1、Unit 2 Healthy eating,技法点拨,内容索引,典例展示,写作训练,Period Five WritingPersuasive writing：an advertisement,技法点拨,本单元的写作任务是写一则广告。广告是应用文的一种，是为了某一特定的需要，通过一定形式向公众传递信息的手段。广告语的最大特点是具有鼓动性和吸引力。人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。 广告的结构：标题、正文和落款。标题通常醒目，引起公众的兴趣；正文要简洁明了；落款表明广告的主题人的联系方式。,1lies in/stands. 2many trees/green hills around.
2、3is close to/near. 4provide best service for. 5serve you 24 hours a day. 6wanted.,7for rent. 8are clean and bright. 9.Welcome to. 10.For further/more information，please call/telephone.to contact.,典例展示,假如你是王先生，要开一家叫作“蓝天饭店”的饭馆。请根据下面的提示来介绍你的饭馆。 1.饭馆位于湖边，景色宜人； 2.饭馆里提供多种食物，这些食物色香味俱佳，并且营养均衡、价格合理； 3.饭馆里的服务
3、人员态度友好，待客热情； 4.欢迎您的光临，包您满意。,注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.标题已给出，不计入总词数。,范文赏读 Blue Sky Restaurant Would you like to eat delicious food as well as enjoy the beautiful scenery？Now come to Blue Sky Restaurant，please.The restaurant lies near a lake.There are many kinds of food served in the restaura
4、nt，all of which are very delicious.At the same time，all the foods look nice and smell good.You can enjoy a balanced diet.Whats more，the prices of them are very reasonable.The owner as well as the waiters is very friendly and kind，and they will make you feel at home.Im sure that youll be pleased with
5、 the restaurant.Why not have a try? Mr Wang,写作训练,假设你叫李华，现在为新开业的宏昌餐馆写一则100词左右的广告。包括以下内容： 1.宏昌餐馆提供均衡饮食，利于减肥瘦身； 2.提供既有能量又有纤维的饭菜； 3.有快餐和特殊的蔬菜菜肴； 4.有各式各样的中国传统面食； 5.在这里就餐是一种乐趣，中午宾客盈门，气氛活跃； 6.保证最好的服务； 7.餐厅设在湖边，风景优美； 8.欢迎光顾； 9.电话：533599。,一、审题 写作要求是为一个饭馆写一则广告。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：广告属于应用文写作。写作时注意广告的写作特点。 2.主体时态
6、：文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3.主体人称：广告面向顾客进行宣传，应该以第一、二人称为主。,二、谋篇 首先，打出广告语，引出要做广告的饭店。 其次，介绍这家饭店。 最后，欢迎到饭店来品尝。,一、必备词汇 1.变苗条 _ 2.均衡的饮食 _ 3.多种多样的 _ 4.充满了 _,become slim,a balanced diet,a variety of/varieties of,be filled with/be full of,二、关键句式 1.想变苗条吗？那么来宏昌饭店吧。 Do you want to become slim？Then you can come to Hong
7、chang Restaurant. 2.宏昌饭店是均衡饮食之家。 Hongchang Restaurant is the home of balanced foods. 3.它提供很多美味健康的食物。 It offers many delicious and healthy foods.,4.我们饭店提供给你均衡饮食。 Our restaurant provides you with a balanced diet. 5.这样的饮食充满能量和纤维。 It is full of enough energy as well as fibre.,三、句式升级 1.把第1句改为含有条件状语从句的复合句
8、。2.把第2句和第3句合并成含有定语从句的句子。,If you want to become slim，you can come to Hongchang Restaurant.,Hongchang Restaurant is the home of balanced foods，which offers many delicious and healthy foods.,3.把第4句和第5句合并成含有形容词作定语的句子。,Our restaurant provides you with a balanced diet full of enough energy as well as fibr
9、e.,用适当的过渡词语把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,参考范文 Once Tasted，Never Forgotten Do you want to become slim？Then you can come to Hongchang Restaurant. Hongchang Restaurant is the home of balanced foods，which offers many delicious and healthy foods. Our restaurant provides you with a balanced diet full
10、of enough energy as well as fibre.,Provide fast food and special dishes from vegetables. Offer a great variety of Chinese traditional wheaten foods with super flavor. It is fun to eat here.At lunchtime its filled with customers.You will enjoy the exciting atmosphere. Youll enjoy the best service. Our restaurant lies by the lakeside with great views. Why not pay us a visit? You are welcome! Telephone number：533599,