1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingDescriptive writing：favourite sport,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作话题是“描写最喜欢的运动”，在体裁上属于说明文。描写自己或他人最喜欢的一项运动时，应主要使用说明的方法，也可以穿插一些记叙和议论。写这类作文，要注意说明的语言和顺序。 一、注意事项 1.结构：在结构上，宜采用三段式，即总分总的结构。先说明自己最喜欢的运动，然后说明最喜欢的理由，即该项运动带来的好处，最后做一个简单的总结。 2.时态：通常用一般现在时，具体情况具体分析，采用恰当的时
2、态。 3.语言：运用生动形象、简洁明了的语言。,写作指导,二、主体框架 1.开头对某项运动的总体认识。 2.主体描述该项运动的运动规则，中间可适当加些议论。 3.结尾该项运动的好处。 三、常用句式 (一)开头部分 1.Of all the sports，I like basketball best. 2.Volleyball is my favorite sport. 3.If you ask me which sport I like best，I have to say the swimming. 4.The first time I saw ping-pong，I fell in lov
3、e with it.,(二)主体部分 1.I like playing basketball because it is like our lives full of competition. 2.At the age of 10，I showed great interest in basketball. 3.Whenever I have time，I will go to the playground to practice running. 4.Im planning to take part in a ping-pong club，where I can learn a lot fr
4、om others. (三)结尾部分 1.I hope in the future I can compete in the Olympic Games as a swimmer. 2.I really want to be a basketball player in the national basketball team when I grow up. 3.I became stronger and healthier by playing football.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,请你根据以下提示以“The Sport I Like Best”为题用英语写一篇8
5、0词左右的短文。 1.我认为打乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一门艺术，因为它是需要力气和技巧的。 2.打乒乓球时，我们需要判断球的方向，并用力把它打回去。 3.一场比赛过后，如果你尽力的话你会感到很累。 4.打乒乓球时，你会发现球快速运动，运动员的动作也很美。 5.我打乒乓球打得不是很好，但是我仍然对这项运动很感兴趣。 注意：可适当发挥，以使短文连贯、通顺；短文的标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数。,审题 1.确定体裁：本文为说明文； 2.确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称； 3.确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。 谋篇 本文可以分为三部分： 第一部分：对乒乓球的总体认识； 第二部分：乒乓球
6、的运动规则； 第三部分：自己对乒乓球的兴趣。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.不但而且 _ 2.力气；力量 _ 3.判断 _ 4.方向 _ 5.把它打回去 _,遣词造句,查看答案,not only.but also.,strength,judge,direction,hit it back,关键句式 1.我认为打乒乓球不仅是一种运动而且还是一门艺术，因为它是需要力气和技巧的。 I think playing table tennis is a sport and an art，because it requires strength and skill. 2.打乒乓球时，我们需要判断球的方向，并用力把
7、它打回去。 When we play table tennis，we should judge the direction of the ball，and hit it back with great strength. 3.我打乒乓球打得不是很好，但是我仍然对这项运动很感兴趣。 I cant play table tennis very well，but I still show great interest in it.,句式升级 1.用not only.but also改写句1，同时要包含一个定语从句。 _ 2.把句2中的状语从句改写成省略句式。 _ 3.把句3改为让步状语从句。 _,I
8、 think playing table tennis is not only a sport but also an art，because it is a game that requires strength and skill.,查看答案,When playing table tennis，we should judge the direction of the ball，and hit it back with great strength.,Though I cant play table tennis very well，I still show great interest i
9、n it.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,The Sport I Like Best Of all the sports，I like table tennis best.,参考范文,查看答案,I think it is not only a sport but also an art，because it is a game that requires strength and skill. When playing table tennis，we should judge the direction of the ball，a
10、nd hit it back with great strength.,And after one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best.However，as a sport，I think it is more like an art.In the game，you can find the ball moving quickly，and the players movements are very beautiful. Though I cant play table tennis very well，I still show great interest in it.,查看答案,