1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：letter of suggestion,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元要求写一封建议信。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题，属于应用文。建议信要给出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 建议信一般采取“三段式结构”。 首段：表明意图，陈述事由。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具
2、体建议或忠告。通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin/start with，then，later，last but not least等依次陈述建议。 结尾段：礼貌地总结或表示期盼回复。,写作指导,注意事项： 1.注意结构。通常以“三段式”结构行文。 2.客观地提出建议，针对对方的问题，给出你的观点。 3.语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。,(一)首段常用句式 1.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well. 很高兴收到
3、你的来信，询问我如何很好地欣赏艺术。 2.I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. 很遗憾你在物理学习方面有困难。 3.I have learned that you have some trouble in learning art and I would like to offer you the following tips. 我知道你在艺术学习方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。,常用表达,(二)陈述建议句式 1.If you feel that it is stopping you from d
4、oing your best then you should tell him. 如果你觉得这阻止了你做得最好，那你应该告诉他。 2.(1)It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action. (2)Only when students are not trying as hard as they can is a teacher forced to take action. 只有当学生学习不尽力的时候老师才会被迫采取措施。 3.It is hig
5、h time that we put an end to the trend. 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。,4.It is time to take the advice of eating more fruit. 该是采纳多吃水果的建议的时候了。 5.It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. 这真的是一个好主意而且每个人都希望它能成功。 (三)结尾句式 1.I do hope you will consider my tips/suggestions. 真心希望你能考虑我的建议。 2.I hope
6、you will find these tips helpful. 我希望这些建议对你来说有帮助。,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假定你是李华，你的朋友张柯发e-mail给你，就买什么样的英语词典想听听你的建议。请根据下列提示，用英语给他回一封e-mail，推荐他买电子词典。注意：词数100左右。 1.方便、快捷； 2.能储存资料； 3.发音正确、清晰。 参考词汇：电子词典electronic dictionary；内存RAM,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为建议信； 2.确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第二人称； 3.确定时态：主要使用一般将来时和一般现在时。,审题谋篇,谋篇 第一部分
7、，提出建议买电子词典。 第二部分，给出该建议的理由：方便、快捷、能储存资料、能发音。 第三部分，希望该建议被采纳。,必备词汇 1.明智的选择 _ 2.促成 _ 3.方便的 _ 4.尽可能快 _ 5.查阅(资料) _ 6.遇到 _ 7.很多 _ 8.为什么不 _,查看答案,遣词造句,a wise choice,lead to/contribute to,convenient,as soon as possible,consult/look up,meet with,a number of/a variety of,why not,关键句式 1.对你来说，买一本电子词典是一个明智的选择。 It i
8、s a wise choice for you to buy an electronic dictionary. 2.有几个因素促成了我的建议。 There are several factors which lead to my suggestion. 3.无论你到哪里去，带着电子词典都很方便，因为它比普通词典小得多。 It is convenient for you to carry the electronic dictionary wherever you go as it is much smaller than the common one. 4.在电子词典中，你会非常快地查到你想
9、要的。 You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible.,5.查阅这种词典很容易。 Consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake. 6.当遇到有用的材料时，你可以尽可能多地储存下来。 When you meet with useful material，you can store it as much as possible. 7.它能够给你生动、清晰和正确的发音，就像一位老师站在你的旁边。 It can give y
10、ou a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you. 8.这让它从众多的其他词典中脱颖而出。 This makes it outstanding from a variety of others.,句式升级 1.用现在分词短语作定语改写句2。 _ 2.用for合并句4和句5。 _,查看答案,You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind o
11、f dictionary is really a piece of cake.,There are several factors leading to my suggestion.,3.用状语从句的省略形式改写句6。 _ 4.用what引导的主语从句合并句7和句8。 _,查看答案,When meeting with useful material，you can store it as much as possible.,What makes it outstanding from a variety of others is that it can give you a vivid，cle
12、ar and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,Dear Zhang Ke， As for the problem you put forward in your last letter，I think it is a wise choice for you to buy an electronic dictionary.,查看答案,组句成篇,参考范文,There are several factors leading to
13、my suggestion.To begin with，it is convenient for you to carry the electronic dictionary wherever you go as it is much smaller than the common one.Additionally，you can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.W
14、hen meeting with useful material，you can store it as much as possible because there is much RAM in it.What makes it outstanding from a variety of others is that it can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.Since there are so many advantages，why not buy one? I do hope my suggestion will be useful to you. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,