1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingInstructional writing：first aid instructions,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的话题是“急救”，写作要求是写一篇急救说明。写急救说明是要求我们把处理某一意外事故的急救方法介绍给读者，使读者了解这一方法具体的操作步骤。 写急救说明要做到： 1.自己所介绍的方法是正确的、科学的； 2.急救的步骤必须清楚、具体，这样才有利于具体的操作。可用一些连接词，如firstly，secondly，thirdly，then，after，finally等； 3.多
2、用祈使句或表示建议的句型，对某些做法的作用加以说明时，多用一般现在时或一般将来时； 4.语气要委婉。,写作指导,1.To save a patient from heatstroke，first of all，you should carry him to a cool place where the airway is good. 2.Dont lay the head high. 3.Heatstroke happens when a person is in a sultry place where there is a poor airway. 4.Hardly had she hea
3、rd the news that her father was hit by a car when she began to cry.,常用表达,5.Faced with the earthquakes，we must keep calm and take some necessary measures. 6.We cant stress the importance of some common senses about first aid too much.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你叫李华，你有一个澳大利亚的同学John，他曾在中国学习过半年，现已回国。最近他听
4、说你校开设了急救课，他来信想询问一些情况，并向你请教关于一级烧伤的急救知识。请根据以下要点给他写一封100词左右的回信： 1.开设急救课的原因； 2.一级烧伤急救知识； 3.邀请John再次到中国学习。,审题 写作要求是向同学介绍开设急救课的原因和一些急救知识。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文，写作中应注意把事情介绍清楚。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍急救方面的情况，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,审题谋篇,谋篇 第一段：开门见山，提出写信的目的。 第二段：开设急救课的意义。 第三段：关于一级烧伤的急救知识。 第四段：归纳总结急救课非常实用
5、。,必备词汇 1.急救 _ 2.出事故 _ 3.救某人的命 _ 4.如下 _ 5.被感染区域 _ 6.做某事的机会 _,遣词造句,查看答案,first aid,have an accident,save someones life,as follows,the affected area,a chance to do sth. /a chance of doing sth.,关键句式 1.我们学习急救知识。 We learn about first aid. 2.我们就能够帮助出事故的人。 We can help someone who has had an accident. 3.你应该把被
6、感染的地方放在流动的冷水下，但是每次不要太长时间。 You should place the affected area under cold running water，but dont apply cold water for too long a time. 4.急救课非常有趣和有用，给我们提供了关于很多情况的信息。 The first aid course is very interesting and useful.It gives us information about many situations.,句式升级 1.用so that.和if条件句把第一句和第二句合并成一句话。
7、(1)We learn about first aid who has had anaccident. (2) ，we can help someone who has had an accident.,查看答案,so that we can help someone,If we learn about first aid,2.用定语从句改写第三句。 Place the area under cold running water，but dont apply cold water for too long a time. 3.用非限制性定语从句改写第四句。 The first aid cour
8、se is very interesting and useful，_.,查看答案,which is affected,which gives us,information about many situations,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文 Dear John， I am glad to receive your letter，and now Ill tell you something about the first aid course in our school and some suggestions a
9、bout first degree burns. If we learn about first aid，we can help someone who has had an accident，and can even save someones life one day.,查看答案,The suggestions about first degree burns are as follows.Cool the burned area at once.Place the affected area under cold running water，but dont apply cold wat
10、er for too long a time.Youd better go to hospital if the affected area is still painful. The first aid course is very interesting and useful，which gives us information about many situations，and also gives us a chance to practise first aid treatment. Would you like to come here to study again? We are all looking forward to it. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,