1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingImaginative writing：life in the future,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的话题是“未来的生活”，主要涉及人类对未来生活的想象、猜测及思考等。这就要求同学们根据已有的生活经验和知识，借助想象的翅膀，超越生活，构思出从未见过的或者根本不曾出现过的生活图景。写好想象类作文，对于开阔视野，培养和提高同学们的创新思维能力大有裨益。 此类文章属于说明文或记叙文的范畴。时态以一般将来时态为主。内容可分为两类：一类是幻想未来的生活、学习和工作发生的变化，以及未来的高
2、科技产品等；另一类是为未来的学习或工作制定计划等。 这类文章大多采用三段式结构，首先可以简要、巧妙地引出文章的话题，激起读者的阅读兴趣。其次为文章主体，要按照一定顺序展开想象，说明想象的主体内容。在最后一部分中，可以再进行总结或对前景进行期待。,写作指导,1.Sometimes I dream about life in the future. 2.I imagine life in the future from time to time. 3.It is fascinating to imagine life in the future. 4.What problems people in
3、 the future will have to overcome is a mystery. 5.Whether life will continue on the earth for millions of years to come will depend on whether this problem can be solved. 6.One thousand years in the future，citizens of the earth may be able to dispose of their rubbish using an ecological system.,常用表达
4、,7.Only if we work hard will we surely realize our dreams. 8.I believe my hope will come true one day. 9.Personally，the dream will be turned into reality one day.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,某英文刊物以“畅想未来”为话题面向中学生征文，假设你是李华，请以“The House of the Future”为题目用英语写一篇100词左右的短文应征。 内容包括：设想一下1 000年以后我们居住的房子会是什么样子？从房子的
5、建筑材料、内部墙壁和设施等方面进行想象和描述。,审题 写作要求是写一篇畅想未来的文章。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文。 2.主体时态：因为是畅想未来的文章，所以应以一般将来时为主。 3.主体人称：因为是畅想未来的房子，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：应开门见山，引入话题，提出未来的房子。 第二段：从不同的方面介绍未来的房子。 第三段：总结全文，说明未来房子的好处。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.发生 _ 2.建筑材料 _ 3.保持房子凉爽 _ 4.一顿美食 _ 5.总之 _ 6.一个舒适的地方 _,遣词造句,查看答案,take place/happen/occur,
6、the building materials,keep the house cool,a delicious meal,in a word/in conclusion,a comfortable place,关键句式 1.为了根据天气调节房间里的温度，建筑材料应该被改善。 In order to adjust the temperature inside the house according to the weather，the building materials should be improved. 2.屋顶上可能有一个花园，允许人们保持房子凉爽，并种植蔬菜吃。 There might
7、 be a garden on the roof and it can allow people to keep the house cool and grow vegetables to eat. 3.例如，家庭主妇在外工作的同时可以做一顿可口的饭菜。 For example，the housewife can work outside.In the meantime，she can cook a delicious meal.,句式升级 1.请把第一句改为so that引导的目的状语从句。 _ 2.请把第二句改为which引导的定语从句。 _ 3.请用as引导的时间状语从句改写第三句。 _
8、,查看答案,The building materials should be improved so that the temperature inside the house can be adjusted according to the weather.,There might be a garden on the roof which can allow people to keep the house cool and grow vegetables to eat.,For example，the housewife can cook a delicious meal as she
9、works outside.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文 The House of the Future What will the house of the future be like？I think great changes will take place in the future houses.,查看答案,Firstly，the building materials should be improved so that the temperature inside the house can be adj
10、usted according to the weather. Secondly，there might be a garden on the roof which can allow people to keep the house cool and grow vegetables to eat.Thirdly，the color of the wall inside may change itself as the owners emotion changes.Fourthly，all the appliances in the house will be controlled by the computer.For example，the housewife can cook a delicious meal as she works outside. In a word，the house of the future should be an eco-friendly and a comfortable place to live in.,查看答案,