1、 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. 课时课时 4 Writing 两态一线法写过去发生的事情两态一线法写过去发生的事情 两态指写作时主要运用两种时态：一般过去时和过去完成时。一线指以过去发生的事情为 主线。 参考词汇和句式参考词汇和句式 单词 luckily，unluckily，special，unusual，suddenly 短语 by the time，without doing sth，help with，on ones way to. 句式 主语+had+过去分词+其他 （2015新疆乌鲁木齐中考）同学们，在你的学习和生活中，一定经历过对你
2、来说很特殊的日子（开 心、感动、有趣、激动、难忘） 。请搜寻你的记忆长河，用英语记录下这个特殊的一天。 提示要点： 1. 对你来说哪一天是一个特殊的日子； 2. 在这一天，发生了什么事； 3. 你的感受、收获、对你的影响。 注意： 1. 书写清晰、字迹工整；行文流畅、语句通顺； 2. 词数：80 词左右； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。 A special day _ _ _ _ _ _ 【参考范文】【参考范文】 A special day Once, I was too excited to fall asleep because the next day would be m
3、y birthday. The next morning, by the time I got up, it had already been 7:00. I rushed to school without eating breakfast. Unluckily, a bike knocked me down on my way to school and the doctor told me that I had to stay in bed for a few days. I felt so sad. Luckily, my friends came to see me and help
4、ed me with my schoolwork. They also had a wonderful birthday party for me that evening. What a special day! 【名师点评】【名师点评】 本文运用了两态一线法写过去发生的事情。 两态一般过去时态、 过去完成时态； 一线我一天的经历。表达流畅，语言简洁，用词准确。 短语 too.to.，fall asleep，rush to，without eating breakfast，knock down，on my way to，stay in bed， help.with.等的使用，使叙述绘声绘色；
5、感叹句 What a special day!的运用将作者悲喜交加的感情表达得淋 漓尽致。 （一）（一） A. The good old days B. A wonderful _. 要求： 1. 请从所给的 A、B 两个题目中中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选 B 题，请把题目补充完整再作答， 例如：你可以写A wonderful friend, A wonderful vacation, A wonderful place, A wonderful gift等。 2. 注意紧扣主題，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。 3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名， 如： 使用名字， 请用Mike， Gina等英文
6、名字， 校名统一用 Guangming Middle School. 4. 词数不少于 60。 _ _ _ _ _ _ （二）（二） 假如你叫雷。下面的图画讲述了你和一位男孩在上周发生的事情。请根据图画写出一篇日记。日记的 开头已经给出(不计入词数)。 要求：1. 日记应包括图画中所有内容。可适当发挥,使短文完整、通顺。 2. 词数：60 词以上。 Tuesday October 8, 2013 Fine When I got to school this morning, _ _ _ _ _ （三）（三） 在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文汇
7、报 讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。 团队旅游 有导游，不会迷路 不必自己找旅馆 结识朋友，相互帮助 个人旅游 自由安排时间 选择自己喜欢的旅游景点 学会照顾自己 你的想法 注意：1. 文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节； 2. 想法至少在两句以上； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 词数：80100。 参考词汇：团队旅游 travel with a group；个人旅游 travel alone；安排 arrange Recently, we have discussed the ways to go traveling. Here is the result. Some stude
8、nts choose a travel with a group. _ _ _ _ 【参考范文】【参考范文】 （一）（一） A wonderful vacation My parents told me I had been to Qingdao when I was three years old, but I was too young to remember it. Qingdao is such a beautiful and clean city that we decided to visit there once more in the future. 【名师点评】【名师点评】
9、本文运用了两态一线法写过去发生的事情类作文。 两态一般过去时态、 过去完成时态； 一线游青岛的经历。行文连贯，表达清晰明了。 短语 too.to.，so.that.，decide to，had much fun，such.that.，once more 等的运用，使文章描述生 动，可读性强。 （二）（二） Tuesday October 8, 2013 Fine When I got to school this morning, I saw a little boy fall off his bike and lie on the road. He was badly hurt and co
10、uldnt move, so I carried him to the hospital. After school I bought some flowers to visit him. There I found that he was almost fine. The next day, by the time I got to school, the little boy had been there waiting for me for a long time. He said Thank you! to me. I was very happy, because I can hel
11、p others. I want to be a volunteer some day. 【名师点评】 此篇书面表达是以日记的形式介绍磊上学时发生的故事。由提示可知文章为一般过去时为主，写作时 按事件发生的顺序。注意动词过去式的构成。写作时使用了被动语态及主从复合句。 （三）（三） Recently, we have discussed the ways to go traveling. Here is the result. Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guides help, they wont get lost
12、and they dont need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while traveling. However, other students prefer to travel alone. Thats because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights. Whats more, its a chance for them to lo
13、ok after themselves. For me, Id like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like. In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better. 【名师点评】 本次作文为话题类作文，要求根据表的内容，用英语写一篇短文汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。 写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。 【写作亮点】 本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如 得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。