅游景点是什么，具有哪些重要性和突出性特点。 2.注意文章的结构：开头一般先说明景点的位置；然后介绍景点的路线和风景；最后对景点进行总结评价。 3.找准时态和人称。常用一般现在时；人称通常用第一人称和第三人称。,1.It lies/is located/situated.in(范围内)/on(有接壤或在边界上)/to(范围外). 它位于 2.The city has/covers/takes up an area of.
3、square metres. 这座城市占地平方米。 3.Surrounded by mountains on three sides，the small village faces a clear river on the east. 小村庄三面环山，东面有一条清澈的小河。 4.It is a famous street with a history of over.years. 这是一条有着超过年历史的著名街道。,常用表达,5.The places around our city are rich in natural resources. 城市周围的这些地方自然资源丰富。 6.Wherev
4、er you go，there are plenty of activities to choose from. 无论你到哪里，都有足够的活动供你选择。 7.The place is well-known/famous for its seafood and fresh fruit. 这个地方以海鲜和新鲜的水果而著名。 8.It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world. 它已经成为世界上最受欢迎的旅游景点之一。 9.The weather there is pleasant.Its neither
5、too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. 那里气候宜人，冬暖夏凉。,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,根据以下提示写一篇关于伦敦的旅游景点介绍。,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为说明文； 2.确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称； 3.确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。,审题谋篇,谋篇 本文可以分为三个部分： 第一部分，整体介绍。 第二部分，分区介绍。 第三部分，总结全文。,必备词汇 1.充满 _ 2.政治中心 _ 3.一个巨大的金融市场 _ 4.伦敦最古老的地方 _ 5.一个繁忙的购物和娱乐区 _ 6.成功举办 _,查看答案,遣词造句,be ful
6、l of,a political center,a huge financial market place,the oldest part of London,a busy shopping and entertainment district,hold sth. successfully,关键句式 1.伦敦是一座艺术气息和历史氛围浓郁的都城，一个重要的政治中心，一处巨大的金融市场。 London is a capital city full of art and history，an important political centre and a huge financial market
7、 place. 2.金融广场是伦敦最古老的地方。 The Square Mile is the oldest part of London. 3.并不是太多的人居住在那里。 There are not many people living there. 4.每天30万人在此工作。 300,000 people work there every day.,5.伦敦西区是繁忙的购物和娱乐区。 West End is the busy shopping and entertainment district. 6.伦敦东区包含伦敦港。 East End contains the Port of Lon
8、don. 7.那是移民最先到达的地方。 It is the place where many immigrants first arrived.,句式升级 1.用含有同位语的句子改写句1。 _ 2.用定语从句及with的复合结构连接句2、句3和句4。 _,查看答案,The Square Mile is the oldest part of London，where there are not many people living，with 300,000 people working there every day.,London，a capital city full of art and
9、history，is an important political centre as well as a huge financial market place.,3.用while及which引导的定语从句连接句5、句6和句7。 _,查看答案,West End is the busy shopping and entertainment district while East End contains the Port of London，which is the place where many immigrants first arrived.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上
10、联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,London，a capital city full of art and history，is an important political centre as well as a huge financial market place.,查看答案,组句成篇,参考范文,查看答案,The Square Mile is the oldest part of London，where there are not many people living，with 300,000 people working there every day.West End
11、is the busy shopping and entertainment district while East End contains the Port of London，which is the place where many immigrants first arrived. The Olympics were successfully held in 2012 in London，whose people hope that housing，education and employment for many people in this area will improve. As a city made up of a collection of villages，it is difficult to describe London in every aspect，for each of the villages has its own character and community.,