1、专题 17读后续写之情感情绪细节刻画常考题型题型考查年份关联知识点读后续写2021年1月浙江卷万圣节南瓜趣事2017年6月浙江卷讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事2020年7月全国新高考卷Mrs.Meredith和她的三个孩子帮助贫困家庭的Bernard赚钱的故事方法点拨一、直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy, delighted, pleased, joyful, enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised, shocked, amazed, astonished)等形容词或介词短语(to ones s
2、urprise, in relief, in panic)等描述人物的情绪。二、利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感例如：Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard. (小说麦琪的礼物中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。)三、利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：With no pat
3、h to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. (动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望) To her surprise, (利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊) she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. (寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落) She suddenly realiz
4、ed that she was lost.四、利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节例如：“Absolutely!” replied John, excitement shinning in his eyes. (利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动)约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently. (so.that倒装句型)熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。You can not imagine how frightened
5、we were at the approach of the polar bear. (how引导的宾语从句，介词短语)你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。【策略微练】. 按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子1. 简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。_, Jane sat against a tree, _. (形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2. “如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“_,” she thought to herself _. (虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构)3. 她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。_4. 她
6、精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。_ (so.that状语从句，一连串的动作)5. 简醒来时天已经亮了。_6. 尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。_, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (让步状语从句)_, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (状语从句的省略句)7. 随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。_, she walked toward the water. (非谓语动词作状语)8. 突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。_ (非谓语动词作宾补). 将以上
7、补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡_【答案】. 1. Scared and helpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. (形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语)2. “Had I not quarreled with Tom, I wouldnt have been trapped here,” she thought to herself with regretful tears clouding her eyes. (虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构)3. She struggled to her feet to
8、 search for the lake.4. She became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a big rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. (so.that状语从句，一连串的动作)5. It was daybreak when Jane woke up.6. Although she was depressed, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. (让步状语从句)Although depressed, she decided to contin
9、ue forcing her way ahead. (状语从句的省略句)7. Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. (非谓语动词作状语)8. Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her. (非谓语动词作宾补). Scared and helpless, Jane sat against a tree, resting her aching feet. “Had I not quarreled with To
10、m, I wouldnt have been trapped here,” she thought to herself with regretful tears clouding her eyes. She struggled to her feet to search for the lake. However, she became so exhausted that she climbed up onto a big rock, lay down and fell fast asleep. It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Although depre
11、ssed, she decided to continue forcing her way ahead. Following the sound of the stream, she walked toward the water. Suddenly she noticed a familiar figure at a distance coming towards her.【典例示例】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Sam Watts was a 37yearold fisherman living and working
12、in Canada. One day, Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5 pm the next day. Joining Sam would be his crewman, 24yearold Tom Buck.Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming, there was little that would keep him from going. As he sailed through the
13、 waves some 120 kilometers from land, Sam let out his threekilometerlong fishing line. The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore. That changed around 1 am. Waves rocked the small boat, which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. “Get us out of her
14、e!” Tom screamed to Sam. “Lets go back!”With the winds and waves kicking up, the boat began to fill with water. Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together, but the high waves filled the boat with water, forcing Sam to make a hard decision. He cut the line, losing thousands of dollars wor
15、th of equipment and fish in the sea. He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away. Sam then called his boss, William Fox, to report his position.With dawn coming, Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon. He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly th
16、e motor stopped. “I couldnt believe it,” Sam said. “We were 24 kilometers off the coast, and the motor died.” High waves raised and dropped the boat, sending the men crashing into the sides. “William, William!”Sam yelled into the radio. “If youre coming to get me, come now!”“Were coming!” William sh
17、outed back.Paragraph 1Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea._Paragraph 2The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance._【写作分析】文章主旨：原文叙述Sam Watts和船员Tom Buck去海上捕鱼时，突遇风暴，在危险之际Sam Watts做出了艰难的抉择：割断鱼线，损失了价值数千万美元的设备和
18、鱼。虽然和老板报告了自己的位置，然而Sam Watts和Tom Buck船上的发动机熄火。续写部分应叙述他们被救出的过程。续写第一段：根据首句关键信息“the radio died”和“driving the men farther out to sea”可知该段应叙述Sam和Tom在发动机熄火和无线电死机的情况下，被困海上面临死亡。此时应用心理活动描写，描写他们的恐惧以及Sam后悔的心情，后悔自己不顾风暴的警告固执地出海的决定。续写第二段：根据首句关键信息“a fishing boat”结合原文中提到到海上寻找他们的William可知，该段应叙述他们最终获救。该段的叙述可利用动作描写显示他们
19、见到来营救他们的船只时高兴的心情。【答案】Paragraph 1Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. Fear seized Tom and he was trembling, for the water had not only wet his clothes but also ruined his hope of surviving. Sam murmured, “I was warned that
20、 a storm was coming. Had it not been for my stubbornness, we would not have lost our equipment and had to face such a terrible situation.” His voice gradually disappeared as waves rocked the boat, making terrifying sounds. After what seemed to be a century, a great darkness fell. Exhausted, they fel
21、l asleep.Paragraph 2The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. He excitedly woke Tom up. Tom rubbed his eyes and stared. Once he caught sight of the boat, he was also lit up. The chance of surviving made them regain strength and they began to shout loudly. The boat saw them and th
22、ey went aboard. On the boat they met William and other crew members. Although they had lost thousands of dollars, they came to understand the value of hope.2021年1月浙江卷Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my
23、three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, J
24、ason, was the winner. Unfortunately, we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle th
25、e matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Fina
26、lly I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “Im going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I
27、bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head a
28、round trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I cant get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it fe
29、lt much longer._Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween._【答案】It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. I still remembered how I got rescued. After a short while, I started to feel exceedingly painful on my nose which just prevented the entry of the pumpkin. Upon seeing
30、 what had happened, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, mom laid down her phone and approached towards me in a flash. “Dont use up all your oxygen!” she cried, pushing my head farther into the pumpkin so that she could reach in and undo my rubber band. Only when mom spared enough space for me did I m
31、anage to get out of it successfully, though my chin and nose were full of pain. “I made it!” I let out a cry of relief. My 14-year-old brother, Jason, standing in front of me, it was only then that I realized hed been filming the whole time.The video was posted the Monday before Halloween. Surprisin
32、gly, it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. At the very beginning, hardly could I contain my embarrassment when I was recognized as the one in the video. However, with time trickling by, my life was back on track. A family tradition as pumpkin carving at Ha
33、lloween was, the following year was a more sedate affair. Whenever I thought about the day on which I got my head stuck in a pumpkin, I couldnt help but laugh out loud. I would say I learned my lesson look before you leap!试题汇编2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷6阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Last
34、year at Christmas time, my wife, three children and I were on our way from Paris to Nice. Somehow everything went wrong. Our hotels were “tourist traps” and our rented car broke down. On Christmas Eve, when we checked into a dirty hotel in Nice, there was no Christmas spirit in our hearts.It was rai
35、ning and cold when we went out to eat. We found a small restaurant poorly decorated for the holiday. Only five tables in the restaurant were taken. There were two German couples, two French families, and an American sailor, by himself. They were eating in stony silence except the sailor. He was writ
36、ing a letter, and a half-smile lighted his face. In the corner a piano player was listlessly (无精打采地) playing Christmas music.All of us were interrupted by an old French flower woman through the front door. She had a worn overcoat and her old shoes were wet. Carrying her basket of flowers, she went f
37、rom one table to another. No one bought any. Exhausted and frustrated, she sat down at a table.The sailor finished his meal and got up to leave. Putting on his coat, he walked over to the flower womans table.“Merry Christmas,” he said, smiling and picking out a handful of flowers. “How much are they
38、?” “Two francs, sir.”The sailor put a twenty franc note in the womans hand.“I dont have change, sir,” she said. “Ill get some from the waiter.”“No, maam,” said the sailor, leaning over and kissing the ancient cheek. “This is my Christmas present for you.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好
39、。Paragraph 1Then the sailor headed for our table with the flowers in his hand._Paragraph 2The piano player came alive and pleasant music filled the whole room._山东省济宁市高考一模阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with “my brother” Henry. He was
40、just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.“Kirstie, come here,” my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake. “Henrys book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there?” She glared at me, s
41、omething she never did before Henry came to our home. I didnt wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached. Henry was stealing my mothers love. He was ruining my life.Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot (绳结) as usual. Wh