1、Unit 3 Under the sea,技法点拨,内容索引,典题示例,WritingPractical writing：making complaints,技法点拨,写作指导,本单元的写作任务是写一封投诉信。投诉信属于书信的一种，一般包括三部分： 1.自我介绍并表明要投诉的问题，要做到客观、礼貌、实事求是； 2.写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果； 3.提出解决方案，表达自己的诉求或愿望。,常用句式,1.Its a great pity that we found there is something wrong with. 2.I hope that my problem will g
2、et your kind consideration. 3.I am sure there are technical or man-made errors involved. 4.I hope you can make an investigation into this matter as soon as possible.,5.I am writing to make a complaint on. 6.If it is not properly settled，I would ask you to give my money back，or I would complain to th
3、e concerned authorities. 7.One annoying aspect of your service is. 8.I have been pleased with your services for years，but now I feel very disappointed. 9.I wish to express my dissatisfaction about. 10.It would be highly appreciated if you could.,典题示例,假设你是李华，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现了一些问题。请根据下列提示，用英语给图书馆馆长写一封1
4、00词左右的信，反映以下情况： 1.新书太少； 2.书架上的书比较混乱； 3.管理员工作时彼此闲聊，读者无法安心看书； 4.阅览室的一盏灯坏了，桌椅有些也被损坏。 注意： 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。,审题谋篇,写作要求是写一封投诉信，写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一封投诉信。写作时注意书信的写作特点； 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主； 3.主体人称：由于是向市图书馆指出存在的问题，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,manage the library in proper order offer good service co
5、ncentrate on benefit more people,_ _ _ _ _,要点词句,联想词汇 1.管理图书馆 2.按正确顺序 3.提供良好的服务 4.集中注意力于 5.让更多的人受益,句式升级 1.首先，架子上的新书不多，其中大多数现在都不流行了。First，there are not enough new books on the shelves and _.(and并列句)First，there are not enough new books on the shelves，_.(定语从句),most of them are not popular today,most of
6、which are not popular today,2.其次，一些书没有按正确顺序分类，使得我们读者很难快速找到想要的书。Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，which makes it difficult for us readers to find quickly.(定语从句)Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，which makes it difficult for us readers to find quickly.(宾语从句),the books that
7、/which we want,what we want,连句成篇,Therefore，Id like to voice my opinions，hoping it will be of help to you to manage the library. First，there are not enough new books on the shelves，most of which are not popular today.Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，which makes it difficult for us rea
8、ders to find what we want quickly.,Dear Sir/Madam，Last Sunday，I went to do some reading in the library.I found something unpleasant.,Third，the assistants dont offer good service.They are chatting while we are reading quietly，which makes it difficult for us to concentrate on books.Moreover，there is something wrong with one of the lights as well as some desks and chairs. So，I suggest that you make some necessary changes as soon as possible so that the library can benefit more people.,Yours， Li Hua,