1、专题 18读后续写之外貌性格环境描写常考题型题型考查年份考查话题读后续写2018年6月浙江卷父亲带儿子去“西部荒野”，体验农场生活2020年7月浙江卷人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事2017年11月浙江卷叙述和母亲的一次度假经历方法点拨第一部分 外貌性格描写一、外貌性格描写的3个原则进行外貌描写时，可写对一个人的总体印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特点进行描述。如攻略3例题原文中第一段对妈妈性格的描写，采用了loving, sweet, absentminded和forgetful等形容词，使一个可爱又健忘的妈妈的形象跃然纸上。可以具体描述人物的五官、着装，甚至可以配上动作描述。在描写人
2、物片段时，可写你对人物印象最深的一两点，再加上一两句人物评价。二、外貌与性格描写的高分素材（一）外貌描写(1)她圆圆的脸上有一双蓝色的眼睛，还有两个可爱的酒窝。On her round face are a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples. (倒装句型)She is a girl with a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples on her round face. (with引导的介宾结构作后置定语，补充说明人物信息)(2)李老师三十多岁，身材适中，常梳着马尾辫。Miss Li is in her thirtie
3、s with a medium build and has her hair in a ponytail. (由and连接的并列句；with短语用作状语，表示伴随状态)Miss Li is a mediumsized woman in her thirties who often wears/ties her hair in a ponytail. (定语从句补充介绍人物特征)Miss Li, in her thirties, is of medium size, and often has her hair tied in a ponytail. (“be ofadj.n.”结构表示人或物具
4、有某种特征。常用的名词有：size, height, weight, build, age, shape等)（二）性格描写Such is Ms. Han, an easygoing, kind and warmhearted woman.韩老师是一个随和善良又热心肠的女人。Though he comes from a poor family, he is a person of great determination and courage.他虽出身贫寒，但拥有坚强的意志和勇气。第二部分 环境描写一、环境描写的4个原则选择与主题和情节设置一致的环境要素，以营造故事发生的特定环境。细致深入。所选
5、的景物一定要运用所学的词汇和句法进行细致深入的描写。添加附加信息，如天气变化和周边的景物等，如昏暗的路灯、摇曳的树影等。环境细节描写一定要与动作和心理活动等相结合，才能更好地完成续写任务。例如：攻略3第一段续写中可适当描写一下在帐篷中过夜时周围的环境，突出作者内心的祥和、快乐。二、环境描写的高分素材It was beginning to snow, and snowflakes were blinding my eyes.天开始下雪了，雪花让我看不清了。The sun was breaking through the blanket of mist.太阳穿过薄雾。Summer sees the
6、 mountains turn bright green with growing rice. During autumn, these same mountains are flash gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost.夏天，水稻生长群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银装素裹。A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.不远处有一条小溪，在绿色的两岸之间奔流不息，波光粼粼。【典例示
7、例】(2017浙江高考11月卷改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother, , and yet and . One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of gr
8、andparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eightyearold brother, and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see the
9、m again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were
10、always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept. “You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh . I t
11、hought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a ho
12、use with a likelylooking backyard and ask if we could set up the tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone
13、in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.Paragraph 1The next day we remembered the brandnew tent we had brought with us._Paragraph 2We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._【描写刻画】1. 细读原文，明确叙述意图原文基调轻松、温暖。通过介绍一次出游经历，描述妈妈健忘、心不在焉、善良、爱
14、孩子的性格特征。第一段概括妈妈的性格特征；第二段以妈妈遗落钱包的事情来说明妈妈健忘；由第三段担心妈妈遗忘孩子的事，说明妈妈心不在焉，同时侧面反映孩子的靠谱、沉稳；由最后一段倒数第二和第三句可看出妈妈很善良。根据人物性格特征，结合续写第二段首句可推测，续写时应设计一件有趣的事来体现“快乐、母爱、温情、亲情”。2根据段落开头语，确定续写方向根据续写第一段首句中的关键词“we remembered the brandnew tent”可知，该段应着重描写围绕帐篷发生的有趣的。根据续写第二段首句中的关键词“along the way”可推断第二段可描述一路上妈妈对孩子的关爱。结合首句中关键词“grea
15、t sights”，可简单进行环境描写与原文呼应。3围绕原文主旨，进行人物性格和环境描写在描写母亲时，以原文对母亲性格的描写为依据，描述一件小事突出母亲的健忘和心不在焉；也利用一些描述性的词语，如read、sing、warmth、comfortable、safe、laughter等描写旅途中母亲所表现出的母爱。这些描写能使母亲的形象更加丰满、高大，“母爱”溢于言表。根据原文标题中的关键词vacation，和原文第二段中的“all her sights along the way”，可推断出续写部分可适当进行环境描写，体现和母亲共度假期的快乐，一家人的亲情。【参考范文】Paragraph 1Th
16、e next day we remembered the brandnew tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could refuse her crazy idea again, but to our great disappointment, he agreed with Moms idea. So we set up the tent at the
17、foot of the mountain by a river. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” Mom screamed out before we slept. Finally, we had to collect some grass as our pillows. Despite the ache of my neck, I enjoyed the nice night with fresh air and millions of stars.Paragraph 2We drove through several states and saw lots of g
18、reat sights along the way. The tent became a close friend then. Every time we camped, Mom read a book or sang a soft song. The warmth of her arms let us feel comfortable and safe. Though she was forgetful and absentminded, laughter accompanied us along the way. Finally we met our two sets of grandpa
19、rents and enjoyed family happiness. This trip made me experience my mothers and familys love.2020浙江卷One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Ta
20、king pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of tho
21、se times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the woode
22、n fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his mas
23、sive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punish
24、ment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中
25、标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp._Paragraph 2At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._【答案】Paragraph 1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Mounting anger mingled with hunger overwhelming
26、 him, he smashed his paws frantically against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us. Panicked as we were, Elli and I squealed at the top of our lungs, waved our fists at him and stamped heavily on the ground in an attempt to intimidate and scare him away. To our dismay, all these efforts w
27、ere in vain. This sturdy bear relentlessly banged and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently on the verge of collapsing! This bulky and furious beast within a stones throw, I flinched back and huddled with Elli tightly. Chilly winds whipping our faces, I could hear nothing but the sound of our
28、 hearts throbbing violently in our chests.Paragraph 2At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The gusting wind from the hovering vehicle swept away our choking fear immediately. Out of the helicopter descended a rope to haul us up. Thrilled yet relieved, we clutched the rope and eventually lande
29、d on the helicopter safe and sound. While overlooking the chunky bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread. At this once-in-a-lifetime moment, I reached into my backpack and pulled out the camera, photo
30、graphing that impressive scene. Gazing at his broad back in the melting ice field, I wondered if it was the warmer planet that had forced the bear to hunt for food from the human regions.试题汇编湖南省永州市2021届高三第一次模拟阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell
31、 phone rang. A childs voice on the other end spoke to me softly, “Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number once again. I dont have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of calls nowadays, so I rep
32、lied rudely, “Youve dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung up right away rudely. I couldnt help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over and
33、over again?” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone rang up again. It was from the same girlIt seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my num
34、ber from time to time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right? Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take
35、care of me. She is tired out from looking after me. Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK?” The innocent request was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you. Dad, I am so. happy, so happy!”注意：
36、1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone _.I couldnt wait to ask the woman how her daughter was _.2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷11Mr. Plumbean lived on a street where all the houses were the same. He liked it that way. So did everyb
37、ody else on Mr. Plumbeans street. Then one day a seagull flew over Mr. Plumbeans house and made a big orange splot (斑块) on Mr. Plumbeans house.“Oh! Too bad!” everybody said. “Mr. Plumbean will have to paint his house again.”So Mr. Plumbean got some blue paint and some white paint, and that night he
38、got busy. He painted at night because it was cooler. When the paint was gone, the roof was blue. The walls were white. And the big orange splot was still there. Then he got some more paint. He got red paint, yellow paint, green paint, and purple paint.In the morning the other people on the street ca
39、me out of their houses. Their houses were all the same. But Mr. Plumbeans house was like a rainbow. It was like a jungle. It was like an explosion. There was the big orange splot. And there were little orange splots. There were stripes. There were pictures of elephants and lions and pretty girls and
40、 steam-shovels. That day Mr. Plumbean bought carpenters tools. That night he built a tower on top of his roof, and he painted a clock on the tower.At night the next day Mr. Plumbean got a truck full of green things. He planted palm trees, baobabs , bushes, and onions. When the other people came out
41、of their houses, they saw Mr. Plumbean swinging between two palm trees and Mr. Plumbean was drinking lemonade.Plumbean has gone too far! “Plumbean, what have you done to your house?” the people shouted.“My house is me and I am it. My house is where I like to be and it looks like all my dreams,” Mr.
42、Plumbean said.The people went away. They asked the man who lived next door to Mr. Plumbean to go and have a talk with him. “Tell him that we all liked it here before he changed his house. Tell him that his house has to be the same as ours so we can have a neat street.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1The man went to see Mr. Plumbean that evening._Paragraph 2Then, one by one, they went to see Mr. Plumbean, late at night._2021届山东临沂实验学校高考模拟卷12阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。I lay on my bed, legs leaning against the wall, desperately wishing my mo