1、Unit 3 The Million Pound Bank Note,技法点拨,内容索引,典例展示,写作训练,Period Five WritingCreative writing：a scene for a play,技法点拨,本单元的写作任务是写戏剧。戏剧是文学体裁的一种，其基本要素包括戏剧冲突和戏剧语言。戏剧离不开冲突；戏剧语言包括人物语言和舞台说明。写好英语戏剧，应该注意以下几点： 1.确定剧情、故事梗概及主题。 2.确定剧中人物及其形象和性格特征(喜、怒、哀、乐、害羞、友好、慷慨、吝啬、恐惧以及勇敢等)。 3.确定故事发生的时间、地点及场景。 4.构思戏剧的矛盾冲突，事件的起因、发展
2、、高潮和结局等。,1.It/The story happened in/at.(地名) on/in.(日期) 2(人名) is very kind/cruel/rich/generous/mean，but. 3.One fine day in spring. 4(人名) is on the way to. 5.After several days. 6.The play is adapted from.,典例展示,根据下面的提示，编写一幕100词左右的英文戏剧。 简头痛并且咳嗽，身体感到时冷时热，因此她去看医生，医生给她量体温后告诉她她在发高烧，医生还听了她的心脏，要她深呼吸，接着检查了她的喉
3、咙，最后医生建议她住院观察。,范文赏读 (Jane has a headache and is going to see a doctor.She is walking into the clinic.) Doctor：(Looking at the medical record.)So you are Jane. Jane：Yes，doctor. Doctor：How are you feeling today? Jane：Not very well.I have a headache and a cough.Sometimes I feel cold and sometimes hot.,
4、Doctor：Let me take your temperature.(Three minutes later.)Ah，you have a fever.Now let me listen to your heart.Please take a deep breath.Now open your mouth and say “Ah”.You have got a sore throat. Jane：Anything serious? Doctor：Nothing very serious.In order to be sure，I suggest that you enter the hos
5、pital for further medical exams. Jane：That sounds good.Ill take your advice.,写作训练,根据下面的提示，编写一幕100词左右的英文戏剧，介绍亨利带着一张百万英镑的钞票去理发的过程： 亨利正走在大街上，看见了一家理发店，于是决定去理他的长头发。理发匠用粗鲁的态度接待了他，亨利坐在椅子上等待，理发匠问他是否付得起理发的费用。理发结束后，亨利出示了一张百万英镑的钞票，理发匠十分吃惊，并告诉他欢迎随时光临。,一、审题 写作要求是根据提示写一幕戏剧。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一幕戏剧。写作时注意戏剧的写作特点。
6、2.主体时态：戏剧应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是写一幕关于亨利和理发店老板的戏剧，所以人称应该以第一人称和第二人称为主。,二、谋篇 第一部分：开头介绍主要出场人物。 第二部分：写明人物的主要对话。 第三部分：介绍冲突的解决。,一、必备词汇 1.沿着街道走 _ 2.理发 _ 3.用粗鲁的方式 _ 4.为付账 _ 5.带着灿烂的笑容 _ 6.送某人出门 _,walk along/down the street,have ones hair cut,in a rude manner,pay for.,wear a big smile,show sb. out,二、关键句式 1.亨利正沿着
7、大街行走。 Henry is walking down the street. 2.他看到了理发店的招牌。 He sees a sign for a barbers shop. 3.理发师看着亨利的头发。 The barber looks at Henrys hair.,4.他继续剪着另一个人的头发。 He continues cutting another mans hair. 5.在给他理完发之后，理发师告诉亨利应当付多少钱。(用时间状语从句) After Henrys hair is cut，the barber tells him how much he must pay.,三、句式升
8、级 1.用be doing.when.结构把第1句和第2句合成一句话。 _ 2.用现在分词短语作状语把第3句和第4句合成一句话。 _ 3.用现在分词短语作状语改写第5句话。 _,Having cut Henrys hair，the barber tells him how much he must pay.,Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a barbers shop.,The barber looks at Henrys hair，continuing cutting another mans hair.,用适
9、当的过渡词语把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语戏剧。,参考范文 (Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a barbers shop.He decides to have his hair cut.) (HHenry BBarber) H：Good afternoon.Id like to have my hair cut，if I may.(The barber looks at Henrys hair，continuing cutting another mans hair.)Er，Id
10、really like a haircut.As you can see，its much too long. B：(in a rude manner)Yes，I can see that.Indeed，I can.,H：Fine，well，Ill have a seat then. (He sits in one of the chairs.The barber turns to look at Henry.) B：Its quite expensive here，you know！Are you sure you can pay for it? H：Yes，I think so. (Hav
11、ing cut Henrys hair，the barber tells him how much he must pay.Henry shows the barber the million pound bank note.),B：Why.？Mr.(looks shocked) H：Adams.Henry Adams.Im sorry.I dont have any change. B：Oh，no，no.Please dont worry！(wearing a big smile) Nothing to worry about！Nothing at all！Please come back whenever you like.It will be my honour to serve you！(showing Henry out with a bow),