1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Six WritingWriting an e-mail,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,电子邮件也属于书信体裁，与一般书信不同的是，一般的书信有信封，电子邮件没有信封，但是它有与信封类似的标题栏。电子邮件由下面几部分组成： 1.信头 信头包括收件人的电子邮件地址、发件人的电子邮件地址、发信时间和主题。 以下是需要填写的内容： (1)在“收件人(To：)”框中输入收件人的电子邮件地址。 (2)“主题(Subject：)”框的内容应简明地概括信的内容，短的可以是一个单词，如thanks，congratulations
2、，greetings等；长的可以是一个名词性短语，也可以是一个完整的句子，但一般不超过35个词。“主题”框的内容切忌含糊不清，要用关键词体现信的主要内容。,写作指导,2.称呼语 首行顶格写。通常用Dear.，其后一般用逗号。 3.正文 这是邮件的主要部分，在称呼语的下一行。这部分的写作要求内容清晰、有条理、语言简洁。根据来信写回信时，要求仔细阅读来信内容，如实回答来信中所提的问题及相关信息，绝不可答非所问。 4.结束语 常写发件人对收件人的祝愿等。 5.署名 在结束语的下一行。,1.常用开头语 Im glad to hear from you. How nice it was to recei
3、ve your e-mail! It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of.(日期) Many thanks for your last e-mail.,常用表达,2.常用结束语 Best wishes/regards to you. Waiting for your good news. Looking forward to your early reply. Hoping to hear from you soon. With best wishes to you.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你
4、是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封100词左右的电子邮件。 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙。,1.时态：本文应以一般现在时为主。 2.人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主。 3.目的：谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.进展 _ 2.不同于 _ 3.参加 _ 4.不但而且 _ 5.做某事有困难 _ 6.帮某人的忙 _,遣词造句,查看答案,get along,differ from/be diff
5、erent from,take part in,not only.but also.,have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth.,give sb. a hand,句式升级 1.你在北京学习接近一个月了，在此期间你一定取得了很多成绩。You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month and _.(and连接简单句)You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month _.(“介词which”引导定语从句),查看答案,during that time,yo
6、u must have achieved a lot,during which you,must have achieved a lot,2.据报道这些天天气炎热而干燥，与你的国家很不相同。It is reported that it is very hot and dry these days and _.(and连接简单句)It is reported that it is very hot and dry these days，_.(非限制性定语从句),查看答案,it is very different,from/it differs a lot from that of your co
7、untry,which is very different,from/which differs a lot from that of your country,3.我很高兴地告诉你，七月我要去北京参加英语演讲比赛，这不仅是荣誉，而且也是练习口语的好机会。I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is a great opportunity for me to practice my spoken English .(as wel
8、l as)I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is _for me to practice my spoken English.(not only.but also.),查看答案,as well as an honor,not only an honor，but also a great opportunity,查看答案,组句成篇,Dear Tom， How time flies！You have been studying
9、 in Beijing for nearly a month during which you must have achieved a lot.Well，how is everything getting along？It is reported that it is very hot and dry these days，which is very different from that of your country.,I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July，which is not only an honor，but also a great opportunity for me to practice my spoken English.I have some trouble in collecting the materials and using the language.I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand to solve these problems. Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,