1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Seven WritingEvents in my life,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。此类记叙文以叙述一件事为主，说明事情发生的时间、地点、前因后果及人物。着重说明事情的起因、经过和结果。 注意事项： 1.基本结构：通常由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成。 2.时态：通常用一般过去时。 3.人称：一般用第一人称或者第三人称来叙述事件。,1.It is such an interesting experience that I will not forget it forever
2、. 2.All of us have learned a lot from this activity. 3.It was a beautiful day and the sun was shining. 4.I felt happy to have spent such a nice day with them. 5.On the way to school，I met a stranger. 6.The children were so happy that they all jumped with joy. 7.In my opinion，its such a meaningful da
3、y that we should remember it. 8.The students all benefited a lot from this long journey.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 来信询问你“五一”假期是怎样度过的。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你 “五一”假期中的活动。 写作要点： 1.休息(由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息)； 2.看望农村的祖父母(帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们讲述发生在自己身边的新鲜事)； 3.和朋友进行了短途旅游(欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气)。 注意： 1.词数100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以
4、使行文连贯。 参考词汇：五一假期May Day holiday,审题 写作要求是介绍五一假期里所做的事情。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇叙事类记叙文，写作中应注意叙事类记叙文的常规格式。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍自己经历的事情，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。,谋篇 第一段：问候和交代写信目的。 第二段：叙述五一假期的活动。 第三段：询问对方的假期活动。,必备词汇 1.好好休息 _ 2.因为，由于 _ 3.缺少睡眠 _ 4.做家务 _ 5.而且 _ 6.欣赏的美 _,查看答案,have a good rest,as a result of,l
5、ack of sleep,do some housework,whats more,appreciate the beauty of.,关键句式 1.我因为近期学业负担太重、缺少睡眠和体育锻炼而经常感到疲惫。 I feel tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. 2.我好好休息了一下。 I had a good rest. 3.我的爷爷奶奶生活在农村。 My grandparents are living in the countryside. 4.我和
6、爷爷奶奶一起住了两天。 I stayed with my grandparents for two days.,5.我和朋友去旅行了。 I had a trip with my friends. 6.我们去那里是为了欣赏大自然之美和呼吸新鲜空气。 We went there to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air.,句式升级 1.请把句1和句2按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)I had a good rest as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack
7、of sleep and physical exercise.(because) (2) as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise，I had a good rest.(现在分词短语作状语),查看答案,because I often felt tired,Feeling tired,2.请把句3和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)It took me two days to stay with my grandparents _ _.(who引导定语从句) (2
8、)It took me two days to stay with my grandparents _. (现在分词短语作定语),查看答案,who are living in the,countryside,living in the countryside,3.请把句5和句6按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)Whats more，I had a trip with my friends _ _.(so that) (2)Whats more，I had a trip with my friends _ _.(动词不定式短语作目的状语),查看答案,so that we could appr
9、eciate,the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air,to appreciate the beauty of,nature and breathe fresh air,用适当的过渡词语连接以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,查看答案,参考范文 Dear Tom， Im very glad to receive your letter.And its a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the May Day holiday. First，feeling
10、tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise，I had a good rest.Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them,do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends.Whats more，I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air.It is such an interesting experience that I will not forget it forever. What did you do in your holidays？Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,